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vidi98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Read both parts in a go... It's Awesum!!!! :) m lovin it... <3

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

part 2

awww i loved the concept... andekha Pyar so cute yaar in today's world still this kind of love exist i don't know but happy that u have brought it here very nicely its really gud... loved their msg talk & sweet nok jhok... do connt the next soon... waitinggg ggg ggg ggg ggg

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luvbalh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

hey ..

sorry am late..

part 1 .. interesting so both were mr X n Ms X .. cool start looks promising ..

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luvbalh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

part : 2

raya are so adorable thy love their unknown friends.. it was so beautifully written was waiting to read more.

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cynthiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Nice ss 😛

Good concept 👏

Pls continue soon😭 waiting😭

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aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

PART 3

scratching his forehead ram is smiling like a teenage lover... he takes the phone in his hands and again read all the message that miss unknown send her... he is feeling a unknown happiness in his heart... finally he finds someone who really cares about him... ram leans back a shy smile is still dancing in his lips..he closes his eyes and tries to sketching a picture of her.. a beautiful blurts eyes image lingering in front of his eyes.he tries to sees the face but all he sees is darkness... folding his hand above is chest vikram is standing in front of his table,,,he is carefully staring him... almost 5 min later vikram clear his throat.. hearing the sound suddenly ram almost jumps from his chair... when his eyes fall into vikram ram makes a angry face and says what r u doing here? and why r u staring me like this?? without saying anythings vikram pulls the chair and sits in front of him... he takes deep breath and sadly says, i m really feel pity on you ram.. u will be gone mad very soon.. ram narrows his eyes and sits on his char and reply hey buddy r u all right i think u need a drink...vikram smiles and not me ram u need a drink.. look at urself in the mirror u will understands what i m saying... ram makes a confusing face and he touches his face and says why r u telling all this tell me whats the matter... vikram sigh and says my dost u r in love it means ur life will be turn hell very soon... oh god vikram u r such a jerk.. now i really want to paunch in ur face.. hey hey hold on vikram raise his hands.. look at ur self ur shyly smiling like a new bride... saying this vikram laugh out loudly... vikraaammm today i will not spare you...oye stops now tell me my would be bhabh's name i want to meet her... vikram says.. ohh vikram i mean i did not meat with her we r online friend..i have never seen her nor she has seen me... ram shyly says.. oh my god ram don say that without seen each other u r fall in love... vikram teasingly says.. tu sach mari mar khayegi agar mujhe cheda bandh nhi kiya to.. ram irritatingly says... lets go.. vikram says, where? ram asks him.. yaar itna accha news diya han ek drink to banta han vikram reply..

warping the shawl around her shoulder priya comes out from her class room.. she moves towards the main road.. she is trying to stops a auto but no one willing to stops.. she takes out her cell phone from her bag and dials neha s number...after one ring neha pick up the call.."hey where r u yaar, i need ur help.. priya says.. tu ruk mai aa rhi hun neha reply and cuts the call... almost 15 min later neha stops her car in front of priya ..priya opens the front seat door and steps inside.. sitting on the car priya throw her bag on the bag sits.. she leans back and says uff i m so tried yaar... hmm wo to dekhi de rahi hain, neha reply... neha starts the car.. priya play a soft romantic music and closing her eyes she leans back.. she is thinking about mr unknown,,, after 30 min later when the car stops in a jerk priya immediately opens her eyes.. opps sorry neha says.. tu kaha le kar aay mujhe priya littile irritatingly says.. chal to mera shate teri thakan dur ho jayege.. neha reply..neha parks the car..both get down from the car and moves towards a bar.. neha r u crazy dont u know that i dont like this type of place.. priya angrily says.. neha takes her hands in her hand and says i know baby but vikram like this place so i just want to spend my evening here plz come with me plz plz neha makes a puppy face.. oh god neha u r impossible lets go.. priya and neha enters the bar.. the bar is very crowded.. all table r full.. neha lets go yaar look the bar is full..neha eyes is searching someone when she sees him..she smile and say i dont think baby the bar is full.. holding priya and neha moves towards a corner... she stops in front of a table.." hi vikram" neha smilingly says.. can i and my friends sits here she point to the empty char beside him.. ram is going to take two glass wine... looking at priya vikram smile and say yeah sure.. vikram is cursing his luck..he knows that if ram sees those girls he will eat him alive.. neha hurriedly goes near vikram and sits beside him.. i hope u have no proble if i sits here neha says... vikram gives her a fake smile and says off course not... priya sits on the opposite chair... priya is feeling really very awkward.. she is looking here and there.. ram brings the wine and puts them on the table.. looking at neha ram frown.. vikram makes a sorry face.. and murmurs dont insult me in front of them.. he turns and look at his sits.. for a moment he becomes speechless... after a ages he is seeing a beautiful woman... without saying anything ram sits on his char.. neha breaks the silent and says hi she extends her hands in front of ram i m neha ram takes her hands in his hands and says hlw i m ram..ram kapoor.. u mean the ram kapoor the owner of kapoor industries. neha excitedly says ram smile and nodded his head.. vikram extends his hands towards priya and says hi i m vikram.. priya handshakes with him and smilingly says hi i m priya sharma... again silent engulf them... priya cursing herself for calling neha and takes her help..if she does not call her than now she will not in such a awkward situation... a loud music playing on the background priya s head is paining like hell... neha gets up from her chair and pulls vikram with him... for a dance..vikram has no other choice left so he goes with her on the dance floor... now ram and priya alone... priya takes out her cell phone and checks whether her mr perfect snd any message or not.. she is getting worried for her mr perfect.. she told him to send a message when he reached home..he did not send any message that means he is still in the office... ram takes out his phone and stars to type

from: mr unknown
subject: sorry
to: miss unknown
hi where r u? i m sorry, i m messaging u so lately.. .. i m fine now and i took my lunch on time...

he presses the send button... and waiting for her reply..
priyas cell vibrate, she unlock the phone and opens the message...she does not know why she is missing him so badly..

from: miss unknown
subject :missing u.
to : mr perfect..
hi i m in a bar with my friend.. feeling very awkward... i dont know why.. i m missing u badly... want to chat with u...

priya send the message.. message deliver show..
ram read the message he gets little tensed..he immediately types ..

from: mr perfect
subject : r u ok na..
to: miss unknown
hey r u ok na.. which bar r u right now??

ram send the message...
when priyas cell phone vibrate ram looks at her...

from: miss unknown
subject: ...
to: mr perfet
my head is paining like hell. right now i m at party palace... sitting beside a unknown person uff sometimes i wish i could kill neha... because of her i stuck in this situation...

ram opens the message... reading the message he looks at priya who r looking somewhere else.. he cant believe his eyes.. he is actually sitting with his love.. his miss unknown.. for a moment he wants tell her that he is mr perfect..but he stops himself and thinks... priya is not showing any interesting towards me that means she doesn not like me.. if i tell her i m mr perfect she will takes it wrong away.. at first i need to know what types of man she likes...
from ; mr unknown
subject: ...
to: miss unknown
leave the place right now and go to ur home.. if neha denial to come with u..u take a taxi and leave the place...
reading the msg priya smile.. his msg is showing how much possessive he is about her ... ram is lost in her smile... he wants to feel this glossy lips.. ram shakes his head and says whats wrong with u ram... vikram is right i will go mad very soon.. priya excuse herself from ram.. and goes near the dance floor for searching neha... there is no sight of neha..every passing min priya is feeling sick.. a man suddenly push him from back,before she falls ioto the floor ram holds her in his arms..and murmurs r u ok?? priya is holding his hands tightly.. when she feels that ram is holding her she gets up and says yes i m ok thank u... i dont think so u r ok... u r sweating very badly... ram asks her... priya gives him a sweet smile and says it just i m feeling a little sick... if u dont mind i can drop u at ur place... ram says her.. right now priya wants to rum from this place hm ok but neha? priya asks him... dont worry about neha vikram is with her i m sure vikram will drop her at her place... ram reply... in all side people r pushing them backwards.. ram forwards his hand priya has no option if she does not hold his hand she will definitely fall onto the floor... priyA holds his hand ram pulls her near him.. he circle his hand around her shoulder..pushing the crowed they move near the exit door...

here is the part 3.. if like this part then plz hit the like but and leave ur feed back... seeing all ur response i will update next part...

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luvbalh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

really not done ah ..ram should tell here.. u stooped it .. i want more to read.. i demand ..😭

wat next update soon n pm me plz

Edited by luvbalh - 12 years ago

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Eram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

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sushfiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Wow lovely update pari...
Miss unknown identity got revealed in front of ram
loved it sweetu...
Jaldi update karo
Waiting...tnx for pm

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SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Thanku thanku thanku so much 4 pm me...nd after longgg time u r back so very happy to see u tht u r back nd moreover very happy to see u tht u already started give update ur ff...nd thz ff also...totally exciting update with ur magical writting...ram atlast find his love now waiting 4 priya's reaction..update soon asap! Nd thanks again 4 pm..give next update asap! Dnt 4get to pm me :D

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