RaYa OS:'O Re Piya..'(KC Special) Part 3 on Pg 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
(CONDA KA HAQ?? WHAT THE F**K!!😆😆)
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
loved the whole update dear and priya ki tayari...
neha ko lagi thi bhook
isliye nahi aayi woh close kare priya ke blouse ka hook ..😆😆😆😆😆😆
aur please yeh secret person koi aur na ho hamare ramji ho ...with bg raam raam jai raja raam raam jai priya ka raaam 😉😆😆😆😆😆 loved the update and thanks for the pm of such awesome update do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome and mind blowing update,, 👏👏 👏
can't wait for next part .. pls update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aray jaldi likhu agaye ka kab tak bechari priya hook pakre khare rehe gi andhera mei 😉

amazing read!! kudos
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Awwwiii Pallu...👍🏼 Haaayyyeee Os Os... Ahaaa... Lalalallaa.. Sbse phle toh Muaaahh ❤️ Ieee Awesome yaaarrr.. Haha conda ki kyu Band bjwaate ho sb yaar...😛 N oyeee ye kya?? Hook pe cntinue kr diya...Itni der m toh hook se aage.. ahem ahem 😉 Jaldi update kro madam...😊 Dil Khush kr diyaa...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Hayee... superb.. Ram kya Priya ko lene aaya hain flat pe???

Raha nahi gayq Gollu se... aur Mauke pe entry li hain...

continue soon pls.. and VERY HAPPY DIWALI TO ALL
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all Thnks a ton guyss..Read all the comments.Thank you for liking and appreciating it.Am overwhelmed it really really means a lot.Cldnt rply to each one of u and am sorry for that.But thnks once again.. 😊😊

And Mansi Gupta lo 2nd part.. (And guys sorry for the late update.. )
Part 2:-
Priya:No thats not Neha...And then she realises..That touch..the familiar touch..How can she be wrong in recognising it..Its HIM...Yes its Him..but how? How cum he's here..She turns and her eyes meet his..Yes its him her RAM!!
There's complete silence.He looks at her,mesmerised with her beauty..Yes he can see her in the little light thats of the candle..Shez looking stunning those dove eyes which are lost in his,her perfume,and her lips..His hands are still at her hook.There's an intense eyelock and ram clasps the hook.Priya shivers at the touch but does not move...
O re piya haye..O re piya..
O re piya haye..o re piya...
Udne laga kyun..mann bawla re..
Aya kaha se ye hausla re..
O re piya haye..O re piya..
The eyelock still continues...
[Nazare bole duniyan tolein dil ki zubaan
Haye dil ki zuban.. ]
Ram moves his face a bit forward and Priya too..He puuls her toward him.Their lips are inches away..Priya shuts her eyes.Ram puts her flick behind her ear with his finger.Moves his hand over her face and then unknowingly kisses her lips softly... [Piyaaa...]
[Ishq mange Ishq chahe koi toofan... hayee
Chalna ahiste ishq naya hai..pehla ye wada humne kiya hai..
O re piya haye O re piya... ]
And... TING!!! The lights come and RaYa come back to their senses and look at each other.
Peehu comes calling Priya...
Peehu:Mamma..Mamma... [Ram and Priya let go of each other and look away] Mamma apko help mil gayi? Vo main Neha aunty ko dhund rahi thi par vo nazar nai ayi to maine Papa se keh diya..😆
Priya:Looks and Ram through the corner of her eyes and says Ha Peehu help mil gayi..☺️
Peehu leaves and she turns to Ram..By the way Mr.Kapoor aa..aap ya..yaha kk..kaise?? I mean..
Ram:Arey tumhari problem kya hai yar?Tum humesha mujhse yahi sawal puchti ho...
Priya:Aap galat samajh rahe hai Mr.Kapoor,maine isliye pucha qki aao yaha achanak?Ya aap mujhse ye kehne aye hai ki main KM na aau??
Ram:Main aisa kyun kahunga?MAin yaha Dadi k kehne par aya hu.Unhone mujhe tum logo ko KM drop karne k liye kaha hai.. (He says drop coz he has to go to the office 4 sum emergency but does not memtion it to Priya). Qki Neha uske ghar gayi hai aur Nats direct parlour se ayegi..Samajh gayi?Ya aur kuch sawal puchne hai tumhe? [Priya looks down and nods "No"]
Chalo ab late ho raha hai mujhe..
The trio leaves.Ram sits in the driver seat.Priya and Peehu sit on the back seat.
Peehu:Mamma aj aap bahut beautiful lag rahe ho.Haina papa?Kaho na.. Mumma aap waise hi beautiful lag rahe ho jaise aap har sal lagte ho,Jab aap aise red sari pehente ho..
Ram:hmm..ha..
Peehu: Pata hai Papa mumma year me sirf one day hi Red sari pehenti hai aur fir bohot beautiful lagti hai..Ram looks at Priya through the mirror.She looks at him too.. Par mumma ek mistake hai apki bindi..jo aj bhi tedhi lagi hai.Pata hai Papa mumma ko kabhi bhi seedhi bindi lagani nai ati.. [Ram and Priya's eyes meet at this sentence but suddenly Ram looks away] FB.. [THE TEDHI BENDI SCENES]
They reach KM.Priya hesitates as the car enters the gate.Priya gets nostalgic and all the moments spent at KM flash in front of her eyes.Right from her Grihapravesh to the day she left with Raina.Tears roll down her eyes but she wipes them and gets down from the car.
Dadi and KK come Priya takes their blessings and they take her with them.Natasha and Neha are already present.Dadi says lets start the pooja as ita already late and now Priya is here too.Everyone gets ready for the pooja but Ram is nowhere to be seen.
Rishabh calls Ram and informs the others that Ram had to go to the office as there's an emergency.Dadi is angry on Golu Puttar and says ane do use dekhti hu main.Kaha tha usse ki aj koi kam nai karega..Par ye kisiki mane to na..
Priya thinks maybe Ram doesnt want to get into all this.He's angry and must have allowed her to come to KM only because it was dadi's wish.
Priya:Rehne dijiye dadi.Main apna vrat aj bhi usi tarah todungi jaise 5 salon se todti ayi hu.Ma please hum Mr.Kapoor ko yaha ane k liye force nai karenge.Aur waise bhi vi is sal mere samne hai yahi mere liye kafi hai. (She tells others to continue with their pooja and excuses herself)
After sometime Priya starts her pooja.Lights the diya,keeps in in the seive shuts her eyes and prays for Ram,holding the seive in one hand and his snap in other hand.
She opens her eyes and cannot believe what she sees...
To be continued...
(Had to make it into 3 parts will update the 3rd part soon)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Read both parts...
must say awesome job dear...
continue soon m waiting... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Awesome update yaar!! Too good! The hook scene was so romantic! 😳
Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

ram help priya

plz now update soon becoz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
did she ram or photo of ram? why this suspense😆? don't tell me it is his photo,hopefully not let him come😉
update soon

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