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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 123fiza1


beautifully written...lovely update with raya romance 😳
love all d raya moments : haldi mehndi n change room scene☺️
d way priya understand saumya was very nice n their bonding is too spcl...
Thanks fr d pm n update soon..
I didnt find it much lengthy...infact didnt realise when it came to an end...



thanks for commenting😊, Priya actually felt her silence that's why she helped her, thanks for liking, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Just Wonderful. Loved every description of the shaadi rasm with a pinch of Raya romance.


Thanks for the pm.



thanks for commenting😊, am glad u liked it, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Awesome update..
Every Rasm of shaadi was beautifully described.. 👏 these little details nd the way u create nd describe the atmosphere of a scene through words..just fab 👏
Ram's constant staring, stealing glances at each other, haldi, Mehndi nd ofcourse Room mein..loved all the RaYa moments 😳
Convo btw Priya nd Soumya..how Priya understood nd made her calm down..their bond..one of the best scene nd nicely penned down.. 👍🏼
Neha is always there to tease Priya..bahot mazze leti hai..😆 ab Ram ki nazare hi nhi hatengi Priya se toh Neha ko toh mauka milega hi😛
Is Ram was serious about Remarriage with Priya?? 😉
Looking forward to Marriage nd Karwachauth..
Thanx for pm..




thanks for commenting😊, am happy that u like it, RaYa love is in the air😉, I wanted to show the scene b/w Saumya and Priya, coz its very natural, wahi toh problem hain ki Ram kahin bhi shuru ho jaate hain, Ram ka bas chaale toh he won't mind getting remarried to Priya😛, can assure more RaYa moments in marriage and KC, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

WHILE READING THESE R NOT FADING FROM MY FACE😃



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tulshan1989

lovely update raya romance is always on and neha always tease priya

last rishabh and saumya are getting married
priya beautifully make saumya understand
continue soon and thanx for the pm



thanks for commenting😊, actually RaYa romance is in the air only, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: youandme272000

U xplain d scenes really well.. all rasams ver penned dwn aptly nt too long nt too short..
And raya romancd was too good jst keep giving us more nd more nd trust me chahe kitni he long update kyun na ho agar usme raya romance he to vo short he lagti he 😉
So continue soon... 😊



thanks for commenting😊, thanks for liking it, am happy that length didn't bothered u
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs



can just tell u now that next part will be HOT one, nothing more can I divulge 😉


not fair yaar have to wait for ur 2 preview then ur update which will be after an week😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx for the Pm.

Well its such a nice narration of the story -as if the whole scene takes place in front of ur eyes, all the rituals, ceremonies and the linked parts like getting ready, guys chatting at the corner. just too good.
Well priyaji ne aakhir kaar Ram ke naam apne hatheli pe daal hi liya, kyon na ho jiski har pal ki ehsaas mein wo ho, har khushi usse judi ho to uske khushi ke liye haath mein mehend to kisi bhi tarah se laga hi legi, this is the most wonerful relation they share, they know how to reciprocate and respect each others feeling n try to feel the other one special.Yahi hai rishte ki khoobsurati. just fab.
The most touching part was Priya n Soumya's conversation-yup indeed every girl go through this nervousness n bechaini its written beautifully.
Neha toh neha hai, usko tease kiye bina chain nahi aata, ye ram aur priya apne feelings uske saamne chupa bhi nahi sakte, jassos hai wo puri.Jab itna ek dusre ko aankhoan hi aankhoan mein dekhoge toh ACP neha ke aankhoan se kaise bachoge raya.😆😆
Fab...




thanks for commenting😊, pleasure is all mine, I tried to make a picture in front of the readers eyes through my narration, RaYa ki rishten ki khobsurati unn dono me hi hain, actually they complement each other so well which in turn reflect in their relation, I wanted to show that through Saumya-Priya's convo, Ram actually apne aap ko chhupa nahi pata aur Priya ka bhi kuch aisa hi haal hain😉, iss baat ka fayda Neha uthati hain😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shavii


not fair yaar have to wait for ur 2 preview then ur update which will be after an week😭



agar kuch achha chahiye toh uske liye u have to wait, waise bhi u will get some glimpse of it in previews so keep reading😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs



agar kuch achha chahiye toh uske liye u have to wait, waise bhi u will get some glimpse of it in previews so keep reading😉



phir bhi have to wait for an whole week

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