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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

after a long time, welcome dear, its refreshing, finally we get to see RaYa together, am happy that both have accepted each other and moved forward, Neha aur Vikram ko kya malum ke yeh dono kitn aage badd gaye hainπŸ˜‰, anyways plz continue, and do PM me next time, please


thank u di.. Hmm this time i will try to update soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

itne dinon ke bad update but its fantastic dear loved it continue regularly 😳


tnx dear for liking it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

After so long finally u updated this..nd made my day.. πŸ€—
I just love reading ur write ups..
So now finally ram nd priya became RaYa nd now they together..loved RaYa romance.. 😳
Ram's insecurity, the way they have accepted nd understands each other, Ram's warning that he will take her home..everything was too good.. πŸ‘
Bechare Vikha RaYa ko sath lane ki soch rahe hai.. πŸ˜‰
This time cont preety soon darling..plz
Do Pm too...



thank u viru darling...
Aww mujhe pata nhi tha meri update se teri day ban jayegi, agar pata hota to kab ka update kr deti... Thank u sweetheart this lovely comments k liya...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aiyathasan



thank u viru darling...
Aww mujhe pata nhi tha meri update se teri day ban jayegi, agar pata hota to kab ka update kr deti... Thank u sweetheart this lovely comments k liya...


I have always said i just love ur writing... πŸ‘
Nd now u know na keep this in mind.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
I always wait for ur write ups.. πŸ˜›
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aiyathasan


thank u pari itne acche comment k liya... Tum teeno k comment mujhe special feel karate han... Love u baby... Muuaahhh


aww ye koi kehne ki baat h
tum ho hi itni spcl aur tumhari writing magical h
to achhe comments bante h na πŸ˜›
so jaldi update karo sweetu
muahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
<div align="center"><font color="#FF0000" size="4">PART 18</font>
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<font size="2">After dropping priya at her home ram directly goes to his office... yesterday he took day off so today he has to do some extra work... on the other hand priya wants to take a day off.. but she denials this thought she recently joined the company so the company will to allow her to take a leave.. and moreover she does not want to take rajat helps... before leaving the house for office.. she takes out her ceLl phone from her bag and starts to type a message

" hi where r u?? i m going to office... missing u badly..."

she presses the send button... ram is going through a file when his phone beeps he looks at the mobile screen.. seeing the name he smiles.. he takes the phone in his hand and press the read button.. reading the message he makes a face and starts to type..

" i m at office.. so much work to do... why r u going to office i dont like rajat... me too baby..
he press the send button... priya already finds a auto..she is on the way to her office... she read the message and again types..

" dont feel insecure.. nobody will have the dare to take away ur priya from you... and moreover i m bound to do this job before joint there i sign a contract that before 3 months of my work i cant leave the office... listen i know who hungry r u so plz order some healthy food and eat them without making any face.. i m almost near to my office.. when u will get free give me a call... i love u baby..take care..."

ram is looking at his phone waiting for priyas reply..when his phone beeps.. he opens the message... his lips curls up into a sweet smile reading the first line... he puts the phone on his desk.. he calls to his secretary and orders a apple and a green tea.. hearing his boss breakfast menu jenny becomes little shocks.. she cant believe her ear... she just says ok sir..

priya enters at her cabin..she is feeling a little uneasy...she does not know how to face rajat.. the thought that rajat loves her makes her feel disgusting...in her whole life she only loves one man and that is her husband her ram.. thinking about ram her minds goes back to yesterday night,, how he filled her forehead with his blood... her hand automatically touchs her forehead and smile shyly... it is so strange yesterday i thought i lost ram for forever but know today i m mrs priya ram kapoor... she shakes her head and murmurs priya plz for god sakes leaves ram thought for sometimes and concentrate ur work.. it almost lunch time.. she closes her files and leans back.. she is really tried..after some minuets later she sits properly..she is hoping that ram will call her.. she is waiting for his call... ram finishes his meeting he comes his cabin... he takes out his mobile from his pocket and dials priyas number.. in one ring priya receives the call..
"hi, ram softly says
"hi, whats happens?? feeling very tried right? priay asks
"how do u know that i m feeling tried?? ram surprisingly asks her..
"hearing ur voice..aapne lunch kiya?? priya asks him
"no.. tumne kiya..ram says
"no" priya reply
"hmm i know that u r waiting for my call.. now sweetheart take ur lunch otherwise u will fall sick.. ram cutely says
"ram i love u.. in chokes voice priya says..
"hey darling kya hun aa sad kyun ho?? uss idiot rajat ne kuch kaha kya?? ram worriedly asks her..
"hmm no aise hi ajebse dar lag rhi han, aisa lag rhi han ya sab sapna han jab aakhe khulungi sapna toote jayegi..priya sadly says..
ram thinks something and says " priya gives me 15 min.. he cuts the call
priya becomes more sad..she push her lunch box..leaning in the back she closes her eyes...
priya anxiously waiting for ram calls..already pass 15 minutes... she gets up from her chair and moves towards the window..she push the curtain a side.. she is looking at the outside.. she is missing ram.. she is wondering why ram cuts the call so hurriedly... before she knows a man slips his hand on her waist and hugs from back.. for a second priya gets scare.. but smelling his fragrance she understands that..the man is none other than ram..priya turns back and hugs him tightly...she press her head hardly against his chest... several minutes later ram breaks the hug...he cups her face and kiss her soft lips hardly... priya tries to push him but he firm his grips on her waist.. when both needs the air ram leaves her lips..." ram what is this.. priya gulps some breath and says..." u said na u r feeling that all r dreams so i just want to make u believe that all r not dream all r real..saying this ram winks her...priya just gives a stern looks.. ram takes her hand in his hands and leading to her near the table..he makes her sits.. he opens all the packet that he brought before coming here... ram pulls the chair and sit beside her... " will u ive me the honor to feed u..ram cutely says priya just nod her head.. she is feeling so much blessed.. she cant show how much happy she is to see him here...ram feed her..and priya feed him... both r lost in the moment... lunch time almost over... . drinking the water ram says now baby i have to go.. priya hugs him and places a sift kiss on his forehead..love u ram... i love u too baby...

neha calls natahsa and tells her meet with her in her place in the afternoon and and also told her to bring kartik with her... evening time neha waiting for natasha and kartik.. door bell rings neha opens the door and welcome kartik and choti... natasa hugs her and say whats the matter neha why r u call us so urgent... pehle andar to aao phir batati hun..neha says.. neha bring uice and snacks for them..she is sitting opposite of them.. neha clear her throat and says natasha and kartik mujhe tum dono k help chahiya... kartik and natasha confusingly looking at her.. neha added i mean mujhe ram aur priya ko milane k liya tum dono ki help chahiya... in same time kartik and nuts says "what" what r u saying kartiks asks.. hold on guyz let me complete my sentence first...neha says.. dekho kartik and nutsram aur priya aakeli han aur dono k shadi k umar bohat pehle hi chali gayi han.. aab undono srif family k bade mai sochte han.. sayed undono ko aisa lagta hoga ki un dono ki shadi k umar nhi han..tum dono hi socho kya kuch nhi kiya ram aur priya ne tum logo ko settle krne k liya aab tum logo k badi ham apne bhai aur di k liya kuch karne ke.. jaha tak mai ram aur priya ko janti hun mujhe lagta han dono ek dusre ko like karta han par kabhi iss cheez ko accept nhi karta... to mai chati hun hum sab milke kuch aisa kare ki dono ko realize ho ki dono ek dusre ko like karta han aur ekdusre k liya perfect han... saying all this neha staring both of their face.. she is anxiously waiting for their reply... after some moment later kartik breaks the silent and says i m with u i m ready to do anything to my sister happiness.. nuts also joint with him... yaay neha almost jumps from her sofa... neha hugs both of them and says i love u guyz.. neha breaks the hug and says our mission will be start from today... neha instruction them what to do now... three of them satisfied with the plan..they hi five..

evening time takes her bags and comes out from her cabin.she thanks her luck that rajat does not comes her room nor call her.. standing in front of the office priya is waiting for a cab.. suddenly a bmw car stops in front of her... front side sits mirror slide down..priya looks into the car and smile..priya opens in front of the car door... she sits on the car.. before priya says anything ram orders her to puts the seat belt..but priya denials to puts the seat belt ram opens his seat belt.. and leans over her...they r body is touching each other.. their lips r away some inches... ram pulls the seat belts and close it.. before he sits properly he kiss her on her cheek... ram starts the car...
"kya soch rhi ho" looking at the road ram asks her..." kuch nhi" priya reply.." hmm pata han ya soch rhi ho ki mai ya kya kr rhi hun" ram smilingly says...priya looks at him and says "aap ko kaise pata han ki mai ya soch rhi thi" ram smile and reply "kaise na pata ho tumare heart jo meri pass han wo kehe rhi thi ki meri biwi mujhe miss kar rhi han aur usse left bhi chahiya" by the way tum mujhe dekh k kush nhi hun hi ho?? "kush to bohat hun par ya soch k accha nhi lag raha meri liya aapko kitni taklif jhelne pad rhi han" priya sadly reply... agar bhul gayi ho to phirse tumeh yaad kara du, tum meri zindegi ho,meri khushiya ho, tumare cheherepe ek muskan dekhne k liya mai kuch bhi kar sakti hun... ram seriously says..priya leans a side she circle her hands around his left hand and rest her head on his shoulder... i love u ram,, i m so lucky ram that u r mine... ram smile and kiss her forehead and says love u too priya...and added only u r not lucky i m also..u r only mine in all sense... ram plays the radio.. 'saans mai teri saans milito mujhe saans aayi' playing on the radio.. both r lost in the song... both r feeling complete... priya looks upwards ram loos at her..both eyes meet.. ram places kisses on her eyes priya closes her eyes... ram murmurs thank u priya making me complete...

<font color="#0000FF">HEY GUYZ I M BACK WITH MY UPDATE..HEHEHE NOBODY WILL NOT ABLE TO COMPLAIN THAT I M UPDATED AFTER A LONG TIME... HAPPY READING I HOPE U GUYZ LIKE THIS PART..PLZ DONT FORGET TO HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND LEAVE UR VALUABLE COMMENT...
VIRU DARLING HERE IS THE UPDATE I HOPE U WILL LIKE IT..</font>
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Edited by aiyathasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy mein first..thank u darling for super fast update.. πŸ€—
Wow..lovely update..
Loved RaYa ka msg wala, lunch wala nd car wala love... 😳
Priya feeling sad nd Ram made her smile by surprise visit..aww ❀️
Both of them knows each other very well.. πŸ‘
Ab dekhte hai Neha ne kya plan banaya hai nuts or kartik ke sath..bechare faltu mein mehnat kar rahe hai.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ram really sweetheart-desi-glitters-4
priya feel sad and he want make her happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx for this fast update..
Raya scenes are too cote...
nd neha...wats in her kitty???
Karthik nuts ka shaadi jldi karavo yaar...
Phir raya bhi hojayegi...

Waiting for the next part...
Contn soon..

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