SS Bleeding love update PART 4 PAGE 13 29/10/13

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lpsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

wooow mai tho mar gayi waht an update fab👏👏 but thoda jaldi de dona

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Dsudipa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

sry 4 late reply wonderful update interesting story pls continue soon thx 4 PM

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Part 3
awww awesome yaar kya update hai first Vik's teasing to Ram was really a cute & mast one then Priya's going pub with Neha & RaYa's first meet then ofcouse that msg wala love was the best part yaar i m just loving it... bas thoda sa aur bada likhte jao plz aur haan main baat Ram knows Priya is the only his lady love awww hope Priya also knows soon waiting for next do updates soon...

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jmehta1957

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

lovely update...pls update soon and pls PM me your update.😊

when will priya come to know about ram ...why the title is bleeding love...feels like horror story...yaar ram aur priya milenge na ki title ki tarah hi hogi un dono ki love story...pls aisa mat karna.waiting for the next update...pls update soon..

Edited by jmehta1957 - 12 years ago

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name2saakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

u really done a ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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sampa123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

next updt do pls pls pls...eagrly waiting 4 ur next updt..pls updt dedo..part4 dedo pls

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vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Waiting for the update Darling..

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aiyathasan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

BLEDDING LOVE

without getting any harm both successfully gets out from the pub... finally we r out of the mess ? ram says sweetly to her.. priya smile and says thank you.. I don't think without ur help I won't able to come out from this mad pub... no need to thank me , honestly I was also feeling suffocated in the pub... I don't like gathering place... ram reply her... Lets go.. ram says both walking towards the parking area.. they stops in front of the ram car.. ram opens the front side door for priya.. priys steps inside... ram closes the door and goes near the driving seat.. he also steps into the car... closing the seat belt ram looks at priya.. folding her hand priya is messaging her upper body .. ram switch off the AC . R u all right?? Ram in a concern voice asks her ..yeah it just feeling a little cold.. priya reply.. looking at her eyes for last time ram asks her again r u sure u r ok?? Priya smile and says hmm I m ok... ram presses a button.. window mirror slide down automatically... priya leans back and turns a side... in a average speed am is driving the car.. she is gazing at the city.. suddenly the city is looking so quite.. because of the strong wind a strand s fall into her face.. ram occasionally glancing her ..he is wondering how could someone looks so divine..every second that he is spends with her he is attracting towards her more...he looks at her..she is lost in her own world.. her blowing hair disturbs him to see her faced properly.. in unconscious mind ram raises his hand to tugs her hair behind her ear... when priya moves her body a little, reality stuck in his mind, he pulls his hands backwards and concentrate into the driving ...a unknown emotion is playing inside him... he cant express how he is feeling now... I wish priya I can tell u the truth... I wish priya u can hear what my heart want to say... I wish priya I can take u my arms and tell u that u stole my heart... I wish priya I can tell u what u mean to me... hearing priyas voice rams chain of thought broke... ram looks at priya... I m sorry priya sadly says.. sorry for what?? Ram asks her.. because of me u getting u trouble.. priya reply.. ram smile and says don't said it trouble, I m enjoying the ride... Priya looks at him.. I mean that it rare to get such a beautiful company ... priya smile and says r u flirting with me.. ram broadly smile and says I don't know how to flirt someone... it makes priya laugh out loudly... nice joke.. controlling her smile priya says... I m not joking seriously I don't know how to flirt.. and this is the first time I m sitting beside a unknown lady... priya looks at his top to toe and says .. r u man na?? yes I m man, but why ru asking this? Ram in casually asks her... priya controls her smile and says I mean u just said this is the first time u r travelling with a woman.. that's mean priya will not able to hide her smile she laugh out loudly says I m sorry... Now ram understand what priya is trying to says... both smile together... Can I play the cd player? Ram asks to priya... priya nods her head... ram switch on the cd... First song play..
main duniya bhula dungi teri chahato main..
tera sath jo chuta ya wada jo toota mai khud ko meta dungi teri chato mai...
priya is feeling little uneasy hearing the lyric she turns her head a side and looks at outside... ram feels his uncomfortableness ... so he plays the next button...
second songs play: dil hain ki manta nahi, dil hain ki manta nahi..
muskil badi han rasme mohhabat ya jante ahi nahi... ram again press the next button..
third songs play..
tu hi re, tu hi re tere bina main kaise jiyu
aajaa re, aajaa re, yu he tadpa na tu mujhko
jaan re, jaan re, in saanso mein bas jaa tu
chaand re, chaand re, aajaa dil ki zameen pe tu...
when ram raises his hand to press the next button priya unknowingly holds his hand and says I want to hear the song...priya leaves his hand and looks outside... this song is her most favorite song..whenever she hear this song.. she feels a unknown pain.. so many memories r attached to this song she leans back... she is lost into the lyric.. ram is gazing her.. her eyes r closed but ram can feels her pain.. he can see her so sad... .. he is cursing himself to play the cd... Ram stops the car in front of her apartment... when priya got into the car she told ram her address... ram knows the place so he easily finds her house... priya is looking a little sad and disturbs... Ram gets down.. and opens the car door for priya.. priya steps down... both r now standing face to each other... thank ram... priya says.. it my pleasure priya.. ram reply.. bidding him good bye priya walking towards her apartment.. "priya" ram calls her.. priya turns back.. ram comes near her and says, plz always keep smiling.. sad face does not suits you... ram smilingly says... priya gives him a sweet smile and says good night... ram wish her good night too...

ram is driving the car... he is thinking about priya... he starts to missing her... he takes out his cell phone from his pocket and types

From: Mr Perfect
Subject: Hope U r fine
To : Miss Unknown
where r u? why u do not send me any msg? I hope u reached home softly... I don't know why.. missing u badly...
ram presses the send button in within second delivery reports shows..

priya is lying on the bed and thinking about ram.. she does not know why she is feeling so connected with ram... in whole journey for a second she does not realize that she is sitting beside a unknown person... she never sees such a gentle man before.. she feels a unknown peace in her mind when she was with him... she hears the sounds beep..she takes the phone from bed side table and a smile creeps in her lips she opens the message... she stars to typing..

From : Miss Uknown
Subject: I m fine
To: Mr. Perfect
I m at home... I reached home few minutes ago... I was at car with a friend... I never see such a kind and gentle person before... he helped me to reach home safely... y r u missing me?? Did u take ur dinner?? I m also missing you... By the way where r u??

priya presses the send button.. messages sends successfully ...priya is waiting for the reply.. ram cells vibrate he sees her message.. he opens the message and smile shyly reading the line that kind and gentle person... So miss unknown consider ram as her friends this thought makes his heart becomes happy... ram touches the reply options... he hurriedly types,

From : Mr. Perfect
Subject: At car
To: Miss Unknown
I m driving the car heading towards home... feeling terribly hungry 😭... y means what? U r my friend, I can miss my friend anytime... Can I ask u something?
ram touches the reply button... holding her cell phone priya is looking at the screen she opens the message...

From : Miss Unknown
Subject : Angry
To : Mr. Perfect
what is this yaar, u r driving car and also using the phone..haad han yaar.. how could u so careless... what r u doing outside in this hour?? I m really angry at u... don't reply me now... reaching at home plz send me a message... and plz drive the car carefully.. I cant afford to loose you... so plz take care urself... And by the way when u need to take permission for me to asking any question... u can ask me anything... aur plz don't make sad face it does not suits u... 😊 ..keep smiling always...

priya sends the messages and keeps her mobile a side... ram receives the messages... he two times read the messages... he cant express how much happy he is now... indirectly priya also confess her that she likes him...

ram reaches home safely... he directly goes to his room and tells bansi kaka to serve the dinner
in his room... changing in his night dress ram comes out from the washroom... He goes near the table and sits on the chair... after completing his dinner ram throw himself on the bed... he unlocks his cell and types a message

From: Mr Perfect
Subject: At home
To: Miss unknown
hi I hope I m not disturbing u... I finished my dinner.. feeling happy J... what r u doing now? Did u take ur dinner?? Darling r u still angry at me?? I m holding my ear and promise u I will never use my phone when I m driving the car... now please gives me a sweet smile 😊 like this... yaay u smile... My god yaar when u smile u look sooo beautiful...now comes to the question, do u love anyone???

ram presses the sends button.. and waiting for her reply...

...to be continue...

Edited by aiyathasan - 11 years ago

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sushfiza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

wow sweet hrt...this is rocking update...love it so much...love d flow of d story...
both are infront f eachother bt dont know their real identity...
grt going...
muahhh darling...cont soon

Edited by 123fiza1 - 11 years ago