OS: Our Love Story Part A & B updated on pg-8

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Part A
hay ek sher hai toh duja sava sher ek dusre se haar hi nahi mante dono... hamesha ladne ko tyaar loved how the way Ram confessed hid love in one go & made Priya also to confess her feeling so smartly awww... love how Ram traped Priya when she was backing off from thier plan hhhaha RaYa's kid r so gud they r just like RaYa cute & awesome moving on next... ...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Part B
hay RaYa ki story bhi unhi ki tarha unque nikli just awesome loved how Ram played with Priya he actually told everything to her dad but hide it from her the tamasha she created... sach hi kaha Neha ne Ram ne khud k liye Sherni hi dhundhi hai awesome all will go for picnic together would love to one OS on that too... how RaYa romanced & kids enjoyed on thier vecations... do update on that if u can......

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anupam_dil

@anupam_dil

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

superb yaar i was 🤣🤣 while reading keep writing... thank you...

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Both the parts re awesome yaar.. 👏
Itna lengthy update..yeh tu hi hai na..ya tera account koi or use kar raha hai.. 😲 🤣 but i loved this lenghty update too.. 😛
Very sweet narration of their love story with kids comments, disappointment, laughter nd questions in btw.. 😆
Ram ka Priya ko stalk karna, their convo, Priya ka humesha ulta jawab dena, Ram ke plans.. 😆, confession bechare Neha- Vik ki almost broken engagement bcoz of these crazy love birds.. 😆..everything was too good.. 👏 ⭐️
Last part was so cute..omg Myra ko kitna zyada bussiness minded dikhaya..profit nd loss..🤣
Full of family moments nd RaYa.. 👏
Beautifully written nd perfect execution.. 👍🏼 ⭐️
Thanx for this lovely OS nd making us smile.. 🤗

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

both the parts were just awesome, loved reading it, its a nice romantic one, no melodrama no over emotion it is just as Peehu says ppperfect, I loved it, thanks for such good OS

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Mi_AmOR

@Mi_AmOR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

beautiful update...!!!👍🏼

their meet was jus awesome...

and ram ka accidnt lol...!!!😆

sherni hain sach mein...😆

superb confrssion...

nevik ka sagai barbad...🤣

ram and sudhir already a pair...lol...

priya ko ullu banaya...😆

and beaituful end...dhamki's by daughters...

keep writing more...😊

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Thx for the PM.

Wow brilliant RaYa yaar..

Ram following n proposed directly, priya ne bhaav khaaya , aise kasie haan kahegi kisi bhi ladke ko😆😆
bechaari Neha ko rula diya apne special day pe. 😆😆

Leg pulling is just oustanding enjoyed this OS to the fullest.

Awesome work...

Each and every dialogue was superb...👏

good job

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Very nice...enjoyed it..thanks fr pm

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

nice update

story ke saat this heading is perfect.our love story 😊

I like the way u presented the story.

bachho ka sawal karna aur Raya ka jawab dena...

aur ideas aate hai toh pesh karo ji muje achhi lagi

thanks for PM😊

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peeyara

@peeyara

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: sinalbest
Hi Naseem 😊

First one 😛 😉
this time too thanks for 2 pms.. 😆
Reg update.. superb one 👏 ⭐️
Full of masti & very entertaining.. 👏 ⭐️
Thanks for wonderful.OS.. 😊

this is second tym that u hv commented first on my post 👏 😊

thanks nhi chahiye, wapas lelo, kisi aur ko de dena😆

thank u for liking it😊