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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesome start dear never watched much MJHT but knows the chaerecters... u have add all the MJHT chaerecters... can u pls add Neha Vikram Nuts & Kartik too can imnagine RaYa without them it would be really to see BALH & MJHT team together... & do PM me for next update...

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luvumjht

@luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: fanbalh
sorry 4 commenting late dear...
raya story in mjht style sounds great...
first update was just terific...
looking forward to d nxt one...
plz update soon...

No need for sorry's yaar ...ur wrd of appreciation helps me go frwd with ma wrk ...thnk u for lyking n supporting ma wrk... will post nxt update in day or two

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luvumjht

@luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: _CandyCream_
Wow yaar! Amazing start!! Loved it!
It was so cute!!! <3 Can't wait for the next part!

Thnk u 😊

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luvumjht

@luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: leena04
awesome start dear never watched much MJHT but knows the chaerecters... u have add all the MJHT chaerecters... can u pls add Neha Vikram Nuts & Kartik too can imnagine RaYa without them it would be really to see BALH & MJHT team together... & do PM me for next update...

Hey leena ...the stry is mainly abt raya only ...this ff is just a collection of sweet moments bundled together ... promise in my nxt ff i will add neha vik n otr balh characters 😊

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Siacutie

@Siacutie

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

1st part was awesum

continue soon😃

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sss283

@sss283

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Intro was cool
part 1-super duper one
aww raya romance interrupted😳😳
waiting for next part...😛

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luvumjht

@luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Siacutie
1st part was awesum
continue soon😃

thnk u :)

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luvumjht

@luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Alya1991
Nice update

thnk u :)

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luvumjht

@luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sss283
Intro was cool
part 1-super duper one
aww raya romance interrupted😳😳
waiting for next part...😛

hope remaining parts impress u more ;)

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luvumjht

@luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

people who want Pm's plz send me frnd request :)
Chapter 2

Priya went to her kids room ... karan and arjun were lost in deep slumber... the very sight of the two melted her heart...she slowly went to their bed and ruffled their hair...

P: Chalo baccho subah ho gayi utth jao

K (karan) : Mumma 5 mins aur plzzz 😕

A(Arjun) : par aaj saturday hai mumma ...aaj scul bhi nahi jana hai 😕 😕

P : arrey bacho ...aaj bahar chalna hain nah ...get up

K: par mumma bahut neend aa rahi hai 😲

A: haan mumma

P:Theek hai ..so jao tum dono ...main aur papa akele hi mumbai chale jaate hai 😆

Hearing this the kids suddenly got scared and woke up...but Priya still continued

P: waise papa keh rahe the ki hum sab beach pe jayenge, chocolates khayenge,,,,,papa ye bhi keh rahe the ki Karan aur Arjun

Hearing this the kids strted giggling ...hugged Nupur from behind and kissed her and said in unison

Karan n Arjun (togther ) : Ma its Arjun n Karan not karan and arjun ...😆

Priya cudnt stop but adore the 2 mini Mr Kapoors infrnt of her ...she again put both her hands in their hair ...and again in unison hey shouted

N: Mumma baal mat chuo na

Priya glared at both of them ...

P: Dono 10 mins main fresh hoke dinning table pe brkfst ke liye aayo 😡

Karan and Arjun both sensing the fury rushed towards the washroom...

P: Bilkul apne papa pe gaye hain 😡

suddenly a voice frm behind : to kya padosi pe jayenge...😛

Priya turned around ...Ram was standing on the door ...with his 32 all out ...flashing his dimples ...evn aftr 8 years of marriage ...Priya cudnot resist the smile...

😉 controlling her emotions ...she continued her duel wid ram

P: hmmm ... padosiyo ka toh pata nahi ...par mera ek bf tha coll main ...usse toh kafi aadate bhi milti hain dono ki

R: haye Mrs Kapoor aese toh mat jalao nah

Priya enjyng ram's melodrama put her arms arnd ram's neck and continued

P: Btw aaj shaam main usse milne bhi waali hun coll reunion main ...

She suddenly put her hand in Ram's head and ruffled his hair

R: Priya

P: Ram wish me luck for ma spcl date wid ma bf😆

and priya rushed towards the kitchen

Ram smiled to himslf ...and said

R: haan priya aaj to tum sach main apne bf se milogi...date pe...hmmm ...maybe sumthng more...😳

Edited by luvumjht - 12 years ago