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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeena1993

Neel Di u said u r poor in hindi fir v itne jaldi sare parts padliya wow😲.

Actually hindi me thoda jada achhe se express karpati hun ,I will try to write in english.Thanks for reading and commenting.And yes rajo is chpr than ever uska ganda pan kuchh jada hoga age.So wait and watch.


Jeena .. For me its late not jaldi 😆
If its in english i will take very les time than this
so for me its very difficult and hard to read hindi in english 😆
But if i can understand than i will read

Thank you for this lovely story
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Posted: 11 years ago
After long you have updated but it was good
Priya is happy to see Kartik is standing on his feet
Now she want to meet his love of life Ram
the scene of agra you describe very well it reminded me of the launch of the show in agra three years back
that jerk Rajat deserve this how dare he try to misbehave with Priya
Aww yipee Ram confessed now it's Priya turn
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
As i promised here is the Part-B of confession.Hope you will like it.

Part-B

Ram is sitting on the grass near the lake,thinking what all happened.He stoped himself from her so that she will be happy but why can not he take precurtion for That B*****D.He can not handle tears in her eyes,he can feel how she is going through so much pain.He felt someone is standing behind him.He turned and saw there is priya,Her eyes are swolen now.But she is as beautiful and elegant as before.He immediately stood up and went near her.

Ram-Are you fine ???I did not know Priya wo yahn pe ake esse harkat karega,I am realy sorry.But Don't worry wo ab tumhe kabhi paresan nai karpayega.I promise you that.

Priya- Shhh... Am fine now.Please hum uske bare me koi bat nahi karenge,mujhe appse kuchh bat karni he.Now ram is stunned.What will she say ??Kya wo ab bhi naraj he pehlibali bat ko leke ???Priya took Ram's hand and took him to the place where Ram sat before.Both sat there.Both remained silent for sometime.Image of Taj Mahal is reflecting on water of lake.It is full moon light. The night is filled with the magic of the Taj by moonlight.Priya broke the silence.

Priya-I am sorry RAM.This time she called him "RAM" without his insistance.Ram looked at her,his name sounds so melodious from her mouth.He will remain in that position forever only listiening his name from her.I am sorry for everything I told you,for undersatnading you wrong,saying those insane words to you.She couldn't complete her words..

Ram-Its ok,mujhe bura nai laga.

Priya-Nai jhut mat boliye,kissiko bhi bura lagega khaskar jab koi galat na ho ar ussko unsab galati ke liye jinmedar thehraya jaye.

Ram-But issme meri galati thi na.I didn't tell you about Barbie,anyone can think of it like you did.

Priya-But fir bhi am realy sorry.Plz forgive me.

Ram-Ok I forgive you fine.

Priya-Nai arr bhi kuchh bolna he.

Ram-Han bolo.

Priya-Thank YOU.

Ram -Ye kissliye ???

Priya-Kartik ke liye, itna kuchh kia uskeliye wo bhi mere isstarh behave karne k wawjud.

Ram-Common Priya,Kartik mera bhi bhai jesa he,ar khaskar Nuts ke liye kia.

Priya-Hmmm.Ar bhi kuchh kehna he.

Ram-Hmmm.Ar kya kya kya kehna he bolo me sunraha hun.He chuckled a lil.Priya also.After so many days Ram saw her smiling.It made him happy.

Priya- Again thank you.

Ram-Firse !!!! Ab kisliye ???

Priya-Wo Rajat...

Ram-Abhi kuchh der pehle hi tumne mana kiatha na uss kide ke bare me koi bat nai karenge.Wese tumhare pass sorry ar thank you ke alawa kuchh ar bhi kehne ko he ya nai me bore horaha hun yar.Priya laughed hearing him.

Priya-Han Ram bahat kuchh kehna he ar kuchh puchna bhi he ???

Ram-To bolo ar puchh bhi lo.

Priya-Look at me Ramm..Something was there in her voice which made him turn immediately.She took his palm in her,Ram looked at their hands and again looked at her.

Priya-Do you know Ram,how insecure I am ?? Do you know I lost the capability of trusting anyone ???Appko pata he mujhe khudpe bhi jakin nai he.Mujhe ye bhi patanai ke me kabhi khus hopaungi ya nai kissiko khusi depaungi ya nai.But you desorve it Ram.You are a nice persone,who desorves to be loved.But me yesab apko depaungi ya nai mujhe patanai.Me abhi puritarh depression se nikli nai hun.Sadi ek badi responsibility he,ek commitment he jo me harshly nai karna chahta.Appke bhi kain sare khawb honge,me unsabko todna nai chahta.Me jis halat me hun ussse nikalne ke liye kitna wakt lagega patanai.Ab to appko mere background bhi patachalgaya he.Mere khoon me bhi unhi ka rakt he,Do you still love me ?? Do you have still faith on me ??? Tears of apprehensions,fear of loosing is clear in her eyes.Ram put his other hand on their hand.

Ram-Yes still I do LOVE you.I do have faith on you.I will not say it was a love at first sight.Gradually I fell in love with you,with your simplicity,with your caring nature for your brother,with your respect for elders,with your loyality to work.I have faith in our friendship.And I also have faith that we will come out of this situations together.Ar tumhe kisne kaha ki me abhi hi tumse sadi karna chahta hun.Agar ajj tum mujhe mana bhi kardo na fir bhi me khudko nai roksakti tumhe pyar karnese.I will love you and wait for you till my last breath.Priya instantly put her hand on his mouth.

Priya-Esa mat bolo,appko kuchh hojaye me nai sehpaunga.

Ram-Mujhe kuchh nai hoga,Jabtak tum meresath ho mere pass ho mujhe kuchh nai hoga,tum physicaly mere pass raho ya na raho mere dil me humesa rahoge,ar jisdin mere dilse tum chalijaogi usdin mera dil bhi dhadakna band kardega.He took her in his arms,cradeled her head lovingly.Tears are springing out of her eyes.He wiped her tears.

Ram-I will remain with you on your side,every step you will take forward I will be there with you.Nothing will happen to you.I will help you to come out of deppresion.Together we will work on it.Am sure we can do it.I am ready to wait.Jabtak tum imotionaly ar mentally thik na hojao hum sadi ke bareme sochenge bhi nai.Her kajal all spread because of crying and rubbing her eyes.He gathered her into his arms again,made her head rest on his chest,lifted her chin and wiped all the tears once again.Kissed her on her forhead.She closed her eyes. The fragrance of his cologne drafted into her nostrils, making her lose all her senses. He slowly laced his fingers through her hair. . Flicking away the stray strands from her face,he asked her,-Do you have faith on me Priya ??Priya only noded her head.

Ram-To bas ar kuchh socho mat.They remained like that for sometime.

Priya-Ramm...

Ram-Hmmm...

Priya- I LOVE YOU.

Ram-(SMILING)I knew it.I love you with extreme depth and devotion.

Priya- Looking at him,then why you waited ??

Ram-I want to hear that from you DARLING.Priya blushed hearing that from him.

Priya-Why you love me so much Ramm ????

Ram- I don't know,I have no control on my heart na.I can not stop me loving you.Tum karpayi ???

Priya-Nahi..

Ram-Pyar ese hi hota he.Uspe humari jor nai hota.

Priya-Hmmm.You are talking like a hindi film hero.

Ram-Ese kya ????To Yash Raj films me try karna padega.Both laughed.

Priya-How can you manage all this.

Ram-Matlab ???

Priya-Matlab sabko itni achhi tarah se samjh kese pate ho,kisike dil ki bat kese janlete ho ar sabko ese achhi tarah se handle kese karlete ho ???

Ram-Hello hello kan kehta he sabko samajh leta hun ??Exception to yahn meri bagal me he.Tumhe to samjhne me itna din lagadiya patanai ar kitna din lagega hyyy !!!!!

Priya-ufff how cheap!!!

Ram-Woho my darling, ye to majak karrahatha.

Priya-(SMILING)I knew it.

Ram-Then why you acted like that.

Priya-I want to hear it from you.

Ram-Woho,madam to mujhe copy karne lagi abse hey RAM tumhe kan bachayega.

Priya-Stop it dramebaz.Priya is fiddling with Ram's shirt button.

Ram-Why are you seducing me infront of Taj Mahal han ???

Priya-Huu mene kab ese kia ???

Ram-Abhi to karrahithi,tum ese mere shirt button se khelogi to me khudko control kese karunga??

Priya-Abhi to bade bade bat karrahethe I will wait for you.Ab kahn gayi hn ??

Ram-Me abhi bhi woi bolraha hun,par tum ese seduce karogi to koi kese control karega ???

Priya-Mene nai kia.

Ram-Han tumne kia.

Priya-No.

Ram-Wo yes.

Priya-NO.

Ram-NO.

Priya-Yes.

Ram-Dekha tumne bhi mana ki tumne seduce kia.Priya understood what she said in hurry and looked at him with funny face.Both laughed together.Once again Ram took her in his arms,and started carssing her hair.

Priya-Stop it Ram.Ab mera mood thik he koi jarurat nai majak karne ki.

Ram-Realy !!!

Priya-Ya.

Ram-Par me majak thode na karrahatha me to apni girlfriend se romance karrahatha.

Priya-Achha me appki girlfriend kab hogayi.

Ram-Jab tumne mujhe I love you bola ar mene tumhe.

Priya-Ese kese.Ese nai hota koi kisiki girlfriend,propose karna padta he Mr.Kapoor.

Ram-Ok,Banda hazir he.He instantly kneeled down infront Priya.Made a ring of grass and show it to her.

Ram-Miss.Priya Sharma,I am in love with you,and wiil remain forever.Will you do me a favour of being my girlfriend ????There is sincearity and passion in his voice that Priya cann't ignore it.She extended her hand.

Priya-Yes,I do.I love you.Ram smiled and put the grass ring in her middle finger.He then sat next to her and once again hugged her,this time more tightly and passionately.Priya did not know when she went to sleep.Ram smiled seeing this,He took up her in his arms and went to her room.Both of them didn't notice someone saw them together.

Vikram is about to leave the resort,his phone rang.

Vikram-Hello,sweetheart ???

Neha-Kya hello ???Wohan pahanch ke ekbar phone to karlete ???Wese priya ar ram ka kya hua ???Will you tell me plz ??

Vikram- hold on neha.Sab kuchh thik he.

Neha-Matlab Priya ne boldia ???

Vikram-Kuchh esa hi samjho.

Neha-Kya matlab ??

Vikram-Me ake sakuchh batata hun,don't you want your hubby near you.

Neha-(Blushing)Ok.Come home umhhaaa.

Vikram-Aree yar itni lamba kiss to tumne mere propose karne par bhi nai di.

Neha-Shut up ok,Jaldi ghar ao.

Vikram-Ok.

On the other side Ram made priya sleep on her bed,pull the comforter on her.She cluched it and immediately fall asleep.She is looking so cute in her sleep,there is a silly smile on her lips.He could not control himself. He leaned forward and placed a featherlight kiss on Priya's lips, pressing them tenderly and moving back, as soon as she gave a spasm in her sleep. But to his relief, she did not wake up...obviously exhausted from the day .He left her room.

Next day when Priya woke up,she found herself in her bed.She remembered previous night spend with Ram.A small smile crept on her lips.She looked at the grass ring and kissed it.When she turned her head she noticed a note kept on the side table.She read it curiously.

"Hey my Darling Brand new Girlfriend,do you know how beautiful you look when you are in sleep.Now come to the point,I made tickets for both of us.2 baje ki flight he tabtak hum log time spend karsakte hen agar tum chaho to.Be ready and come to the cafeteria for breakfast,give me a call when you leave your room."

PS:I want to confess one thing.I couldn't control myself to kiss your luscious lips.Priya you have realy soft lips.Now don't blush like new bride.I promise I wont do it without your permission.

Priya clutched on to Ram's letter, kissing it feverishly and reading and re-reading it, with laughter and tears, together.She touched her lips and smiled imagining his lips on her,thinking,how much this man know of her imotions.

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Edited by jeena1993 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Lovely update!!!
Continue soon!!


Thank u for liking and commenting.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lekshmimukesh

Thank u Jeena for the lovely update.waiting for the second part.pls update soon.after reading first part ,can't wait anymore.


Happy that u like it,i updated part-b read and enjoy.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neema.khudarath

very nice update continue soon thanks for pm


Thank u.Updated part-b.Enjoy😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Wow superb yaar pls continue soon


Thank u.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Jeena .. i think you have updated after long time

but i read the story recently
for me its quick and Thank you for that
Loved this part
as priya came to know about Ram and ram helped karthik to walk
and she so wanted to confess Her love to him
Good going
when Ram &Priya met bith wanted to be in each other arms but unable to beczof their MUs
grrr 😡 This Rajat 😡😡😡 how dare this chepo calls my queen with such names
such an idiot he is
get the hell out of him here ..
Thank god Ram saved form her it
and he confessed that He loves her
awww priya is in a vulnerable stage and shecried her heart out
now she is going to her love
hmm
eagerly waiting for their confession
and waiting for your next update
Thank you so much for pm


Thank u.Yes this rajat is too chp,I wanted these slaps in real epis but they didn't show it so i did it ar wo v mere hero ke hatse.Yes ram made all the plans before to save her.Yes he confessed his love kya kare situation hi esa he thoda time to lagega priya ko sambhalne me.Next part is confession of priya.You will enjoy it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi


Jeena .. For me its late not jaldi 😆
Hyyla you are too fast then like express.😆😆😆
If its in english i will take very les time than this

so for me its very difficult and hard to read hindi in english 😆
Ya i know it is difficult,will try to write more in english.

But if i can understand than i will read

Thank you for this lovely story

You welcome.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

After long you have updated but it was good
Priya is happy to see Kartik is standing on his feet
Now she want to meet his love of life Ram
the scene of agra you describe very well it reminded me of the launch of the show in agra three years back
that jerk Rajat deserve this how dare he try to misbehave with Priya
Aww yipee Ram confessed now it's Priya turn
continue soon


Yes long time.Yes i want all white colurs so choose whity Taj Mahal,actualy march12 k promo me jo saree he wo mujhe sabse jada pasand he😉 that is why.Yes rajat dsrvd it.Ram confessed and priya will do it.Read part-b u eill deffo enjoy it.

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