OS: Calming the Sherni! - Page 2

OMG...awesome way to deal with the issue at hand!!!1

i am bit disspointed with the tv show,these days...Ram is never there for thr kid or Priya...wonder wat he's doing????Thanks for bringing up this story...finally some justice n logic!😃😃Thanks a ton for the PM!

superblu written dear.. luved priya s sherni avatar.. kash cvs ye pade.. to gud yaar.. write mre!!!

wat a nice story .. plz do continue. kick ayesha out

Sandhya;

Stunning, absolutely cracking one shot!!! POWER SURGE!!...you rock ⭐️ ⭐️
we direly need this lady Hitler 🤣 back in the serial, only then everything will fall in its place... and I loved the understanding father; who was ready to give the space to her introvert daughter with her mom... otherwise Pihu wouldn't have shared her fear... simply awesome dialouges & nice sketching of the situation... great writing 👍🏼 👍🏼
and thanks a lot for the PM... 🤗

and yes, although you started it as OS, I would love to read more of it, just a request... 😃

Super bashing of Ayesha by PRK...
deserves every bit..
enjoyed it... splly RaYa Hug

@Sangautam...you are a marvellous writer i am not saying this coz u did write wat we wanna see but just bcoz its the best track that really should have taken up by CVs and then even if they dont show the hug also it was a perfect story.You have given the best treatment to some of Harneets dialogues..Kudos to you..
No mother on earth beats around the bush to deal with the person who threatens her kid..Even animals/birds fight back we are still humans and have the ability to speak out..Really a great job.
I dont go with 'Bigamy' threat instead it would be ok for me if she said if i go to court your marriage will be judged null n void so dont fly high in the name of a relation which doesnt even exist or authentic as i am back.Thats my view only..
Learn CVs many are filled with better creative ideas than ur sinking n stinking tracks.

Fantastic job Sandhya. I agree with some of the people who have commented on the post, you should really send this to the CVS. They just might get some inspiration and for once give us what we want(Ayesha out of KM for good and RaYaPi together back in KM)