OS - Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai - Page 4

Originally posted by: kaparikh1

👏 That was lovely and an awesome OS...Loved that Ram and Priya were not only Pihu's parents but are man and wife too... Awesome...Thanks...

Originally posted by: kchinoy

Wow...Just wow...You are the top favourite writer now. Wow nothing more to say. Just amazing.

Originally posted by: Firdos12

wao it's was like 5th march...BTW itni raat ko...give me pm haa when u write os ff

Originally posted by: sahana747

⭐️Simply Superb.I can visualize the scene and hear them speak those words, that realistic it is .

Thanx for PM

Originally posted by: shonuz_mom

Its awsome Punya. Waiting for the update of your other FF

Originally posted by: viny_queen

hope so after party is type ka koi scene ho

update...

Originally posted by: pasumarthisa

Punya,

Loved it. Wow, sochne mein aur soch ko sach hote dekhne mein kya farak hai,Priya ko dikh gaya. And I liked the lines

Haq ki baat kar rahi ho tum? Arey, tumhein kisne haq diya meri life ke decision lene ka? Tumhare bina life mein main aage badhoon ya na badhoon, ye decide karne wali tum kaun hoti ho? Aur rahi baat Rajat ki, toh mujhe kya pata tha ki uski Pooja meri hi Priya hai? Tum toh mar chuki thi na hum sab ke liye?

Wah, kya intensity thi. Priya really needed shock treatment to get up from that slumber. Next time when you write OS, thoda aapka woh subtle romance dikha dena.

Punya, what an appropriate title for this OS ! You know ever since I had heard this song I have been hoping that BT plays it in the BG as the wording is so apt for the situation right now ...even though BT never does as wanted I can depend on the talented writers here to fulfill our heart 's desires. This OS of yours reminded me of Priya's confession...the intensity of emotions and words is wonderfully captured by you...each of their dialogues took me right back to that episode ( and how much I love that episode!) Now I am just hoping that BT takes some inspiration from this and give us another dhamakedar episode with apology, forgiveness and confession😉

HI , awesome kash aesai hi hota. Beautifully written.next time please when u write please pm me. thanks.

Originally posted by: farwasneha

wo wow woW!!!!!!!