FF ajnabi ehsaas haiye part 22 on page 33 15/1 - Page 7

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Very nicely written.. Gd job.. Thnks for updating❤️
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Superb...loved it.waiting for the next part.
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iBeautiful is understatement😆I got the pm, but couldn' t open it , didn' t know why.
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wow... awesome update... lovely end... continue asap... wanna read next part asap... thanks a lot... 😳

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priya was speechless me too yaar magar khshi ke maar re
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wah!! unique karvachauth.. bhai PRIYA to hai smart aise ajib ideas to use hi ane hai.. and aru..omg how sweet!! :)
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awwsooomeee...
luved it...
plz plz continue...
eagerly waitin for ur next update...
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sneha and polar bear scene was fabulous😆
continue ASP
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ram:too good yaar bohot cute hai aur agar muze bachpan mein koi frock pehnata toh aise hi dikhta main😆😆😆😆 ...

These lines are soo cute
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great update dear ..cont soon


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part 9

priya was crying her heart out , her RAM was still hers only she was wrong, he bonded with her in just six months because they were soul mates ,5years time is more than enough to get comfortable, to love each other and ayesha she was beauty with brains ,young but still her ram refused her just because he was having blurr memories that he loved someone else...she was queen today and who made her the queen was her RAM...yes this was the name she lived on .although she didnt accepted but today

SHE FELT LIKE CLIMBING BURZ KHALIFA AND SHOUTING FROM THERE, HE LOVES ME ...MY RAM LOVES ME

neha ,vikram was happy to see priya moving around so happily but aru she wasnt able to undrstand ...
"haaan mama woh polal beal bohot cute tha aul mommma ne dekha toh woh lone lagiii mama unhe woh bohot accha laga lekin use utha nahi sakti na ..woh issliye shayal(shayad) wo loo (roo) lahi thi..."
"main unhe apna wala de du kya woh bala sa jo momma leke aayi thi mele liye " aru was chitchatting with his uncle swayam who was busy thinking why priya hide the fact she was maried to ram kapoor
he was knowing ram since he started the business bt only professionally nt personally cause ram was a perfect person who never mixed his personal life with professional
then swayam rememberred tht during the time he arranged evrythng for priyas visas and everything ram was misssing from the business world and he tried to contact him for help in india but it wasnt available...thts the time mr.kapoor was in hospital and partial memory loss and everything ...
swayam was now clear wht had been happened he went to talk to vikram and neha whom priya had introduced as her best buddies ...
priya was in arus room and swayam went to vikneha
s: hieee can i come in
VN: ya sure come in and hows your business going here i hope you remember we were partners and had a joint venture for two three deals in dubai
S:ohh yes vikram and i look forward to work with you weve been associated 5years back for some 2to 3 years why you people stopped the work in dubai
v:ohh raam was too weak too handle everything so we just avoided the new ventures and completed the old ones we plan to capture dubai market again and offcourse with you this time.also.
S: yaa yaa sure why not but i came here for some differet purpose...i just want my sisters happiness i ve seen her so happy today and yes i definatelly know that its because she saw ram today...
ive never been persoonally associated with him ; but priya she is just my darling sister i have kept her like that only ;she refused to be part of my house but she has became an inseperable part of our lives...he was having his eyes full of tears...
vik neha could find that swayam and naina and meeta all were around priya and they made evry effort for her happiness
even naina and meeta were crying happily when they found priya doing puja on lappy and found her happy nd contented...
and aru she also needs her fathrs love neha and vik said each and everything to swayam about ram priya and ayesha also ,, off course this was the angle which broke RAYA ...
till late swayam,vik and neha were discussing all the possibilities and swayam asked vikneha to be quite and hide the plan they madefor raya from priya "you people know her more than me but, i ve loved her like sister and she too gave me the respect nd love of younger sister which i missed when my sister died ,but she is the one who wont think for herself... whatever she said about taking revenge from ayesha and all but she wont proceed with it if she sees that her sister is having problems in her haappiiness"
but i will make sure that she and ram come togethr...we will bring them together ,,,,
here baack in mumbai after ram closed his laptop he was more restles till the time he was closing his eyes and sitting blindfoldedly he felt something divine ..as if his heart felt at peace after a long time,,,,, as if he has drank water after walking for miles
and then that girl aru..even though she was teekhi mirchi but ohh how similar their looks were...and she was cute nd her features dark brown eyes,sweet and innocent smile and that cuteness,sheepyness nottyness in her eyes...exact replica of him ...his mother krishna had described him when he was young nd once asked her"mum how do i exactly look like" yes she was fitting properly in it...
sudddenly he was feeling he has lost something...he was restless ...damn f**k off yaar whose priya my mind is drooling over her name and now this girl whom i met for the first time tht too for 5 min and she is all over my mind ...
he decided to go on the beach for the peace of mind ...yes the waves of the sea represent exact condition of his mind ...as the waves seem to come to touch the shore but they get lost somewhere in middle...nd even his memory only flashbacks in his mind ,,the moment he thought he would solve it all went blurreeeddd...
he went to the car and reached the beach...soothing winds were touching his face and he was feeeling bit relaxed now ; he took out his shoes started walking on seashore...a boat was floating in middle sea .exact condotion he was in... floating in the life without having exact direction to move ..he just waved away all the thoughts... he took out a cigar and lit it ...but just two strokes and he rememberred a women snatching it from him throwing it ...
cant you leave me alone for sometime either come back to me fully or stay away from me i am just exhausted with this hide and seek game please do a favour on me...he was sitting on his knees...and he flashed a next memory...
someone was saying "uthiye uthkar wahan baithiye warna ghutno mein dard ho ga"...
to be continued...
precap :he was not able to beleive it ...yes it was him ...but hows it possible ?he couldnt be hear and in this condition...
Edited by snehalparab - 13 years ago

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