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Krish

@kchinoy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wow...Just wow...You are the top favourite writer now. Wow nothing more to say. Just amazing.

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Firdos12

@Firdos12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wao it's was like 5th march...BTW itni raat ko...give me pm haa when u write os ff

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sahana747

@sahana747

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

⭐️Simply Superb.I can visualize the scene and hear them speak those words, that realistic it is .

Thanx for PM

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shonuz_mom

@shonuz_mom

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Its awsome Punya. Waiting for the update of your other FF

Edited by shonuz_mom - 12 years ago

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Eram

@viny_queen

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hope so after party is type ka koi scene ho

update...

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pasumarthisa

@pasumarthisa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Punya,

Loved it. Wow, sochne mein aur soch ko sach hote dekhne mein kya farak hai,Priya ko dikh gaya. And I liked the lines

Haq ki baat kar rahi ho tum? Arey, tumhein kisne haq diya meri life ke decision lene ka? Tumhare bina life mein main aage badhoon ya na badhoon, ye decide karne wali tum kaun hoti ho? Aur rahi baat Rajat ki, toh mujhe kya pata tha ki uski Pooja meri hi Priya hai? Tum toh mar chuki thi na hum sab ke liye?

Wah, kya intensity thi. Priya really needed shock treatment to get up from that slumber. Next time when you write OS, thoda aapka woh subtle romance dikha dena.

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awesome, u remind me of RaYas fight episode of 5th March, specially that part when RAM is saying kyun taqleef ho rahi hain, the same thing said by Priya to RAM on that episode, I loved it...I do seriously believe that if u talk about ur problems then no problems or misunderstandings can be there so I guess RaYa should talk

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sreev12

@sreev12

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

amazing writeup ... thank you!

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Dilli

@Dilli4BALH

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

arrreee khatam? you told us it's a very long OS but i found very short.. may be i was enjoying a lot while reading it so couldn't figure out it's length..

The only thing i didn't like is RK-A's dance...

Chaahne aur us chaah ko sach hote dekhne mein bahut fark hai. wah wah kya likhi Punya..

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Punya... 🤗

This was one PUNYALICIOUS OS!!!!! honestly, had all the essence of Season 1, with Pihu's cuteness as the cherry on top!

Loved reading it. It almost took me back to season 1. Thanks for the PM. Wouldn't have wanted to miss this one!

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