SS**Dard ka Rishta** updated part-8 PG-64

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.sangs123.

@.sangs123.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

awesome updt sagar 👏
the fear of ram
his caring for priya and his coming child is
nicely potrayed ⭐️
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
@ bpatil
I just love ur comments. Mere mann ki bath tum aasani se likh deti ho. Main aisa nahi likh sakthi kyunki I am not a hindi speaking person and I have two little kids who consume all my time. But really ur EQ is soo good. Always happy to read ur comments.
@ sinalbest
Sorry yaar tumhare ff ki thread mein main mere baath uske saath share ki and thank u for the same.

Hey @lalmadhu hi its Malati. Thanks for reading and liking my comments.🤗

Even its difficult for me too to write in Hindi as I also learnt watching hindi in TV serials n I m from karnataka. thx😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: lpsakshi
thanks for pm -- U r welcome 😊
nd very very goood one loved it- Thank u 😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

nahi abhi toh Ram ko strong banna hi padega, because abhi toh ek aur resposibility hai.
priya strong hai kyun...kyunki aap khud show kar rahe hai😛

Wait & watch..😉 U will see how strong Priya is..😉

ram will be soon shown as strong..😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: 123fiza1
Amazing write up sagar...- Thank u😊
Gd news for raya..- Yep 😉.
Thanks for pm...- U r welcome..😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Ukppriyafan
lovely update--- Thank u 😊
loved every part of it-- Thank u 😊
thanks for the pm- U r welcome 😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Hey Sagar

Of course men are stronger physically but when it comes to dil ki batein aksar they feel weak. Yup i also believe that, its always to face the fear in group rather than facing single, agar aap akele face karoge to darr lagne lagega par koi aur aap ke saath mein rahega share karne ke liye obviously ek himmat si rahegi. thats all.== True words..👏👏 Moreover form the beginning you portrayed Priya as a strong woman wehn compared to ram i think , if read ur SS properly.😊

@Bold- I think u havnt seen the basic concept of this story..😉 I have shown that its not easy for man to forget their first love..😊 Generally its shown that for man its easy to leave past & go ahead..😊

But in this story.. Ram is emotionally weak.. bcz he have seen his first love dying in front of his eyes..

Priya is not strong but she is showing that.. She has start believing that now happiness is waiting for her life.. whereas Ram has still fear of lossing everything... By this u can understand what depth of LOve I am showing through Ram's character..😉

And if u all are not liking Ram's weak point..

Then let me know .. I will try to change story line... 😊

As I will show his strongness after some updates..😊 but only if u all have no problem..otherwise will show it directly..😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Beautifully written, as usual.-- Thank u 😊
Iss khushi ko mehsus karna aur batne ke liye intezaar karna ye sab tumhari writings mein aur be khoobsurat lagne lagi- Thank u 😛 love the line..😛
Thanks for the pm.- U r welcome..😊

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
@ bpatil
I just love ur comments. Mere mann ki bath tum aasani se likh deti ho. Main aisa nahi likh sakthi kyunki I am not a hindi speaking person and I have two little kids who consume all my time. But really ur EQ is soo good. Always happy to read ur comments.
@ sinalbest
Sorry yaar tumhare ff ki thread mein main mere baath uske saath share ki and thank u for the same.

U can call me Sagar..😊

Dont be Sry..😊 She have given very well comments..👏 Even ur comments are very good..👏

For a writer its best when he gets the comment..😛 Seriously guys I have no idea that i will get wonderful comments ever..😛 Thank u so much guys..😛😊😃...

Just to read ur comments guys I am updating regularly... so greedy..😉😆...

Otherwise I am very lazy..😉.. And busy too..😔

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: Dsudipa
Hey Sagar thx 4 PM- U r welcome 😊
now Priya is pregnant 👏👏
u written beautifully- Thank u 😊
pls continue soon- sure..😛