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azk92

@azk92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ravichitra
Beautiful portayal of emotions which vary with every situation. loved the way you wrote. I cried along with RaYa and smiled along with them. heaved a sigh of relief.

Thank you!!

Im sorry I know I always make you cry lol 😳

Im glad you're relieved in the end! 😊

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azk92

@azk92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: salsaly
awesome... superb...wonderful... excellent... marvelous... splendid... v v nyc... wat can i say more di about ur OS... its so touchy... real... lovely.. dnt knw wat to say more... i'm actually speechless... aapko pata hai mein ye OS teen gante se palh rahy hun... & ya had taken brks as i had to go out & give pc to bro... just awesome OS... i have always read ur ff & OS's with full concentration... so take much tym... u r a v talented writer... & u r my favorite writer in IF... i just love ur updates... thanks to u frm bottom of my heart... love u a lot di... & i'm really v sorry for late reply... thanks... :-)

Thank you so much Saly!!

awww that's soo sweet!! 🤗That's probably the best compliment I've ever gotten! 😳

Thank you sooo much!!

No worries for late reply, read/reply whenever you have time!!

Love you girl!!

And you're very welcome! 😊

Have a great weekend!

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Chitra RaviKiran

@chitloner

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: azk92

Thank you!!
Im sorry I know I always make you cry lol 😳
Im glad you're relieved in the end! 😊

Don't be sorry. Its just the effect ur stories have on me. It shows u r a fab writer and I am a fab imaginatior

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salsaly

@salsaly

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: azk92

Thank you so much Saly!!
awww that's soo sweet!! 🤗That's probably the best compliment I've ever gotten! 😳
Thank you sooo much!!
No worries for late reply, read/reply whenever you have time!!
Love you girl!!
And you're very welcome! 😊
Have a great weekend!

thanks a lot di... many big hugs for u... 🤗 🤗🤗🤗

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sss283

@sss283

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

im wondering if i am dreaming or im actually awake...what an os !!!!!!!...im sure i must be dreaming ...

still i wud say...fantabulous !!!...

amby...this time i really am lost in heaven...wow...so beautiful...you rocked it...no,..no...you broke all the barriers...

loved that long sweet os...mindblowing one...so unique n cool...

you have a natural flare for writing...!!!...im honoured to read this dear...🤗

do write more...thanx for d pm...

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Punya

@PunyaS

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: azk92

I don't know yaar.. don't know how will I make her redeem herself. She has crossed all the limits now.. Cvs have let things gone out of hands too far.. Not in a mood to forgive this Priya easily... You have shown enough mercy in your OS.. that's more than enough. 😆

Lets see what Angie gonna do with her.. waiting eagerly!

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Dilli

@Dilli4BALH

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

"Bhad mein jaaye
meri company Priya! Agar iss
duniya mein koi bhi cheez mere
liye sabse zyada mayine rakhti
hai, toh woh tha tumhara saath
aur tumhara pyaar"
loved these lines.. Actually hoping these lines in the show but i don't think cvs will use these word because they need trp n they r thinking beautiful lines don't earn trp... Loved all lines u wrote after that green coloured sayari.. Touched my heart.. Superb, excellent, fabulous..