OS*Pehli Barish*updated Part-5 pg-37

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@bpatil3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: sinalbest

And I am hungry..😉😆..
Thanks..😊.. Where is ur lines..😉

shabd hi nahi rahe-to kya likhoo

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Its simply out standing..i have no words to express.. 👏 👏
Sahi or galat..sab kuch hum par or humare chizo ko dekhne ke nazariye pe depend karta hai..agar humne kuch sacche dil se or acha soch kar kiya hai toh wo kabhi galat nhi ho sakta chahe phir koi kuch bhi kahe...
Pain of both ram nd priya is awesomly portrayed.. 👏
Eb bar phir wahi jagah, wahi barish, wahi ram- priya jaha se unki kahani shuru hui thi wahi se unki zindagi ki yeh nayi or khoobsurat shuruwat hui hai...perfect nd very beautifull ending.. 👏
Loved it to the core...thank u for this beautifull OS.. 😊

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lpsakshi

@lpsakshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

yes dear suprb end loved it so so touching

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

thanks for clearing my doubt...an awesome update in its own way, the tug of war b/w right and wrong is superbly described, its more a social issue, we Indians believe in the institution of marriage and believes love happens only between husband and wife not between a boy and girl, that's why it was said marriage is done to procure a family, but over the years the concept has changed and thus love marriage and live-in relation have come up but still deep down we believe in the sanctity of arranged marriage, am not here to give sermons, just shared my views, but does that mean the people who are immensely in love with each other when break the rules of society committed a crime?, I guess we all know the answer, its just that we need to understand the situation, I don't think RaYa has done any wrong after all its love that binds every relation, a marriage without love is also a type of bondage which is considered to be a crime...sorry I became very vocal about social issues, can't help it, being student of Sociology I simply can't resist myself...nevertheless the ending was beautiful and I just loved it, do continue writing such stuff 👏 👍🏼

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Mi_AmOR

@Mi_AmOR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Simply superb...!!!
The letter was emotional...
Raya ka milan...wah...gud...

More writings pls...

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: sinalbest

And I am hungry..😉😆..
Thanks..😊.. Where is ur lines..😉

Hi Sagar as promised i m here with my lines:

tujhe paane ki aarzoo thi iss dil mein,

tujhe choone ki justju thi mann mein.

khamosh thi dil, tan thi madhosh,

jaane hum kaha kho gaye.

ruki thi dhadkan, thami thi saans,

jaane kaha hum beh gaye.

hontoan ki hasi,chehre ki khamoshi,

main bhi teri chahat ki pyaasi.

dil ki maani, dil ki suni,

jaanina wo galat tha, ya sahi.

hosh mein jab aaye , dil toota tha,

dimaag gehri soch mein baitha tha.

dil-dimaag se sangharsh kar raha tha,

galti ka ehsaas tha, ya wo darr tha?.

seema ya bandhan, kya humne toda,

zindagi ne humein kiss aur moda.

kismat kaha le humein choda,

wo pyar hi tha na jisne humein joda?

tujhe dhoond rahi thi meri aankhein,

jab tak door the,na jhapki thi palke.

ummed ki leher thi, asha ki kirnein,

koi aur chah rahi na tumhe paake.

wahi samay tha, wahi baarish thi,

tumse milne ki aas thi.

wahi jagah tha, jaha tum mili thi,

tumse meri har khushi judi thi.

baarish hi toda tha maryada,

baarish hi bandha hai bandhan mein.

tab bhi dil juda tha, aaj bhi hai,

phir kyon wo galat tha, ye sahi?

na jaanu mein sahi ko,na samjhu mein galat kya,

na ye sach hai,na wo jhooth tha.

bas tha to sirf pyar aur mohabbat.

ab ye sahi hai,tab kyon galat tha?

sochte reh jaavu mein,

sahi path pe chalu mein.

yahi thi meri kahani,

reet hai wahi purani.

Hope i am able justify the update sagar, like to hear from u.

Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago

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SharmiRayaBasu

@SharmiRayaBasu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Amazing u r...jst woww...take a bow dear...fantastic journey with ur os...nd i respect priya's decision..bcoz i know i m 4m thz generation..bt i love i respect thz indian tradition..nd i also apply thz in my life too..very gud to see ur respect ur love 4 indian tradition...nd 4 thz if any1 call me tht u r backdated..toh i dnt mind..jst dnt care..waiting 4 a new writting with ur lots of love nd respect

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
thanks for clearing my doubt...an awesome update in its own way, the tug of war b/w right and wrong is superbly described, its more a social issue, we Indians believe in the institution of marriage and believes love happens only between husband and wife not between a boy and girl, that's why it was said marriage is done to procure a family, but over the years the concept has changed and thus love marriage and live-in relation have come up but still deep down we believe in the sanctity of arranged marriage, am not here to give sermons, just shared my views, but does that mean the people who are immensely in love with each other when break the rules of society committed a crime?, I guess we all know the answer, its just that we need to understand the situation, I don't think RaYa has done any wrong after all its love that binds every relation, a marriage without love is also a type of bondage which is considered to be a crime...sorry I became very vocal about social issues, can't help it, being student of Sociology I simply can't resist myself...nevertheless the ending was beautiful and I just loved it, do continue writing such stuff 👏 👍🏼

👍🏼 rightly said.

Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago