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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

I was mesmerized by the depiction of beautiful Nainital, it seemed I was there and enjoying with all of them, very good update, I enjoyed thoroughly, and now Raya have become friends this update has become more special, I hope jaldi se Priya ko bhi pata chale ki she loves Ram and both express their feelings, continue ASAP

Thanks,sab apki meherbani he apki london description se prabhabit hoke hum thoda bahat koshis kia achha laga apko thats enough.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Sorry for the late rply..
Wonderfull update dear..description of naintal nd its beauty is mindblowing..i thoroughly enjoyed it...now raya have also became frnds nd ram has realised his feeling hope priya also realise soon..
Cont soon nd thanx fir pm

Thanks,late hi sahi reply to diya ar enjoy kia kafi he,hn priya ko ehsas honese pehle jabardast jalan hogi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: janima

Interesting!! lovely update..

plz con't soon

Thanks,will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: jeena1993


Thanks,late hi sahi reply to diya ar enjoy kia kafi he,hn priya ko ehsas honese pehle jabardast jalan hogi.


Jealousy is always something to watch out for so i m looking forward to it..update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3

awww that means Priya has a family but have no realtion with her father something big happen in her life with her father... Priya's father will soon work with Ram hmmm will get to know abt him more... kartik is coming awww but no nats here & RaYa again meets hope thy be friends soon... moving on next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4

awww RaYa is so unpredictable... Kartick is sweet heart felt really bad hearing abt his state but happy Priya made him so a live so happy... hope we will get like that Priya also soon... so Priya's perents died & Mr. sharma is Her chachu with whome she don't talks... well more story will unfold in coming week so jist waiting & watcing... right now moving on next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
wow its great update...con't soon pls.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 5

awww it was an long & big update awesome... so Priya's hurtful past is connected to her perents but what it could be uparse aap ne bhi NeVi & Ram ki baat chit ko nute kar diya... chalo waqt aane par pata chal hi jayega so Ram have already started to falling for Priya even he accepted he is in love with Priya but wants to wait until she comes forward for it gud i guess Priya also have feelings for Ram might be she is ignoring it aur unknown of it let's see how the story gets unfold would loved to read it ASAP u will post...
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PART-6
Next day they came back.But billo masi bahat chup chap rehne lagi akele akele beth ke kuchhh sochti rahi puchhne par bhi kuchh nahi bola ye kehke ki wo thik hen thoda thakgayi hen,do din bad rat ko ashiyan me sab khana khake sonechalegaye,kariban rat ke do baje ke aspas natasha pani pine uthi thi tab balcony ka darbaja khulahua dekh darbaja band karne ke liye gayi to wohn jo dekha wo samajh hi nahi payi kya kare.

Natasha-Priti,mahesh yhn ao jaldi dekho massi ko kya hua,wo jorse chilane ke sath sath ro bhi rahi thi.Uske awaj sunke sab daud ke wohn ake dekhe to floor pe billo massi behos padi he unke chehre pe pasina he ar natasha unko pakde hue rorahi he.

Mahesh-Natasha kya hua massi ko wo yhn kese ar hua kya he ???Wo ar mishra ji milke massi ko bed pe leta dete hen ar turant ram ar vikram ko phone lagate hen.Natasha ar priti contineously rorahe the baki sab dang the kya hua samjh nahi parahe theRam phone karke bolta he ki massi ko leke turant life care hospital lechale wolog wohi pe ajayenge vikram ar neha bhi wohn ke liye rawana hogaye,raste me neha ne priya ko phone kardiya tha to wo hospital me sara intezar kardiya tha.Mishra ji mahesh ar natasha massi ko leke hospital nikalgaye,priti ar baki sabko bachho ke liye rukna pada.Hospital pohanchte hi ram massi ko strecher me leta ke examination ke liye badhrahatha,priya bhi bahat pareshan thi.Pehlibar kissi apne ko ese halat me dekh ke wo darrahi thi,itne cases dekhi he but fir bhi massi jese uske bahat karib hen ar unko wo khona nahi chahti thi.Ram ko kuchh samjh me nahi araha tha,ek bar anath hochuka he dusribar nahi hona chahta,wo ro nahi rahatha but uske chehrese saf patachalrahatha ki jese ek tufansa chalraha he dil me aghar baharnahi aya to sayad kyahoga pata nahi,ICU ke andar massi ko jb lejarahatha tab priya ne ram ko bola,relax kuchh nahi hoga ram sab thik hojayegaRam ne tab priya ke ankho me dilasa dekha tha wo kehna chatatha ki plz meri massi ko bachhalo but kuchh bolnahi parahatha.Priya massi ko leke andar chaligayi,kuchhder bad Dr.Rastogi ar Dr.Kulkarni bhi andar gaye.Bahar ram sirf tehlta raha,wo samjhnahi parahatha kya kare,vikram neha ar natasha ko samvalraha tha jo roroke behal hogaye the.

Vik-Ram tu beth ja kabtak ese khadarahega kuchh nahi hoga massi ko hum kuchh bhi karenge but unhe kuchh hone nahi denge.

Ram-Vikram,itne salo bad mujhe firse wo din yad araha he jab mere ankho ke samne mere ma papa marrahe the ar me kuchh nahi karparaha tha,ar aj bhi wese hi lachar hun.Me firse kissiko kho nahi sakta vikram nahi,uske ankho se anshu nikalaye.

Mahesh-Kuchh nahi hoga ram bhaiya,priya di he na.unhone bola he massi ko kuchh nahi hoga.Tabhi priya bahar ati he .Ram uski taraf bhagte hue jake uska hat pakad leta he ar bolta he,Priya massi kesi he,unhe hua kya he unhe kuchh hoga to nahi na chup kyon ho bolona.Priya uske hat ko pakadte hue bolti he.

Priya-Relax ram sant hojao me bolti hun,betho yhn.Wo ram ko bithata he ar bolta he.Ram,massi ko Miocardial Infraction hua he means heart attack,unke right coronary artery me blood clot hogaye hen isliye blood circulation me prob he,Hume turant bipass grafting karna padega.

Ram-Jo bhi karna pade karo priya,but massi ko bachhalo.

Priya-Ram,wo to hum karenge but problem ye he ki massi khudnahi chahti.

Ram-Kya,ye kya bolrahi ho tum ?

Priya-Hn ram wo respond nahi karrahi humne abhi unko hosme lane ke liye ar opration ke liye tayar karne ke liye treatment suru kia he but wo respond nahi karrahi ar jbtak wo respond nahi karengi to hum risk nahi lesakte.Syad wo andar hi andar ghutrahi he ram,wo jeena nahi chahti isliye unki body dawaiwom ko respond nahi karraha.Ye sunke ram priya ki hatse apni hat nikaldiya.

Ram-Ye kese hosakta he,massi ese kese karsakti he unko jeena padega jeena padega humareliye jeena padega,me unhe kuchh nahi honedunga,ese bolte hue wo ICU ke taraf badhne laga.

Priya-Ram ruko,suno meri bat,ese behave karnese kuchh nahi hoga hume hosla rakh ke dhairya ke sath kam karna padega.Uski bat sunke ram rukgaya ar bench pe dang hoke bethgaya.natasha mahesh mishra ji kya massi ko kuchh prob tha,kya wo kuchh different feel karrahi thi ???

Mishra ji-Beta,billo ji jbse nanitalse ayi hen chupchup si rehte the khana bhi kam kharahe the sirf apni purani album leke balcony me bethe rehte the,sayad wo apni pati ko miss karrahe the but achanak yesab kese hogaya pata nahi.

Priya-Achanak nahi mishraji massi apne andar bahat dinse dard daba ke rakhe the ek na ek din wo nikalna hi tha,isliye wo nahi chahrhi jeena ar respond nahi karrahi.Hume sirf ab wait karna he ki unko hosh ajaye uske bad hum oparation ke liye agebadhsakte hen.Ram wohn se uthke chala gaya,priya bhi Dr.Rastogi discussion ke liye gayi.Wo,wohn se bat karke arahi thi use ghutansi horahi thi,sabke samne strong hone ki dikhawa karrahi thi but uske dil me bhi dar he khodene ka dar pehlibar esa horaha he,wo nahi chahti ye,sabse badi bat ram ki ankho me wo dard...pata nahi par wo dar use ar bhi dard deraha tha wo use dur karna chahti thi.Use achanakse ram ki yad ayi,ar wo use dhunde lagi,kuchhder bad wo hospital ki corridor me rakhi ganesh ji ke murti ke samne ram ko khadahua payi.Ram wohn chupchap khada hua tha,ankho se sirf anshu nikalrahe the,use dekh ke priya apne apko roknahi payi wo uskitaraf badh hi rahi thi ki,ek nurse ake bola,Dr.Priya wo ICU wale marij ko hosh agaya he jaldi chaliye.Priya turant wohn chali,ar ram bhi.Udhar massi ko hoshagaya tha but oxygen lagahua tha,puri tarh bat nahi karparahi thi.Priya andar jate hi massi ke ECG chake kia ar massi ke pass ake bethi,massi dheerese ankhe kholke priya ki taraf dekhnelagi tabhi ram bhi andar aya,baki sab bahar the.Ram massi ko iss halat me dekh khudko sambhal nahi paya ankhose anshu band hi nahi horahe the,wo bhi masi ke dusre side me ake betha ar unkhi hat ko apne hatme lete hue bachho ke tarah ronelaga.Ram ko ese dekh massi apni oxygen ki mask ko nikalte hue dheerese bole,Rammm...Ram massi ko roknewali thi but priya ne isare me bola its ok to wo rukgaya.Massi uske gal pe hat rakhte hue boli.

Massi-Beta kyon rorahe ho ek na ek din mujhe tumhare massa ji ke pass jana to he na,unke bina ab ar nahi rehsakta jindegi bahat lamba he ar iss lambe safar me unkesath bitaye pal ko sath me leke itni lamba rah chali he ab ar nahi wo bahat akele hain mujhe unko sath dena he,mujhe ajad kardo tum logo ki bandhan se.

Ram-Nahi massi bilkul nahi,kya firse ek bar ap mujhe anath karna chti ho un masumo ke sarse hat hatana chahti ho,manta hun masa ji ke bina ap akele ho fir bhi kya hum apke paraye hen,apne barso se hume ma ki tarh pyar diya he ar koi bhi bachha apne ma ke bina nahi rehsakta chahe wo kitna bhi bada kyon na ho.Ar masa ji bhi to ye kabhi nahi chahenge na ki ap ese jindegi se har manjao,apko jeena padegha masi mere liye vikram neha mahesh natasha priti panchi dhruv sabke liye ashiyan ke liye ar khaskar masa ji ke liye ar unke sapne ke liye.Massi khudko roknahi payi unke ankho me bhi anshu the,priya ne unki ankhose anshu pochte hue bola,Hn massi ar mere liye bhi,ap ladhoge na ???Jindegi se jindegi ke liye ??Massi sirf ankhose hn bolte hue dheere se ankh band kardiya,anesthsia ki bajese wo unconcious hogayi thi.But wo treatment ko respond karrahi thi,Ram ar priya bahar ake sabko inform karte hen ki massi abhi thik hen ar kuchh der me unki opration suru hogi.Priya Dr.Rstogi ar Dr.Kulkarni ke sath massi ka surgery karnewali thi,sab preparation hogaya tha,kan kya karnewala he wo bhi tai hogayi thi.Priya ne isse pehle kitne surgery ki he kabhi uske hat paon nahi kape hen but aj wo khud dar rahi he kahin usse koi galti hojaye to kain massi ko kuchh hojaye to wo kya karegi sabko kya bolegi ar sabse badi bat ram ko kya jawaw degi,wo apne cabin me opration ke liye tayari karte wakt wohi sochhrahi thi,opration theater me jane ke liye 15 mint he priya bechen horahi hoti he apne cabin me tabhi door me knock hoti he wo mudke dekhti he to ram khada hota he.

Ram-Kya me andar asakta hun ????Priya hn bolti he to wo andar ata he.Priya dusri aur dekhte hue chup khada rehta he,Dono chup rehte hen.Priya ankhe wese hi band karte hue bolti he,Ram me puri koshis karungi masi ko kuchh na hone ke liye.Uski bat puri nahi hoti he ki ram bolta he.

Ram-Priya,wo jarur thik hojayengi kyon ki mujhe tum par bharosha he ki tum unkesath kuchh galat hone hi nahi doge.Ar ye bharosa mere dil ne diya he ar dil ki bharosa kabhi galat nahi hoti.Itna bolke wo wohn se chala ata he.Priya usko jate hue dekh khudse bolti he,Me tumhari bharosa ko nahi todungi ram kabhi nahi.Wo ab lambi sans leke opration ke liye nikaljati he.2 bajese leke 7 baje tak opration hota he,pure samay ram sirf hall me peher marraha hota he.Priya baki doctors ke sath bahar ati he ar opration succes hone ki bat bolti he,sab relax feel karete hen,Priya ram ki taraf dekhti he to,ram ke ankho me anshu ke sath ek halki smile hoti he jisme biswas chamakraha hota he,priya wohn se dress change karne ke liye jati he.Hospital me itne log nahi rehsakte to ram ke insist karne par vikram ar neha ko chod sab bapas chalejate hen fresh hone.11 baje massi ko hosh ata he but thode der ke liye,Vikram ar neha unhe dekh ke ate hen,neha wohn rukne ke liye bolti he but azad ki bajese ram use mana karta he to vikram neha bapas chalejate hen,Ram massi ke pass betha rehta he unke hat pakde hue,palak jhapkaye unhe hi dekhta rehta he.Priya jb massi ki chake up karne ati he to ram ko akele ese bethta hua dekhta he,usne notice kia tha ram ne kl ratse wese hi he na fresh hua he na kuchh bhi khaya he,wese usne bhi kuchh nahi khaya he but use ram ki fikr hui.Wo ICU se bahar ate hi kartik ko phone lagata he,

Priya-Hello,kartik sun massi ab stable hen chinta mat karna ar ek bat tu ek kam karsakta he me abhi ghar arahi hun,ram bhi yhi he kl se kuchh nahi khaya he me gharjake kuchh banati hun tu mahesh ke sath yhn aja ar massi ke pass ruk tb ram gharpe ake fresh bhi hojayenge ar kuchh khabhi lenge.Asakta he ??

Kartik-Di me khud bolnewala tha,ap ajao me abhi nikalte hun.Priya ekbar fir ram ki taraf dekhti he ar gharke liye rawana hoti he.Ghar pahanchte hi wo dress change karke khana banane me lagjati he,ar kartik ko phone karke bolti he ki usne ram ko nahi puchha kyon ki wo mana kardeta to wo log pahanchne ke bad use batana ar wohn bhejdena.Kartik ar mahesh dono hospital pahanchte he,dono hi massi ke pas jake bethte hen.

Kartik-Bhaiya,ap thode der ke liye humare ghar jao pass me hi to he ar fresh hojao me ar mahesh hen.Priya di ne bola he apko bolne ke liye.

Ram-Nahi,me thik hun massi ko ese chodke me nahi jasakta,Tabhi uska phone bajta he priya ka call tha wo recive karta he.

Priya-Hello...Kuchh der chup rehne ke bad wo bolti he.Ram,jab khud thik rahoge tb jake massi ki degbhal karsakoge.Agar dost mante ho to thode der yhn ajao ar khana khalo me wait karrahi hun.Ram bas chup raha wo protest nahi karsakta pehlibar kisine uske liye concern dikhaya he ar wo use denay nahi karsakta.Kartik ar mahesh ko chodke wo priya ke ghar ke liye niakalta he.Kuchh der me priya ki door bell bajta he,priya open karti he to ram khada hota he wohi white kurte me,but wo hassi nahi rehti jo harbat pe jhalakta tha,priya ko bahat auckward lagraha hota he pehlibar kisiko ese apne aur se bulaya he pata nahi par kyon ram ke liye wo bahat concern feel karrahi hoti he.

Priya-Come in,Ram chup chap andar ata he,priya darbaja band karke uske pichhe ati he,betho pani loge.

Ram-Nahi am fine,Priya,thanks.

Priya-Umm,ek kam karo udhar washroom he fresh hojao me coffee leke atio hun.Ram bina kuchh bole washroom chalajata he,priya bhi dono ke liye coffe banane chalijati he.Ram fresh hoke ake sofe me bethta he,priya cofee lake use dete hue samne pade chair pe bethti he.Ram bilkul chup rehta he.Ajse pehle priya ne ramko ese kabhi nahi dekha,jese 5 sal ka koi bachha accident dekh ke darjata he wese hi expression rehta he ram ke chehre me.Priya mood thik karne ke liye sterio on karti he,usme ye gana bajta rehta he

"Jindegi kesi he paheli haye,
kabhi to hasae kabhi to rulaye
jindegi kesi he paheli haye"

Ram wese hi chup bethta rehta he.Priya wohn se uthke dining table pe khana parosti he,ar ramko bulati he,ram chupchap ake bethta he,plate me khana rehta he wo spoon se sirf khane ke idhar udhar karraha hota he priya ne notice kia.

Priya-Ram,massi ko kuchh nahi hoga daro mat me hun na.

Ram-Uske taraf dekhta he,pata nahi priya ki ankho me jese ek dilasa he jo ar koi nahi desakta.Priya,pata he me umar me bada jarur hogaya hun but paise hen power hen but andarse me helpless hun akela dara hua.Priya bas suntirahi use pata he ram ko apni dil ko halka karna chaiye ram boltaraha.Pata he mujhe kiska dar he,khodene ka.Kisiko khodene ka dard bahat khopnak he priya,mere ankho ke samne mere ma papa ko mujhse humesa ke liye dur jate hue dekha he,masa ji ko bhi khote hue dekha he ab ar nahi massi ko nahi khosakta.Itna bolte hue wo bachho ke tarh rone lagta he,Priya apne jagh se uthke ram ke bagalme bethti he ar use hanky dete hue bolti he ram to iss dar ko nikal do jabtak dar rahega tum sans nahi lepaoge.Ram priya ki taraf dekhta he ar fir bolta he,pata he mere papa ar vikram ke papa masa ji ke yhn naukri karte the,hum log bachpanse sath the,masi ar masa ji jese log ajtk mene nahi dekhe itne humble itne pyar diya he sabko.sab thik chalraha tha jindegi hasin tha,me 5 sal ka tha ekdin masaji newyear ke liye sabko sidhi binayak mandir jane ke liye invite kia tha,Me apne ma papa ar vikram ke family ke sath ek car me jarahe the ar samne masa ji masi ar unke bete ke sath apne car me,uspal kisine bhi nahi sochhtha ki aglepal itni badi hadsa honewala tha.Hum mandirse thode hi dur the,achanakse right side se ek truck apni control khokar humario aur araha tha ek pal me sab khatam priya sab khatam.Ram bolte bolte apni ankhe band kardiya tha,priya mehsoos karparahi thi wo dard.Fir ram nne bola,accident me massi me vikram to bachhgaye baki sab hume chodke chalegaye priya sab chalegaye,me wohn chilataraha par kuchh nahi karpaya kisiko nahi bachhapaya.Priya ram ke kandhe pe hat rakhti he,ram apni ankho se anshu pochhte hue bola,apne bete ar pati ko khone ke bad bhi massi nahi tuti priya kyon pata he hum dono ke liye,unhone hume sinese lagadiya apni jindegi humareliye kardiya agar aj me yhn khada hun to sirf unki bajh se unhone ek chotasa anath ashram khola tha wohin pe wo bhi rehte the ar hum sare bachhe bhi,wo bahat pareshani uthake masa ji karobar chalate the ar hume palte the padhate the,Ar ashiyan ko banaya to mene he but ise banane ki prerna mujhe unse mili he.Me nahi chata humne jo taklif jheli he wo koi aur jhele,kisiko khondene ka dard jese unko na mile.Bolne ke bad ram chup betha,priya pani lake ramko dete hue bolti he,ram mere bhai ne kuchh din pehle mujhe kya kaha,ye ki agar jindegi me andhera he to ek na ek din ujala bhi hoga.Wese hi,hosla mat khona ram massi thik he me bolrahi hun na,tum unhe nahi khonewale,wo kuchh hi din me bilkul thik hojayenge.Relax.Ram uski taraf dekhta he ar bolta he,Hn,thank u priya mujhe sahara dene ke liye.

Priya-Its ok,ab khana khalo thanda hochuka he me itni buri bhi khana nahi banati fir bhi apke hisab se nahi but chalega try it.

Ram-Muskurate hue khana suru karta he.Chalega nahi its testy.Dono haste hen ar khana khate hen,firse chupchap,ram priya ki aur dekhta he.Ar fir puchhta he,Wese priya mene to apni dil halka kardiya ar ab hum dost bhi hen to tum bhi apne bare me bolsakti ho.Priya kuchh der chuprahi fir halkisi smile dete hue boli,Ram meri life ke bare kya bolun sirf itna bolsakta hun ki tumhari life mere life se jada better thi he ar wish ki rahegi.Ram kuchh nahi puchha kyon ki usse pata he priya ko kuchh ar din chahiye uspe puri tarh trust karne me.Dono khana khatam karte hen.

Priya-Ram tum jake sofe pe betho me kitchen saf karke ati hun,Ram hn bolte hue spofe ki tarf chalajata he .Kuchhder bad jb priya kam khatam karke ati he to ram sofe pe hi so chuka hota he muu khula karke,Blconyse ate hawa se uske bal udrahe hote hain,ar uske kharate,priya ram ko ese dekh ke khud ko roknahi payi ar haspadi,fir apne kamrese kambal lake ram ko wodhdiya jese wo comfertably sopaye fir light band karke apne room ki tarf chaligayi,but janese pehle ram ki aur dekh ke firse muskuragayi,pata nahi kyon ????
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Originally posted by: leena04

part 5

awww it was an long & big update awesome... so Priya's hurtful past is connected to her perents but what it could be uparse aap ne bhi NeVi & Ram ki baat chit ko nute kar diya... chalo waqt aane par pata chal hi jayega so Ram have already started to falling for Priya even he accepted he is in love with Priya but wants to wait until she comes forward for it gud i guess Priya also have feelings for Ram might be she is ignoring it aur unknown of it let's see how the story gets unfold would loved to read it ASAP u will post...

thanks leena apne sare parts pade ar comments diye.

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