OS: Our Love Story Part A & B updated on pg-8 - Page 9

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

part b

Superb yaar
So beautifully written
So much masti btw raya and kids
Kaash serial main isa hotha
Thanks for pm
Cont soon

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Fantastic dear..Both parts are soo good. Aise hi likthe rehna

Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: kaparikh1

Awww...That was a super cuteee update...while reading there a constant smile on my face...I just loved it...Too good...Lovely...👏

Thank u for the PM...Loved it...🤗

Originally posted by: tulshan1989

Both the part was nice and thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: luvbalh

aww i just love it.. thanks for such a lovely OS .. it is simply awesome.. nice story ,, simply raya style .. NOK -JHOK bhi hai .. well done sad it is over

Originally posted by: youandme272000

Superb.. lovely story... 👏
I thought u vil keep d raya story same bt dis is also good 😊

Originally posted by: leena04

Part 1
awww no logic no sences yet perfect family & perfect love story i must say it was the best... i loved how girls encountered Ram & make him to take permission from Priya & Ram's tesing & damki to Priya over Neha awww so sweet... then Pihu's yeh papa ki jaan hai hay kina maza aaya hoga Priya ki tang khichne me Neha aur Nats ko so sweet... & then at last RaYa's similiarty in thier girl was the best loved the part a lot wish they had took Priya too with them... but moving on next to read... ...

This was such a sweet love story... Loved Ram being Priya's stalker... It was a very unique love story... I especially loved how Ram and Priya teased each other... Ram's love confession was very cute I could just picture that scene and Priya's love confession was very nice too! ... very cute. Both parts were written beautifully and a beautiful portrayal of a perfect family :-)

It was very nice to read something sweet like this especially considering what is being shown on TV.

Thanks for the PM, and sorry for the late comment! So sad it's finished, even though you gave a long update I still didn't want it to end! :-(

Its too gud totally hattke liked it very much no pain no sadness only love with total fun..simple bt desi love story nd family story too..enjoyed it very much..waitting 4 ur next writting..thanks i pm

Absolutely loved this witty love story! Everyone played their parts like their characters in BALH. Kudos to you for your creativity and for penning it down👏And for sharing with us. Please do write more stories😃