FF 'pyar me hota h kya jadu'LAST UPDTED ON PG85 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taashu11

awesome work... really want to see how long this cross connection works...



my plsr dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

Veena lovely FF starts... intro it self very intersting yaar... loved how u took over the story... of all the in FF so waiting for next update do update soon...



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

wowoowwo what an update i loved it... veena ji wah wah lift is the most imp part of RaYa's story from begnning... yet again... so who is that Neha's friend... or is it Neha her self... would like to know waiting for next upadate n see what it is here so going to read [/;)]



please b there dear...hopefully u will enjoy😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saniya9919

Enjoyed reading both the parts. Awesome updates.


plsr dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sreev12

hehehe ... achcha shock tha Veena Priya ko!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

ok

lift wala part bahut accha tha
kafi acche lek the
totally different story
Apke FF ke saat jo vm bhi hota hai who tho kisi aur ke paas hota hi nahi hai
loved all the part
please continue


thank u so much yar...it means lot for me...that u all like it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

ULTA PULTA...
THANKS...
CONT SOON



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

part 1
awww what an part Veena loved it when Priya reads Ram's latters... awesome... yaar kya baat hai it was really gud... somthing new n it was something diffrent n it was something awesome... wowoowowow really nice love the bond of Neha n Priya... something gud is coming next... really Ram is so sccha n bhola... too cute...



stay with me darling...bhagwan ne to mujhe bheja hi h sabka bheja khane k liye aur life enjoy krne k liye...hopefully u all enjoy meri sangat😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovestory part 4

"phir ye bechainiya kyun"


priya apne kamre me rhti h...use apne aur neha k upar abhi bhi bht gussa aa rha hota h...actully gussa to neha pr aa rha hota h pr khud pe kya h ye use bhi samajh nhi ata h...sharam keh lo gussa kh lo apni bewkufi pe hasi keh lo...actully dekha jaye to asal galti to priya ki hi thi na whi to apne ap hi cheeze predict krti ja rhi thi...neha se to usne kuchh puchha hi nhi mana ki neha ko pta chalne k bad bhi neha ne sach nhi btaya...par jo bhi ho yha to priya ne khud hi ye awkwrd situation create kari khud k liye...priya vikram k bare me sochne ki koshis krti h pr use bar bar ram ka khyal aa jata h...use samjh hi nhi ata h ki aisa kyun ho rha h...theek h ki usne thodi der k liye ram ko use vikram samajh liya tha pr phir bhi end of the day she know na ki wo ram h to ab kyun soch rhi h uske bare me...

udhar ram bhi ek ajeeb si situation me h...ek to wo subah subah note na milne ki wajah se irritate tha upar se wo priya...aaj bechara pehli bar mila tha usse aur usne bhi aisa look de diya ki ram chah k bhi priya ki nazare bhul nhi pa rha h...wo jb bhi ankhe band krk kisi cheez pr cnsntrate krne ki koshis krta h pr use phir se priya ka muskurata nazare jhukaye hua chehra dikh jata...ram chauk jata h ki ye kya hua??? kyun hua??...khair dono apni apni soch ko whi chhod kr sone ki koshis karte h...aur ram to sone k liye bht bechain tha qki subah use note jo chahiye tha...

next morning...

neha pria k pas aati h..

neha...hi priya..gudmorning

priya ansr nhi krti h aur andr chali jati h...neha peechhe peechhe jati h...but priya use ignore karti h..

neha...priya kya hua yar...bat to karo.

priya...nhi baat krna h mujhe

neha...are yar abhi tak naraz ho...are we r frnds na itna bhi mazak nhi r sati kya main...

priya...kar sati ho...lekin wha tum soch bhi nhi sati ho ki meri kya halat ho gyi thi ...main to ye soch rhi hu i wo dono mere bare me kya soch rhe honge...soch rhe honge kitni chalu ladki h do do ko...shit yar neha vry bad

neha...hahaha...sorry i am vry sorry but dnt worry wo dono aisa kuchh bhi nhi soch rhe honge..ram ko main janti hu wo to aisa soch hi nhi sakta h aur rhi bat viram ki to ram ka dost h to kuchh soch to uski bhi ram jaisi hi hogi na...to dnt wrry..cmon ab gussa thuk do...please please please...are bola na i am sorry

priya...are sorry bole rhi ho ya dant rhi ho

neha...ok baba...i am sorry..ok change this topic...main aisa krti hu kuchh dino me ek achhi si outing ka programme bnati hu phir sub mil k sare issue shot out kr lenge ...ok

priya...ok

neha...achha ab to de do

priya...kya???

neha...are yar note

priya...wo to mne nhi likha ..gussa thi na isiliye

neha...shit yar..tum mujhe marwaogi yar

priya...tumhe???

neha...are yar mera mtlb h wo uspe chillayega to wo mujhpe chillayegi na

priya...oh sorry...

neha...koi baat nhi ab to likh k de do kuchh bhi

priya...abhi???...sorry yr abhi to bht late ho rha h...kal deti hu na aaj mng kr lo please

neha...achha theek h

udhar ram wait krta rhta h pr aaj bhi lettr nhi ata h..ab to bhai rambabu k liye ovr ho gya..kya h na ki story chahe jis bhi style me likhi jaye..character chahe jaise bhi potrate kiye jaye...pr ek baat h jo kabhi nhi badal sakti aur wo ye h ki ram priya kabhi bhi nhi sudhar sakte agar ye sudhar gye to life ka maza khtm ho jayega...to itna to bht h rambabu ko khadus awtar me lane k liye...to ram babu ko gussa aa gya aur unhone gusse me ek note likh dala aur bina bookey k hi bhej diya neha k pas..is waqt neha ko note milta h to use bht ajeeb lagta h pr asusual neha to neha h...use bina padhe rakh deti h...sham ko priya ko dene k liye...

@evning...

neha...priya..

priya...are neha tum??? is waqt

neha...ha ana pada...sorry to disturb u

priya...cmon yar bina mtlb ki formalities mt kiya karo...aao baitho...bolo kya hua???

neha...kuchh nhi...bs ek kamal ho gya

priya...mtlb??

neha..are lettr aa gya

priya...hahaha...tum bhi na...

neha...achha chalo main chalti hu tum likh k rakhna main subah aati hu

priya...ok...by tc

priya bade hi excitment se lettr kholti h..actully use bhi to lettr padhna achha lagta tha...bt is bar padh k priya ka deemag hi khrab ho jata h..are ram waisa hi h to priya bhi to waisi hi h...

ram's note..
tum apne aap ko samjhti kya ho..tumhe ek note likhne me itni mehnat lag rhi h...attitude dikha rhi ho tumhe kya lagta h main rh nhi paunga in notes k bina...madm itna bhi nakra dikhane ki jarurat nhi h...are ek din nhi aaya to mne socha busy hogi...pr aaj bhi nhi...aur upr se koi excuse bhi nhi...jaise mujhpe ehsan kr rhi ho notes likh k...to main bhi koi mara nhi ja rha hu..mne bhi bina feelings k likh diya note...

priya note padh k sochti h kitna khadus insan h yar do din note nhi mila to iske to tewar hi badal gye...hadh h...mai soch rhi thi bht bhola h pr ye to attitude ka gola h...mujhme attitude dekh rha h...khud me itna attitude bhara h wo nhi dekh rha h...wo ladki isko jhelti kaise h...priya ko bhi gussa aa jata h wo bhi ek gusse wala note likh deti h...neha wo note ram ko bhijwa deti h..jise padhne k bad ram ka gussa aur badh jata h...

priya's note...
maine kab kaha ki main ehsan kar rhi hu aap pr...aur main attitude dikha rhi hu ya aap...are kisi ki koi mazburi nhi ho sakti h kya...nhi mila hoga waqt mujhe likhne ka to nhi likh payi..isme itna ovrreact krne ki kya bat h..ek note hi to h...aaj nhi to kal aa hi jata...aur jb feelings nhi h to likhne ki kya jarurat h...mat likhiye...main bhi koi mari nhi ja rhi hu aapke note k liye...hadh h

next morning...

priya k pas ram ka note aata h...

ram's note...ek note hi to h??...tumhare liye ye sir ek note h...ab pta chal rha h ki kiske pas kitni feeling h...2 min k kam k liye tumhe fursat nhi mili...kaise milegi...mujhse jyada dost jo important h...sahi kaha tumne jb feelings hi nhi h to kya jarurat h likhne ki..koi jarurat nhi h na tumhe na mujhe...

priya's note...

thank u vry much mera ek extra badha hua kam band krne liye...

isi k sath dono note likhna band kr dete h...neha priya k pas jati h note lene to use ye sab pta chalta h to wo litrlly khushi k mare kud hi jati h...priya use ajeeb se dekhti h...qki jo ho rha tha wo priya ko achha nhi lag rha tha...

priya...tum itni khush kyun ho rhi ho

neha...are...main...wo...ha...ab mujhe lettr box nhi bnna padega na

priya muskura k rh jati h..udhr ram bhi bht upset rhta h..to vikram usse puchhta h to wo sari bat use btata h..vikram ko bhi koi khas fark nhi pada...actully uski problm to ram se bhi badi thi qki wo priya k bare me kuchh bhi nhi janta aur wo janna chahta h pr kaise???...to ram sugges krta h ki wo neha se puchh le neha to priya ki bht achhi dost h...jindagi apni raftar se chal rhi thi...priya ki sagai tay ho jati h..

to b continue...

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aage kya hoga bahut kamaal ki likhti hai aap...

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