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Posted: 11 years ago

beautifully written...lovely update with raya romance 😳
love all d raya moments : haldi mehndi n change room scene☺️
d way priya understand saumya was very nice n their bonding is too spcl...
Thanks fr d pm n update soon..
I didnt find it much lengthy...infact didnt realise when it came to an end...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just Wonderful. Loved every description of the shaadi rasm with a pinch of Raya romance.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..
Every Rasm of shaadi was beautifully described.. 👏 these little details nd the way u create nd describe the atmosphere of a scene through words..just fab 👏
Ram's constant staring, stealing glances at each other, haldi, Mehndi nd ofcourse Room mein..loved all the RaYa moments 😳
Convo btw Priya nd Soumya..how Priya understood nd made her calm down..their bond..one of the best scene nd nicely penned down.. 👍🏼
Neha is always there to tease Priya..bahot mazze leti hai..😆 ab Ram ki nazare hi nhi hatengi Priya se toh Neha ko toh mauka milega hi😛
Is Ram was serious about Remarriage with Priya?? 😉
Looking forward to Marriage nd Karwachauth..
Thanx for pm..
Edited by vironikajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
WHILE READING THESE R NOT FADING FROM MY FACE😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update raya romance is always on and neha always tease priya
last rishabh and saumya are getting married
priya beautifully make saumya understand
continue soon and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
U xplain d scenes really well.. all rasams ver penned dwn aptly nt too long nt too short..
And raya romancd was too good jst keep giving us more nd more nd trust me chahe kitni he long update kyun na ho agar usme raya romance he to vo short he lagti he 😉
So continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thx for the Pm.
Well its such a nice narration of the story -as if the whole scene takes place in front of ur eyes, all the rituals, ceremonies and the linked parts like getting ready, guys chatting at the corner. just too good.
Well priyaji ne aakhir kaar Ram ke naam apne hatheli pe daal hi liya, kyon na ho jiski har pal ki ehsaas mein wo ho, har khushi usse judi ho to uske khushi ke liye haath mein mehend to kisi bhi tarah se laga hi legi, this is the most wonerful relation they share, they know how to reciprocate and respect each others feeling n try to feel the other one special.Yahi hai rishte ki khoobsurati. just fab.
The most touching part was Priya n Soumya's conversation-yup indeed every girl go through this nervousness n bechaini its written beautifully.
Neha toh neha hai, usko tease kiye bina chain nahi aata, ye ram aur priya apne feelings uske saamne chupa bhi nahi sakte, jassos hai wo puri.Jab itna ek dusre ko aankhoan hi aankhoan mein dekhoge toh ACP neha ke aankhoan se kaise bachoge raya.😆😆
Fab...
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Posted: 11 years ago

take a bow yaar ..full on raya ..thank u thank u very much as u kept ur promise ..so ye dil mange more ..

Thank u for ur pm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs



thanks for commenting😊, am really happy that u liked the part, I tried to give their moments as unique as possible, they are so good that I can't keep myself from making them drenched in love, 😉, yes some twist is coming on the way which will change the course of the story but with it more RaYa romance is also on the way so keep reading and enjoying





mujhe lagta hai Pihu hi aane wali hai... wowoowwo plz bring her soon yaar dying to see her nuatiness once again... TFS... do connt soon... ...
Edited by leena04 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Previwe 1
hay hay kya Previwe hai Shipra wants her grand child soon hope her wish fulfills soon... aur RaYa ka romance is on peak hay mar javan is RaYa par toh main so gud awesome... TFS... ...

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