HUMSUFER- PART-13 & CONFESSION PART-A PAGE-38 and PART-B PAGE-39

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Hello

Both the confession parts are brilliantly penned.

That stupid fellow, how cheap is he! and OMG sudhirji has done a deal for his debt? disgusting parent he is, never ever be forgotten.

the second confession part was brillliant and again their nok jhok teasing, finding solace in each others arms, awesome

best part is ram's confession of kissing her, the note is really cute😆😆

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Confession was awesome
Priya did confess her love for Ram but she take very much time after thanking him shared her insecurities
He was so happy by listenong that she love him
their little bantering and teasing to each other was cute
Glad Vik Neha is also happy for Raya
Aww they share the kiss but unknow to Priya

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fan_forever

@fan_forever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Hey pls update next part. ...

I m waiting for raya romance. ...

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Hey!!

Read the whole FF together!! and it was just awesome.. loved every part..

Love the way the story progressed.. starting with 2 insecure people, unknown to each other.. Both deprived of parental love, meet and fall for each other..

Do update soon.. will be waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#295

sry 4 late reply, part A was very emotional, Part B was romantic , confession part was awesome, pls continue soon, thx 4 PM

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Mitwaa

@Mitwaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Please continue na i like the story very much

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leena

@leena04

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#297

hi dear were is new updates yaar waiting from long time...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#298

Part 13 A
awesome too gud yaar... thee way Priya realized her mistake was awesome... & the way she desprate to share her felings wwith Ram was also too gud... Shudhir's entry made me shock too but the way u discribed RaYa's dressing & beauty were mind blowing... so finally Rajat ka kiss khatam he served well from Ram's hand & now police will treat him well too... now come to abusive words he said for Priya & she got hurt while Ram always there to rescue from any pain was mind blowing penned down... now moving for next how Priya will monofy Ram now...

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leena

@leena04

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#299

13 B
very smezingly u hav peened down the confession of RaYa simple yet diffrent... I actually loved it the way u made it now come to the romance part it is on of the most romatic part on RaYa from ur stories i really loveed it the way u penned down so happy to reading it plz post the one soon... plz