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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

superb, Ram aur Priya dono hi ek dusre ke kareeb aa raha hain, and the way they are coming is very natural and realistic, I liked this part, plz continue ASAP

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Superbb nd emotional update..i can very well feel the pain of seeing a love one in this state nd fear of lossing them..
Ram nd priya both understands nd can feel each others pain bcoz of which they re coming closer nd find solace when they re together..
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Very nicely shaping up. Waiting to read more. Please continue soon.

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

very emotional update

beautifully written

looking frwd d nxt

pls continue soon

thx 4 PM

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

part 6

awesome update hai yaar too gud RaYa has got so much mixed up with each other... Ram pourd his heart out to Priya i m sure Soon Priya will also starts to trust on Ram & will let him know her past but right now i m njoying this it was thouchy & emotinal epi loved it waiting for next do post next soon...

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jeena1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Guys,i dont know me ye story kitni achhi he ya buri but ye najar araha he ki aplog ise pasand nahi karrahe,so me sochhraha hun ise band kardun ab me sirf os likhungi.I dont think this story will go well without ur support as i feel i lost my track.

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Mi_AmOR

@Mi_AmOR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: jeena1993
Guys,i dont know me ye story kitni achhi he ya buri but ye najar araha he ki aplog ise pasand nahi karrahe,so me sochhraha hun ise band kardun ab me sirf os likhungi.I dont think this story will go well without ur support as i feel i lost my track.

hy pls cntnue...loving the prsnt trck...
Pls...

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: jeena1993
Guys,i dont know me ye story kitni achhi he ya buri but ye najar araha he ki aplog ise pasand nahi karrahe,so me sochhraha hun ise band kardun ab me sirf os likhungi.I dont think this story will go well without ur support as i feel i lost my track.

don't do this dear, am enjoying the present track, abhi abhi toh, Ram air Priya pass aa rahe the, the emotional bond was developing, don't stop your writing, u take ur time but plz don't end it abruptly, I request u to continue, pleaseee

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: jeena1993
Guys,i dont know me ye story kitni achhi he ya buri but ye najar araha he ki aplog ise pasand nahi karrahe,so me sochhraha hun ise band kardun ab me sirf os likhungi.I dont think this story will go well without ur support as i feel i lost my track.

Dont do this yaar..abhi abhi toh raya paas ana shuru hue hai unme strong bond ban raha hai..i m loving this story..plz cont it..its a request