FF: Gori teri aankhein kahein Updt P17 Pg71 on29/9

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#441

One of the best night of RaYa, I have read so far, its simply excellent, superb writing and all kudos for the punchline from Fanaa and the song woh shaam kuch ajeeb thi, was absolutely appropriate, will be waiting anxiously for next update

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ashee

@asheema_sharma

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#442

AWEESOMEE...

luved it...

plz continue...

waitin for ur next update...

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A. Kishore

@TVserialfreak

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#443

👏👏👏👏....Hats off Punya...It was perfect every inch⭐️⭐️⭐️...their inhibition, their awkwardness☺️ everything and how they finally break it was just awesome👏👏...keep rocking😃...it was realistic every inch...even the show would not have kept these minute details in mind while carving the romance if they plan to have any in the show...thank you for this beautiful part... 😳

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Sonakshi-grp

@Sonakshi-grp

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#444

WOW...WOW...WOW...JUST AMAZING...THANX FOR SUCH A BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

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pasumarthisa

@pasumarthisa

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Hi Punya,

My name is Santhi and I've been following your FF. The latest one was amazing. Already read it twice. The last two lines that they said through their eyes, would've loved to hear in their voices. The subtlety made it great. And Ram, always the gentleman. Such restraint in him and such respectful attitude towards romance. The way it should be. You brought it out really really well. Thank you. I really wish this scene happens the way you wrote it in the show.

P.S: Maybe I introduced myself before. But anyways, thanks for the FF.

Edited by pasumarthisa - 13 years ago

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#446

wowww thats absolutely smashed one ...fantastic ...

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#447

very beautifully described their romance.loved it.

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Eram

@viny_queen

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#448

thank 4 updateing 4 me

now i m so happy that they are togetter

inka rooth na aur maanna tha

hope u update soon

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#449

Punya, I am speechless, absolutely beautiful, their feeling after 5 years, just so lovely. I loved it. You are really an amazing writer.. awesome job.👏