OS: Calming the Sherni! - Page 3

👏fabulous, loved the way priya talked to ayesha, hope something likes this happens in balh too (fingers crossed) 🤗

Originally posted by: armanz

@Sangautam...you are a marvellous writer i am not saying this coz u did write wat we wanna see but just bcoz its the best track that really should have taken up by CVs and then even if they dont show the hug also it was a perfect story.You have given the best treatment to some of Harneets dialogues..Kudos to you..
No mother on earth beats around the bush to deal with the person who threatens her kid..Even animals/birds fight back we are still humans and have the ability to speak out..Really a great job.
I dont go with 'Bigamy' threat instead it would be ok for me if she said if i go to court your marriage will be judged null n void so dont fly high in the name of a relation which doesnt even exist or authentic as i am back.Thats my view only..
Learn CVs many are filled with better creative ideas than ur sinking n stinking tracks.

Originally posted by: sangautam

Thank you very much Armanz. I was very sad seeing Pihu on Thursday and then I saw your post. That is what inspired me to write. I will be honored if the CVs read my post. Some of my earlier stories came partly true. So lets hope.

You can call me viji.What ever i wrote was to express my condition post Kush n Pihu heart wrenching scene.But whatever u made is simply the best work which shall be liked by everyone n would be the best track if at all CVs hv the akal to follow this.
Yeah i hope that ur track may somehow be shown atleast Priya's sherni mode..

I wud luv to see you continue writing more often.

please add another part to it. please please

Superb OS.. Specially ending was presented brilliantly.. You r the one of the few best writers left in the forum thesedays. All the best writer have stopped writing.. Thankx a lot 4 giving us this masterpiece..

thats what we want in serial to happen...priya is a sherni...she made ayeshas mouth shut by her words...ayesha deverve more worse than this...thank you sandhya...

Hailaaa... Sandy... dis is wht i call superrr se bhi Uperrr wali OS...👍🏼 Absolutely Stunning yaar... i dnt knw wht to say yaar... ⭐️ I jst Loved Her Sherni Avatar...⭐️ Awsm dialoges... Superbly written... Haaayyyeee ko ayesha ko pada Chatakk... n dil Garden Garden ho gaya...😛 *clap clap* for dis one yaar