OS: Our Love Story Part A & B updated on pg-8 - Page 6

Originally posted by: peeyara

kya galt hai😆

itna confusing likha toh kaise samjhti...waise maine sahi samjha tha phir bhi tumse puchliye confirmation ke liye😊

Kuch nhi.. 😛
Okep i agree.. 😆 thats ok..

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Kuch nhi.. 😛
Okep i agree.. 😆 thats ok..

Originally posted by: peeyara

thank u😊

haan serial mai toh bahot kuch dikha sakte the but nahi dikhaya

let it be, jo dikha rahe hai wahi enjoy karte hai😆

Yes.. afterall wt oder option do v hv cz v love raya nd cant stop wtch BALH untill dey r der ... 😛

Originally posted by: peeyara

kya kuch nahi😆

Tera sir.. 😆 😆

Originally posted by: youandme272000

Yes.. afterall wt oder option do v hv cz v love raya nd cant stop wtch BALH untill dey r der ... 😛

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Tera sir.. 😆 😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

konse sir😕

maths sir, social sir, hindi sir, urdu sir, english sir😆😉

O god..tu pagal ho gyi hai 😆 or mujhe bhi kar degi.. 😆

Originally posted by: vironikajain

O god..tu pagal ho gyi hai 😆 or mujhe bhi kar degi.. 😆

Hi everyone! This is the second and last part of this OS. This update is very long, so I have to split it into two parts.next part within few minutes. Is update mai bhi shayad bahot kuch ulta seedha, illogical aur senseless hosakta hai. So coming back to story:

PART A:

Ram agrees to tell his n Priya's love story to his daughters. The all settled down near kitchen so that Priya too can be involved with them while cooking.

Peehu: Papa, aap ne mamma ko pehli bar kis jagah par dekha?

Ram: maine pehli bar Priya ko park mai dekha tha jahan mai jogging ke liye jaata tha

Pihu burst into laughter.

Ram confusedly: tum itna kyun has rahi ho?

Pihu still laughing: aap aur jogging?

Ram: haan mai jogging karta tha but shaadi ke baad tumhari ma ke haath ka khana kha kar aisa hogaya hoon

His daughters were still laughing; he looked at his wife and found her smiling too. This irked him.

Ram: tum logo ko yakeen nahi ho raha hai ab bhi

They shout in unison "no"

Ram: Priya tum batao na inhe, they are not trusting me yaar

Priya who was peeling potatoes: kahani aap suna rahe hai na toh aap hi batayie, mere paas already bahot kaam hai

Ram imitates her n goes from there. He brings a photo album with him. He shows his old pic to his daughters.

Pihu: wow papa, aap toh bahot handsome lag rahe ho is pic mai

Myra: toh papa shaadi ke baad aapki personality mai loss aur weight mai gain hua hai

But Pari complained: Papa aapne ye theek nahi kiya

Ram: now what?

Pari sadly: agar aap jogging nahi chodte toh aaj bhi aise hi dikhte aur mai apne friends ko proudly bolti k mere papa world ke most handsome papa hai

Now it was Priya's turn to laugh.

Ram stares her angrily: tumhe bahot hasi aarahi hai

Priya supressing her laugh: mai kaha has rahi hoon, focus on your task Mr. Kapoor, focus.

Ram turns to Pari: u r right, beta but ab aap apne friends ko kya bolte ho mere baare mai?

Pari wid a big smile on her face: yehi k my papa is the world's most cutest n sweetest papa

Ram's lips too curves into a big smile n he kisses Pari lovingly.

Pihu: papa aagey batayie na

Ram: ok... So, mai jis park mai jogging ke liye jaata tha waha par mere ek friend the jo aapke nanu hai, hum roz milte the aur phir ek din aapki mamma bhi park mai aayi thi

Ram who was talking with Sudhir founds a girl waving her hand at him. He ignored for few times but girl kept waving her hand to grab attention. Ram too waved back his hand. The girl signalled him to call sudhir. Ram followed her instructions.

Ram to sudhir: sir, wo ladki aapko bula rahi hai pointing towards girl.

Sudhir looks in that direction n says, "wo meri beti hai, Priya... Priya Sharma, bataya tha na tumhe; mujhe leni aayi hai, mai chalta hoon, kal milte hai, bye"

Ram: bye sir

Sudhir n Priya goes from there n Ram keeps looking at them until they disappeared from his sight.

Myra: aap ne mamma se baat nahi ki

Ram: tab nahi ki but ek mahine baad ki

Peehu in surprise: ek mahine tak kya kiya aap ne?

Ram: peecha kiya aap ki mamma

Pari: aap ne mamma ko stalk kiya

Ram: kind of

Ram did saw Priya twice or thrice after their first meet. He came to know about Priya from Sudhir who keeps praising his daughter. In the same manner, he used to speak about Ram oftenly with Priya. Ram fell for Priya but he didn't have guts to confess. He used to follow her where ever she goes. Priya was aware of this n she too liked Ram following her. One day Ram gathered courage to pour his heart infront of Priya.

One day he approached Priya.

Ram hesitatingly: Hi

Priya: ji boliye

Ram: aap ka naam Priya hai na?

Priya casually: kyu accha nahi hai

Ram hesitatingly: nahi bahot accha, wo mai keh raha tha

Priya was enjoying his condition. She asks him, "kahiye na"

Ram: kya hum wahan(pointing to restaurant) baith kar baat karsakte hai?

Priya thinks for a while n says: ok ,sirf 15 mins

Ram was very happy as if he has conquered world.

They ordered for coffee n Ram starts his conversation.

Ram: I Love You Priya

Priya was shocked at this; she never imagined that Ram will propose her this way. On other hand, Ram was waiting for her reply.

"ye aur kitna intezar karwayegi, 5 min toh hogaye aur 10 min baad toh yahan se chali jayegi, agar bina jawab diye chali gayi toh, nooo... mai ye nahi hone dunga", Ram thinks to himself.

Ram in a low voice: kya jawab hai aap ka?

Priya compose herself: mai aise kaise jawab de sakti hoon, meri life ka sawal hai aur phir mujhe aap ke baare mai kuch nahi pata

Ram thinks, "kitna jhoot bol rahi hai, mai pichle ek mahine se iska peecha kar raha hoon aur isey mere baare mai kuch nahi pata"

Ram: mera naam Ram Kapoor hai, Kapoor Industries ka owner, shayad kabhi suna hoga ya padha hoga

Priya excitedly: toh aap hai The Ram Kapoor

Ram: ji mai hi hoon... Meri ek ma hai

Priya: aam tor pe sab ki ek hi maa hoti hai

Ram was losing his patience but he composed himself aakhir dil ka mamla hai aur phir shaadi ke baad toh poori life jhelna hai Priya ko toh abhi kyu nahi

Ram continued: ek behen hai Natasha, jo Paris mai fashion designing kar rahi hai aur ma usi ke saath rehti hai and i have two friends Vikram n Neha

Priya: sirf do dost?

Ram: ye do hi 200 ke barabar hai, in dono ke hote huye mujhe kisi aur dost ki zaroorat nahi hai

Priya: rehte kahan ho?

Ram cheekily: aam tor pe log ghar mai rehte hai

Priya gives a stern smile to him: aap ko dekh kar laga k shayad aap jungle mai rehte ho, isiliye puch liya

Ram thinks, " is ladki se jeetna toh impossible hai"

Ram gives his full address to her n asks: ab toh aapko mere baare mai sab pata hai, kya jawab hai aap ka?

Priya: arey aap toh peeche hi padh gaye, pyar hai halwa thodi na hai, thoda waqt dijiye sochne ka...toh mai chalti hoon, bye

Ram sadly: bye

Priya smilingly: thanks for the coffee

Pari: mamma aap ne papa ko No bola

Priya: maine No thodi na bola

Myra: aap ne Yes bhi toh nahi kaha na

Priya explains: pehli mulaqat mai aise kisi ko bhi haan thodi na bol sakti hoon

Peehu disappointedly: wo koi bhi thodi na the papa hi toh the

Priya smiles at her question: par mamma ko thodi na pata tha k wo aap ke papa hai

Peehu: phir bhi mamma

Ram n Priya smiles at their daughters' disappointment.

Pari: phir kya kiya aapne papa?

Ram: agar aapki mamma ziddi hai toh aap ke papa bhi toh smart hai na, unhe acche se pata hai k aap ki mamma ko kaise handle karna hai

Priya was very sad after her coffee date with Ram because after their meeting Ram stopped following her. Since two days she didn't saw Ram n it was bothering her like hell. She decided to speak to Sudhir about Ram but how?

Priya brings a glass of water for Sudhir who just came home after jogging.

Priya: kya baat hai papa aap 2-3 din se jaldi aa rahe ho jogging se

Sudhir: haan beta wo Ram nahi aa raha hai na park mai isiliye

Priya: kyu nahi aa rahe hai wo?

Sudhir: do din pehle uska accident hua aur uske sar aur pair mai kafi chot aayi hai

Priya anxiously: kahan, kab, kaise?

Sudhir: pata nahi beta, ghar par bhi koi nahi hai uske jo uska khayal rakh sake

Priya grabs the keys of her car n bids bye to her father.

Sudhir: kahan ja rahi ho beta?

Priya: apni friends ke saath movie dekhne, mujhe aane mai late hojayega...bye papa

Sudhir: bye beta

Sudhir to himself, "ye ladki hai ya toofan, hamesha jaldi mai rehti hai"

Priya reaches Kapoor Mansion, Bansi kaka sees her entering the home n he informs the same to Ram.

BK: Sir, aap ne jis ladki ka photo dikhaya tha wo aa rahi hai

Ram excitedly: Priya aa rahi hai

BK: yes sir

Ram: mere bandages toh theek hai na

BK: haan sir

Ram: ok ab aap jakar kahi chup jayie aur mai jab tak na kaho bahar mat aana.

BK goes from there n Ram adjusts himself on bed. Priya enters his room.

Priya: hi

Ram: arey aap yahan?

Priya: wo papa se pata chala accident ke baare mai toh dekhne chali aayi

Ram: thanks for your concern

Priya: ab kaise hai aap?

Ram: theek hoon

They remain silent for few minutes.

Priya: toh mai chalti hoon

Ram thinks, "itni jaldi, no ways"

Ram: kya aap us drawer se meri medicines dengi?

Priya: ya sure

Ram: sorry to bother you, wo kya hai na mere servants aaj abhi tak nahi aaye hai

Ram takes water to take medicines but Priya stops him.

Priya: ek min, aap ne breakfast kiya hai

Ram: nahi kia

Priya: bina breakfast ke aap dawai kaise lenge, mai aap ke liye soup bana do?

Ram's heart was dancing, controlling his excitement, "agar aap ko theek lage toh"

Priya: kitchen kahan par hai?

Ram: neeche ja kar left

Priya: ok, mai abhi aati hoon

Ram was very happy seeing Priya's care towards him. He came out from his dreams when his cell started ringing. The call was from Vikram.

Ram: hello Vikram

Vikram: kya hello, do din se ghar pe baitha hua hai kisi pagal ladki ke liye aur poore kaam ka burden mujh pe dal diya hai, upar se Neha ne mera dimagkharab kar rakha k mai usey avoid kar raha hoon; wo ladki nahi aane wali, tu office aa aur apni meetings khud attend kar

Ram: tera hogaya toh mai kuch bolu

Vikram: puch kyu raha hai, bol na

Ramexcitedly: Priya aayi hai mujhse milne

Vikram: kya bol raha tu, wo sach mai aayi hai, tere saath mai hai kya

Ram blushingly: wo kitchen mai mere liye soup bana rahi hai

Vikram: bechari ki mehnat waste hojayegi, tujhe toh soup pasand nahi hai

Ram: toh kya hua, wo mere liye pehli bar kuch bana rahi hai, mai soup pee lunga

Vikram: sahi hai beta tu toh enjoy kar raha hai aur yahan Neha mujhse baat bhi nahi kar rahi hai, sab teri wajah se

Ram: aaj manage karle, mai Neha ko samjha dunga

Priya brings fruits for Ram thinking that he'll eat them till she prepares soup. She heard Ram speaking to someone on phone, "agar Priya ne mujhe aise baat karte dekh liya toh usey pata chal jayega k mera koi accident nahi hua hai"

Priya stood perplexed listening this. Priya murmurs, "toh ye sab natak hai aur mai pagalon ki tarha pareshan ho rahi thi"

Priya enters the room n sweetly asks Ram, "aapka accident kahan aur kaise huwa"

Ram who was comfortably lying on bed searches for reason n replies, "wo mai...highway...truck"

Priya angrily: koi accident hua hoga toh bataenge na, You liar

saying this, she slams the fruit tray on Ram's legs and moves out of the room. Ram, successfully catches her near the main entrance of KM.

Ram holding his ears: i am sorry

Priya: aisa mazak koi karta hai kya, mai kitna darr gayi thi, mujhe fikr horahi thi

Ram: tumhe meri fikr ho rahi thi?

Priya: nahi jis gaadi se accident hua us gaadi ki fikr ho rahi thi,jahan accident hua us road ki fikr ho rahi thi... obviously aap ki fikr ho rahi thi

Ram: par kyun?

Priya slaps her forehead: kyunki mai aap se pyar karti hoon, I Love You

Ram couldn't believe his ears, "phir se kaho"

Priya: because I Love You

Ram: phir ek bar

Priya shouts: I Love You

Ram: ek aur bar

Priya was now angry: kal ke news paper mai chapwa deti hoon ya Radio pe broadcast karwa du ya phir news channel pe telecast karwa du

Ram sheepishly: uski zaroorat nahi hai, actually mujhe yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai toh please ek aur bar

Priya smiles at his request: u hv gone mad

Ram smilingly: please

Priya again says I Love You and hugs him tightly.

Peehu: aap ne mamma se jhoot bola

Myra: di business mai apne fayde ke liye bola hua jhoot, jhoot nahi hota

Pari: par papa business thodi na kar rahe the, jhoot toh nahi bolna chahiye na mumma

Priya explains: haan but papa ke intentions toh galat nahi the na

Peehu: aap ki aur mamma ki shaadi kab huyi

Ram: hamari shaadi kab huyi? hmmm

After their confession, Ram n Priya dated each other for 6 months. One fine day, Ram proposed Priya for marriage.

Ram: will you marry me?

Priya: nahi, mai toh pichle 6 mahine se time pass kar rahi hoon; ofcourse aap se hi shaadi karungi

Ram: kabhi seedha jawab nahi de sakti

Priya: aap sawal hi aise puchte ho; anyways hame ab shaadi kar leni chahiye, mai bhi roz aap se milne ke liye papa ko jhoot bolkar thak gayi hoon

Ram: tum jhoot bolkar mujhse milne aati hoon?

Priya sarcastically: nahi mai papa ko bolti hoon k mai apne boyfriend se milne ja rahi hoon aur papa mujhe " have fun" bolkar permission dete hai

Ram smiles: u r impossible Priya

Priya: kuch socha hai papa ko kaise batana hai

Ram: wahi soch raha hoon

Priya: mere paas ek idea hai

Ram: batao na

Priya: kal mai papa ko park jaane se rok dungi aur aap papa ka haal chal puchne chale aana, mai mauka dekh kar papa ko bata dungi k mai aap ko acche se janti honn, mai aap se pyar karti hoon aur aap se shaadi karna chahti hoon

Ram: brialliant! mai kal subah tumhare ghar aa jaonga, toh kal milte hai...bye

Priya: bye, love you

Ram: love you too

Both starts for their respective homes.

Next day, as planned Priya make sure that Sudhir dont go to park and Ram came to meet Sudhir.

Sudhir: arey Ram beta tum yahan kaise?

Ram: wo yahan se guzar raha tha toh socha aap se mil lu aur aap se kuch baat bhi karni thi

In the meantime Priya comes with tea. Sudhir introduces them to each other.

Sudhir: Priya ye Ram hai bataya tha na maine aur Ram ye meri beti Priya hai

Priya: hi

Ram smilingly: hello

Ram was continuously looking at Priya but Priya was ignoring him.

Sudhir to Priya: tum khadi kyu ho beta, baitho hamare saath

Priya: no papa, i am getting late, mere dost mera wait kar rahe hai

Ram was shocked hearing this. It was Priya only who invited him to her home and assured him that she'll speak to her father about them but now she has taken a complete u-turn.

Ram thinks, "ab dekho Priya mai kya karta hoon"

Sudhir to Ram: beta tum kuch bata rahe the

Ram: wo sir, parso meri sagai hai

Priya, who was going out, came n sit with them.

Sudhir confusedly: Priya tum toh kahin ja rahi thi na

Priya: papa mai dosto se toh roz milti hoon, ek din nahi milungi toh chalega

Sudhir smiled at her, Ram was happy that his plan was working. Priya was trying to understand what Ram is going to do. She was trying to grab Ram's attention but he was ignoring her.

Ram supressing his smile: sir, agar aap meri sagai mai aayenge toh mujhe khushi hogi

Sudhir: ofcourse beta, mai zaroor aaonga

Priya was confusedly looking at them, "Ram ko ho kya gaya hai, mazak kar rahe hai kya mere saath"

Ram's voice brings back Priya to reality.

Ram: Priya ji

Priya: ji

Ram: agar aap bhi meri sagai mai aayi toh mujhe aur meri mangetar ko bahot khushi hogi, u'll come na

Priya controlling her anger: ofcourse i'll come

Priya wanted to have some words with Ram but Ram smartly goes away from her house leaving her in dilemma.

continuation below 😊