TERI MERI KAHAANI..LAST PART Page 12 updated - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Thts realy an astonishing update.. Thnx fr the pm.. Do well in ur exams.. Al the bst.. Wil b waiting fr ur update.. Nd thnx fr ths update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SUNDAY MORNING


Avi : so hws prep going... ah ! nice ha...
this is the only day when u show ur creativity dost,,, love it... so is ram coming ??

Priya : pata tha,, akhir mein yahi puchhoge... i dont know...

Ani : tumne invite to kia tha na ??

Priya : yes ... u know that na...i invited him... but i dnt want him to cme.. and i know he will not
come... bcz RAM KAPOOR'S egho... is much big and fat than he is ... he wont...

Avi : so u succeed ... okay can i take prachi out for smwhile??

Priya : No...!!!!!... When from u need permission !??.. go ahead...

So pRachi And Avinash went to the cak shop... a more familiar place now...probably to meet Ram...

Ram Was as usualy waiting for prachi,, in the hope thatpriya will send her ..if... But there is
priya's best frnd who will bring in ram's wish...

Prachi seeing ram... : uncle ... !!
Ram with a suprize...in a fic of sceond he blvd priya wants to finish all their tensons and for
this reason, she made prachi t come to him as a signal of peace, after a long drawn war and anger
and living in a world of several unkown and unasked qustions... But Whn he turned he watched Prachi with
somebody else... no not priya but a man...

RAm waved her love...prachi this time...

Whn avinash brought his hands and shaked hands with ram... hi...

Ram rplied : Hi ... Aaap ??

Avinash : naam se shyadh na pahechane.. fir bhi... avinash... ,,,,
priya ne to bataya hi hoga ..mre bare mein... hamare baren mein ????

A major burst for ram...he rosed his eyebrows... and replied ..what ???

Avi : So aap arehe hain... meri beti ki birthday pe...?????

Ram : ek scond... kaun ???

Avi : pra...

Ram : wo meri beti hain...

Avi : kisne kahan ???? Priya ne ???

Ram , remained quiet...thinking that priya have Nvr uttrd that prachi is rams child... but can priya be so disloyal to ram ??
can priya ,,, leave ram for ever ??? is it so easy for priya to frgt ram ??? to give the same love to anybody else??

when between this thoughts avinash interrupted again... : Clear misunderstanding...

Ram : kya ??

avi : shayadh aapne yeh socha ki prachi... aapki...
but aagar aap sochte hai ki itne saalo taq koi aapk liye !!! i mean look at you...
i mean sirf paisa hi sabkch nahin hota na... waise mein nahin kah raha hun,,, mine kuch aisihi batein priya se suni th


the LAst words made Ram to smirk... Yeah !! Yeah !! i know... that type of a woman she is...
wo ,,mere barein mein yeh sab nahn kahegi to who else??... So I am sorry,,, ,Mujhe laga ki prachi meri,,,
khair congratz,,,,

Avi : y ???

Ram : Tum logo ki shadhi mein nahin tha to... abhi ,, !!!!

Avi : to aap arehe hain kya ????

RAm : kahan ?? birth day pe ???


Avi : Priya s sure ki aap nahin ayenge... she is sure of your,,

Ram Interruptd : my Egho ????

Avi : yeah ?? how you know that ???

Ram : wo kya hain know priya bettr that you... i think...

Avi : so its nice meting you... shayadh ab hum kabhi nahin milenge...

RAm Smiled : Hmmm ShaYAdh !!! Bye...






Edited by ananya456 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
befor i read it plz one think i tell u in heading plz write page no also that bcoz it easy to find where you update after i read i comment on update😳
how priya hates ram this much
waise love the party idea plz ek dance hi karvado ram priya ka bcoz it ur story
😳
4 ur lovely update
Edited by viny_queen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: viny_queen

befor i read it plz one think i tell u in heading plz write page no also that bcoz it easy to find where you update after i read i comment on update😳


OKAYS... buT i Give page nos.. on the first page...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaar ye avi ki problem kya he ,idiot har baar bich me ata he. But nice update ,thanks 4 the pm.continue asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
shocking..

avi i hate if some one come between raya

plz can u mention page no . too

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Posted: 13 years ago
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arghhh what is avi doing this for??😡😡...phir se suspense !!!
do continue soon...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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why avinash told such thing about priya to ram..
already priya told to ram that she wont love anybody than him ...
confusion all over nice part ...thank you

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kahi bhaga do yaar ye avinash ko.. Thnks fr the pm nd the update,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SUNDAY NIGHT...

Avinash :ayega...

Priya : nahin ayenge..

avi : i m elling u ki wo ayega...

Priya : i know ki wo nahin ayenge...

Avi : aur agar aya to ??

Priya : tumhari koi bhi shart manzoor hogi mujhe...

Avi : realy ??

Priya : haan mangke hi dekhlo...

Avi : a6a to meri pahli shart hain ki...

PrIYA : ekhi shart manungi... okay ??

Avi : okay.. to fir mera shart hain... ki tumhe... mere aur do shart manna parega...

Priya : yeh to sarasar nainsafi hain...

Avi : All is fare in love and war... friend..

Priya : na mein tumse pyar karti hun,,, aur nahin nafrat... so nothing s fare btwn us... aur jahataqunki ane ki baat... wo nahin ayenge... bcz i knw his egho...

Avi : dekhte hain...

Priya : aur shart kya hain ??

Avi : pahle ane do... fir bataunga,,, aur karna parega.. kyunki priya kabhi aapni baato se mu nahin ferti...

Isi bich hawaye chalne lagi... somebody entered with a big gift... priya who was turnng to avi turned in angles having a cmmn ,, knwn feeling... when prachi broke her trance... uncle !!!!!!

Priya cant move her eyes from that devine look...when ram had a look of priya, then turningagain to prachi... priya had a long breath..

Avi : shart pura karne k liye taiar ho na... priya didn't replied anything... and having a loaded heart,,,she went inside to bring the cake...

Avinash followed her...

Hey ,, ek baat puchhu ??? actualy meri pahli shart...

Priya : batao...

Avi : haar baar ki tarha... aj bhi humlog ...mein tum aur prachi cake katenge...

Priya : isme shart jaisi kya baat ho gayi... obviously...chalo...

she brought the cake... and put it on the central table...baccho come... ab hum cake katenge...

everyone assembled prachi went to priya...

Priya : avinaash... come... CAKe...

Avinaash came and three of them holded the knife... rAm felt very bad obviously...

When they were about to cut the cake..

Avi : oH! shit... phone... priya abhi aya...

Priya : okay... tum ajao fir katenge...

Avi : no no waise hi der h gayi hain... katlo .. ek kam karo... (he shouted ... RAM !! PLEASE IDHAR AOO )

Priya : holded his hands... kya kar rahe ho ???

Avinaash smiled ... ram came closer... avi talked in a low manner.. yahan sabse zyada haq tumhara hain...

Priya : pagal ho gaye ho tum...

Avi : priya tumpe nahin... prachin pe.. aur is din pe... yeh kam mere hato se a6a nahin... ram jaoo...

Priya : mein ja rahi hun...Avi holded her hands... : one day ?? for prachi ????

Ram felt a little stirky , but his happiness covered his stirky feeling... they both headed to prachi...

Ram holded prachis hands,,, when priya very hesitatedly... put her one delicate palm over ram's followed by the other..

nice scene to see,,, priya had tear over her eyes,,, and it floded rams heart... a lucky day for prachi...

avinash snapped the pic...

After this priya and ram were apart each other...once again...kids wer playing on the other room.. leaving the big hall room

ater sometime... AVI :LADIES AND GENTLEMEN... BACHHO KI PARTY HAIN... WO LOG TO MAZA KARHI RAHEHAIN... TO FIR HUM BHI THORISI ENJOY KARTE HAIN... SO Y DONT WE MAKE IT BIG ??? TO MEINE ARRANGE KIYAHAIN EK DANCE KA...WRE EVERY INDIVIDUAL SHOULD PARTICIPATE... SAB !!! SABKO PARTNERS DIYA JAYEGA..AND EVERYBODY SHOULD DANCE... SO LETS HAVE A TWIST AND TURN... Priya ... will u be my partner "???

every one made a big round.. with priya being avi's partner... and ram being smebody elses...

Priya put his palms over avi's shoulder and ram's eye ball visited his corner... with eyebrows raised with jealousy...

Priya was enjoying this and she rose one of her eyebrow with a smile of victory...

(SO READERS AS WE WILL HAVE A TWIST AND TURN NOW... WHILE READING THIS,, WHATEVER LINE I WILL GIVE... READ SINGING IT...OTHERWISE U WONT HAVE FUN... SING THE SONG AND IMAGINE MY WORDS... U WILL SURELY HAVE FUN... )

tHE MUSIC BEGINS,...

o solemia... o solemia... dil tujhko dia pyar tujhse kia...

THen all the girls spin and move to the nxt standing partner...

Rato ko jalti hain... zua... sine mein jalti hain zua...

(priya satrted spining and turning with the understated lines... DiL DIA MEINE KYA KIA ...MEINE KYA KIA...)

WITH MEINE KYA KIA SHE TURNED TO HR NEXT PARTNER WHICH WAS RAM.. BUT IT WAS THE FORMALITY TO COMPLETE THE DANCE...

their dance was the most aggressive ones .. with eyes fixed and firm on each othe...

sO WITH '' O SOLEMIA'' SHE HOLDED RAM'S SHOULDER... RAM GAVE A HUGE BREATH...

SHE PUT HER HANDS ON RAM'S CHEST


... with '' DIL TUJKO diA pyar tujhse kia ''

WHEN IT WAS THE TURNING TIME... Avinash ordered silently to change the song... which indicates staying withthe partner ...

a ball dance tune started,,,, romantic ones... Lamha Lamha Duri U barasti hain... jANE kis aag mein yeh sahbnam jalti hain...

it was very nice tune.. and every one was in a romantic mude... ram priya started waving .. like air,,,,

with khwahishoki,,, sham dhalti hain... she mostly leaned to ram's chest... and hugged him...

then she felt what she is doing then removed herself from doin that and tried to move backwards aoiding the dance and ram...

Ram holded his hands... with JANE KIS AAG MEIN YEH SHABNAAM DHALTI HAIN...

bUT priya removed his hands and run avoiding the situation with (in lamho ki daman wali... KAISA YEH ISHQ HAIN... KAISA YEH HUSN HAIN... )

rAM visited priya... priya was standing holding the grills of balcony...(Kaise jasbaato ka umra sailab hain)

Ram : priya aj tumhe meri baat sunni paregi...

Priya : mujhe kuch nahin sunna...

Ram : but you have to listen today...

Priya : kyun sunu mein...

Ram : kyunki meine kahan hain... aur mein tumhara pati hun...(din badle ratein badli ... jine ki andaaz hi badle badle hain )

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