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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 17

the moon shines in the cloudless sky with all her gleams. She looks like a glossy dish of silver. The sparkling stars twinkle around the moon and make her more beautiful.
The sky looks like a canopy beautified with the shining moon and glittering stars.a strong cold breeze is blowing outside...the white curtain is moving because of the air... priya is feeling a little cold.. she moves close to ram and snuggle to him...feeling her warmth ram stirs a little and slowly opens his eyes... priya s one hand is circle around his waist and her head is rested on his shoulder...ram raises his from the pillow a little bit... the moon light fall into her face...she is looking like a angel...ram touches her face lightly, his thumbs gently caresses corner of her lips... feeling his touch priya lazily opens her eyes... both r looking at each other eyes...priya lower her eyes and smile shyly... she sits on the bed and pulls the duvet and cover her naked body... ram is noticing her movement... priya back is rested on the head rested board... ram raises his body a little and buried his head into her belly, and slide his hand around her waist.. priya s finger makes it ways in his hair.. her finger top gently messaging his scalp... both are lost in their own thought... they cant still believe that they are one now... so many things happens in blink of eyes... priya.. ram finally breaks the silent...hmm priya softly reply... priya s one hand is lying lazily above his chest..ram holds priyas hand firmly... thinking something ram leaves her hand and gets up from the bed he wear his dress and moves near the window... looking at the sky ram inhale deeply... whats happens him suddenly? why he is behaving like that?? thinking all this priya also get down from bed and warp the duvet around her body.. she moves towards the window.. standing behind him priya slowly murmurs what happens ram? is everything ok? ram turns back and says priya i feeling very afraid, i felt that i forced u to surrender yourself to me.. i m feeling very guilty priya... i really love u priya i dont want to hurt you but i did it... priya i... priya cups his face and forces him look at her eyes, ram u did not force me for anything... i love u ram thats why i surrounded myself to you... one more thing ram i dont care about your past all i know that i want to start a new life with you... now plz stop feeling guilty..i dont want to waste our special night like this saying this priya wink...ram gives his killing smile " some one feeling hot, not bad saying this he lifts her in his arms and moves towards the bed...he gently places her on the bed and properly cover with duvet... priya is questioningly looking at him... " what" ram asks.. " nothing" priya making a sad face.. ram smile he slips beside her and takes her in his arms and whisper.. sleep now, i now u r tried... " priya is playing with his chest hair and say no i m not tried" ram kisses on her forehead and says" dont lie baby, and moreover before marriage no sex... priya raises her head from his shoulder and looks at him.." why r u looking at me like this" ram curiously asks her... priya points towards his lips and says" can i kiss there" ram knows that if she kiss her on his lips he will not able to control himself... ram slips his and in his back and makes her lay properly..he comes over her...both r looking at each other.. ram leans and takes her lips in his mouth..he slowly and gently sucking her lips...priya response with the kiss..when both needs the air, they apart from each other... priyas fingers roaming on his hair, ram closes his eyes, he hides his face on her neck and holds her tightly...holding each other tightly both drift into a deep sleep...

A new morning comes with new hope...new dreams..and new happiness... nobody knows when life changed... sadness turns happiness.. the sun is trying to peep into the room.. but the curtain stops it ways... ram stirs in his sleeps and extends his hands to take priya in his arms... when he feels that bed is empty he immediately opens his eyes.. in the room there is no sight of priya...ram gets panic.. he thinks that priya again leaves him.. he gets up from bed and searching her on the washroom.. the washroom is empty.. he feels a pang in his heart.. he makes his way on the room and sits on the bed hanging down his head.. he feels that someone is approaching towards him.. looking at the door way... his lips creeps into smile..his life his love holding a tray coming towards him... freshly bathing,her hair is hanging on her left shoulder..water r dropping from her hair.. she is glowing like a new bride.. in one night something changes on her...priya goes near him places the tray on the bed..now priya is standing in front of him... ram does not want to show his anxious.. if he looking at her eyes few more second than she will sure understands his fear..so ram takes his eyes from her and looks a side... priya knows his man very well.. priay bends a little and holds his face.places a soft kiss on his forehead and wish him good morning.." ram looks at me" priya insist him to look at her eyes..." ram i know u thought that i left u... thats why u r looking so dull... ram moves his eyes somewhere else.. look at me baby, i will never ever leave u... u have no idea ram what u mean to me... ur r the reason of my happiness my existence... i promise ram whenever ur eyes will search me u will find me beside u...saying this priya places a kiss on his lips and seal the deal... ram makes her sits on his lap... " priya how do u know me so well?? ram asks her.. priya leans back her back is rested on his chest and ram lips are on his neck..and ram hands is around her belly " because i love u ram i can feel ur fear ur happiness ur tension in one sentence i can feel ur heart" priya reply... ram lightly nuzzles his neck.. u small so good priya ram murmurs..priya shyly smile... and ram feels that..he sucks her neck hardly and leaves a red mark there.. priya moans in pain.." priya properly sits on his lap and turns towards him and says "what is this ram last night what u say no sex before marriage, now what is this?? ram laught and reply this is my morning kiss baby...u kiss me so u owe a kiss to me i just back the kiss... priya rubs her neck and stands up looking at him she angrily says, why u kiss me so hardly its paining... without saying anything ram also stands up and takes her in front of the mirror,, he points towards the mirror..priya sees the red mark... " i kiss u hardly so that i can left a red mark on your neck...so that when ever u stands in front of mirror, this red mark will remind u the kiss... priya face becomes red.. ram notices that he goes near her..and whisper when u blushing like this u look more sexy.. " ram " priya hits on his chest and hides her face on his neck.. ram laughs and hugs her...

both r sitting on the car..ram is driving the car... priya is gazing at the outside and lost in her thought.. in every two second ram is staring at her...ram clears his throat to getting her attention... hearing his voice priya looks at him.. " r u ok " with a concern voice priya asks him..." no" in one word ram reply... priya gets worried her full body she turns towards him and asks" what happens ram? why r u looking so dull?? priya anxiously asks him..." looking at the road ram reply how could i be fine when my life is looking so pale... at first priya does not understands his words.. when she understands she smiles... " whats the matter priya why r u looking so lost, ru u feeling guilty priya for last night... in a sad tone rams asks her... priya is gazing at her life..she places her hands on his shoulder and say no ram i m not feeling any guilty, its just i will miss you.. priya turns her head a side.. tears gather on her beautiful eyes... ram stops the car... ram calls her by her name..priya denials to look at him..tears r looking from her cheek...ram remove the seat belt..and leans towards her..he makes her look at him..priyas eyes is closed.ram wips her tears and say.. if u will crying like this i promise priya i will take u my home and tells everyone that we got married.. its hurting me yaar when i saw tears in ur eyes... ok fine u will not stops crying.. ram leaves her and tries to start the car..priya holds his hand and stops him..." i never realize that ram it will be so hard to stay away from you she chokes.. she gulps some air and says plz dont tell anyone about our relationship... after natasha and kartik marriage i want to disclose it to our family... ram holds her hand and says ok fine whatever u want i will do that.. but i have a condition if a see a single tear on ur eyes i will take u to my house... he kiss on her hand... looking at ram eyes priya says i love u ram... ram smile and reply i love u too baby... now can i start the car.. ram asks her..priya nodded in affirmative...

vikram and neha is sitting on the hall room.." neha i m feeling very scare for ram?? vikram worriedly says.. " whats happens baby, why r u so tensed is not everything ok with ram? neha asks.." yeha ram is fine but i dont like that isha come back, she is very cunning girl she will do anything to get ram back in her life" vikram sigh..." hmm u r right baby before she does anything we should do something'' neha says.." what should we do, my mind is so blind i do not able to think anything" vikram sadly say.." priya" neha says " what vikram little irritatingly says " i mean kyun na hum ram aur priya k beech aisa situation create kare ki dono ko ek dusre ko shadi karne k liya raji ho jaye... neha winks vikram.." but how" vikram asks her.. " tum sab kuch mujhe pe chod do mujhe pata han aab mujhe kya karna chahiya" neha smilingly says... i love u baby saying this vikram hugs her...


I M EXTREMELY SORRY FOR UPDATING SO LATELY... BG DARLING THIS UPDATE FOR YOU... IF U GUYZ LIKE THE UPDATE PLZ HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND LEAVE UR VALUABLE FEED BACK... LOVE U GUYZ... UR COMMENT ALWAYS FEEL ME SPECIAL...
Edited by aiyathasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muahhh jaanu...
awesome update jaanu...
yayyy ram aur priya sath sath 😳
raya bade ache lagte hai ...
aur ff ki meri jaanu bhi badi achi lagti hai😊
ram ji le jaaiye priya ko apne sath...
ab natasha aur kartik ki shadi ke baad raya ka shadi hoga..,
shadi mein raya ka shudh desi romance dekhne milega😳
thanku jaanu update ke liye...
muahhh 🤗

Edited by Mini1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res😛
woohooo welcome back pari 🤗
itne din gayab 😭😭😭
koi baat nhi ...super update mil gaya na 😃
super super superbbb raya moments
haay haay kya moments the 😉
pata nhi kya kahun
waise fan toh hun hi tumhari writing ki
pr jaanu muaaahhh mast update


Edited by sss283 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back pari...
Aftr a long time got to read ur writing
U made my day 👏
its treat to read ur update...
awesome write up 😳
Love d raya romance
tumne bht kam scene likha
Rams warning to priya was so sweet
it really hurts to stay away from ur loved ones 😭
Aur ye update short tha
more raya scenes plz...
Update soon
m waiting for d next part 😛 😉
Edited by 123fiza1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey u have given the update after long time but it was so gud and all is fine between ram and priya waiting till next part update soon
Edited by tulshan1989 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update...
Want natasha and karthiks marriage to hpn soon...
So tht raya be together...
Wat idea does habe in.her kit...
Waiting fr the next part...

Contn soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow u uodated after such a long time.. its jst lovely.. i read dis ff nd waited for u to update nd waited nd waited..
Finally got a nice update...
Plz continue soon.. i jst love dis story of raya... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
after a long time, welcome dear, its refreshing, finally we get to see RaYa together, am happy that both have accepted each other and moved forward, Neha aur Vikram ko kya malum ke yeh dono kitn aage badd gaye hain😉, anyways plz continue, and do PM me next time, please
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it... it was a long wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
itne dinon ke bad update but its fantastic dear loved it continue regularly 😳

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