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Posted: 13 years ago
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ananya it was such a mind blowing update ..too good lovely
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oops am late..😕
Woah...what an update !!!!...those pics ...the dance...avi asking ram to cut...wow...intense work !!!!...just sooo awesome...
aur chahiye mujhe...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx all 4 those lovely cmmnts
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ram holdd her hands... yaha nahin... yaha bohot shore hain... andar jake baat kare ???

Priya : Mujhe yeh nahin samaj araha ... aap mujh kya explain karna chahate hain...

Ram : i know.. mein bohot bura hun... bilkul ghtiya insaan hu... egho ka pahar hun... mere dimag mein
ghi bhara hua hain and ,,, aur bhi kuch hain to add kardo... fir mein kahunga...

Priya : mazak kar rahe hain????

Ram : tum apne dilse puchho... kya tumhe lagta hain... mein tumhe chhod sakta hun ???

Priya : Lagne ka koi bat hain hi nahin Mr.Kapoor.. apne mujhe apni zindagise nikaal feka... r8 ??

Ram : yes ... Kyunki...

Priya : meine aap ko aapki make khilaaf bharkaya...

Ram : Nahin !! Nahin !!... nahin priya...

Priya : aur kya reason ho sakti hain.. mr.kapoor.. jo bhi ho nahin sunna...

Ram : tum jab jail pe thi... yad hain mera rahena mushkil hogaya tha ????? KuCH bHI karna chaha.. ]
ki tum jail se vapaas ajao...

Priya : aur jab jailse vapaas agayi... tab zindag e nikaal dia ???

Ram : nahin ... nahin,,, i had and accident damn it... car accident.. i lost everything.. each and everything,,,
shadhi taq yad tha...Na to hamara pyar... nahin uska ahesaas... nothing... na to wo saat din,, jisme
nahi hamare pyarka ikraar... kuch nahin... sirf hamar shadhi taq... (Giving a dip sigh )
Mujhe yeh kahan gaya .. ki tumne krishna j ko lake meri mako galat sabit karna chaha... Aapni faydey ke liye..
dawaipe mlawat kiye... aur mein to insaan tha hi nahin na... shadhi se pahele... mein man gaya unlogo ki baatein...

Tumhari gharwalose aur vikram-nehase kahan gaya ki agar unhne tumse iss barein men kuch kahan to wo ... mere saath galat karenge...

Tumhare jane ki baad... Vikramneha mujhe chhod ke chale gaye... australia...

3 saal baad mujhe kuch yad aya... actualy sab yad aya.. every thing... each and everything,,, meine mako gharse nikaal diya...

But kya... ?? kisiko pata hi nahin tha ki tum kahan thi !!! mein akela tha... bu tum nahin thi..
yahan aya... aur prachi se mila.. paanch salo ke baad apna ahesaas hua... aur see .. wo ahesaas sach tha.. wo
meri sabse aapni hi thi... But tum mili to , yeh pata laga ki tum o mujhse nafrat karti ho... fir bhi aaj aya..
yeh sochke ki aaj mein tumhe sa sach sach bata dunga... tum manoo ya na manoo... meri beti ki pahli brth day.. mri saath kaise miss kar sakta tha mein...
nahin kar sakta tha...

(THE OVERFLOWING EYES OF PRIYA STARTED FLOODING DEEP,,SHE WANTED TO CLEAR ALL MISUNDERSTANDING...)

Ram : aj savere jab avinash...

Priya came back to her reality...(steeping backwards) : avinash... i cant leave avinash... chahe jo bhi ho.. usne tab
mera sath diya ... jab aapko mere saath hona chahie tha...I cant be disloyal to him... aap chale jaiye..
i cant eave avinash... i cant be disloyal to him... (tears rolled from both raya's eyes.. ram kept quiet,, with once again a feeling
of defeat..)

The next scene starts with...

Av : you hurt me a lot priya... you hurt me a lot...

Priya : nahin avinash ... mein Mr.kapoor ke liye tum jaise dost ki aisaan nahin bhul sakti...

Avi : dost kaheti ho mujhe ??? please... sach baat to yeh hain... ki tumne mujhe kabhi aapna dost
samjha hi nahin.. kyunki agar samjha hota... to aaj yaha nahin... haq se mujhe gale milti... aur,...
ram ke paas daurte hue jaati... u love ram priya... aur please mujhe is pyar ke bich mat lao... go
priya tumhare paas zyada samay nahin hain... agar ram aj chala gaya,,, to firse yeh akela pan priya...
Prachi ko mat rakho is khushi se dur... jaao priya ... Run...

Priya's face had a glow... she hugged avi in a very happy mude and ran with all her might to find out ram...


Ram was then about to get up from the car... when priya came running from back and hugged ram... with her hands on rams chest...

I love you ram .. i love you... i cant leave without you... Dont go anywhere,,,, please...

Ram smiled with his floodng eyes and hugged priya firm and filtered...

THe next scene starts...

Ram and priya lying on the purple furnished room..

RAM : O A6A,,, to agar meine sach nahin bataya hota.. to tum mujhe jealous karti...???

Priya : haan.. ofcourse karti na...

Ram : a6a ????? Priya tumhe ?????

Priya : kya ?????

Ram : tumhe gudgudi nahin hoti kya ??

Priya: kya????NAHIN ... Nahin Mr.kapoor.. aap aisa nahin karenge...(she started smilng and saying nahin,,
nahin...bcz ram has started giving her that)

Ram : a6a ...thik hain... to...( he brought his lips closer to priya... and was about to kiss her ... when)

a voice came... Mamma-papa...

Both ram and priya looked at the voice and smiled and brought prachi in between them... and started playing with her...

AND ??????
BaDE aCcHe LaGtE hAin...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yayyy...first for the last part...yipeee...
It was a treat reading this ff...
you do come up with new ideas each time...wonderful...
you create suspense...excitement ...and what not in your readers...
loved it...will keep reading it many times...
thanku dear...


Edited by sss283 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yipee woo hoo awesome 👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya456

AS MY EXAMS ARE STARTING NOW... CANT GIVE U UPDATES FOR THIS WEAK... WILL MEET ON SUNDAY

[/QUOTE ANanya-An English Patient ALA George W Bush😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow,its amazing ,super ,lovely ,cute part. Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb di.. Wow.. Happy ending.. Wil b luking frwrd fr more such lovely creations frm u...

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