RaYa OS:'O Re Piya..'(KC Special) Part 3 on Pg 7

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Again u did the same thing, yeh suspense na ek din mast hi dalegi mujhko, anyways update sooon, and its amazing, bare dino baad hook wala love dekhne ko mila, raha bhi nahi jata aur sehna bhi nahi jata, kya hoga RaYa ka, post ASAP

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gupta90

@gupta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awww you are writing it really well , please post the next part soon😊

and if possible PM me when you update it😊

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mansi_gupta

@mansi_gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

thnk u thnk u thnk u sooo much...it was awesome...O re piyaaa...hayeee hook scene.,...light ko bhi tbhi aana tha...kya pta chota bhai ya bhen mil jaati pihu ko...😛

update soon...😊

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sundari3693

@sundari3693

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

😛 😛 😛 Pallavi...yaar aapne to kamal ker diya..wah wah..Good to remind us BINDI SCENE..
Jaise kuch accha scene aata hai to hamesha Aapki RAYA Train TUNEL se pass hoti hai.. 😭 .Ab jaldise Raya ka love scenedekhneko tadap rahi hai...jaldi ker meri jaan tu.. 😉 😉 😉

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Ranee

@ranii.sharma

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Very Cute OS! Update soon!! You leave at the best parts lol Waitingg😳

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haribol79

@haribol79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

nice update.. waiting for next one

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leo4ever

@leo4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

wah maza agya now greedy for part three!! kuch aisa link karu ki k priya full talli hujyae!! 😆

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saniya9919

@saniya9919

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Loving it. Hook scene was very romantic !❤️ Waiting for the next update.

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safna1030

@safna1030

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

aww... lovely storyy... plzz update soon... eagerly waiting fr ur story...:))))

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TheFatWriter

@TheFatWriter

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Awwiiie Pallavi! 👏 What an OS!! I think you should make it not 3 but 30 parts atleast and take us through RaYa Karva Chowth and Diwali...we dont mind Christmas as well.

Kitni acchi likhi ho yaar,...fantastic creativity.⭐️ The candle, the power off, the blouse hook...ufff!!!
Ab third part ke liye wait mat karao please...

Ab problem ho gaya ki hum itna hi pyara expect karne lagenge in the show...aur EK tho itna accha nahi dikhayegi. 😕

Good job dear!!

-Arathi Narayan