FF: Gori teri aankhein kahein Updt P17 Pg71 on29/9 - Page 46

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veena23 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
faboulos awsm...sooo romantic...love it

wo sham kuchh ajeeb thi
ye sham bhi ajeeb h
wo kl bhi paas paas thi wo aaj bhi kareeb h

waah👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
PARTNER!

I LOVE YOU!
And sorry for being so AWOL from commenting on your amazing FF! Trust me girl i read every update but just cannot find the words to leave a comment! But this one was too good yaar!

You are such a fab writer! Everything you write is so real! I loved the awkwardness between them after being apart for so long! Im sure they would be in this situation at some point and I leave it to YOU to pen it down so well!!

She opened her eyes to find herself looking straight into his deep brown eyes. Ram had shifted his position and was almost on top of her. She felt the wait agonising. He looked into her eyes, seeking permission.

'Uff! Ye Ram bhi na' Always a gentleman!'

She glared at him. He frowned in confusion. She lifted her right hand from his chest and brought it to the back of his head. She clutched his hair lightly and brought his face closer to hers.

Ram's frown instantly turned into a smile as he came further down. Priya closed her eyes, anticipating the feel of his lips on hers.

On the other hand, Ram was clearly enjoying her eagerness. He thought of having some fun. His lips were nano-mm apart from hers. He lightly brushed them against her lips and pulled back a little. Her lips puckered tightly in anticipation. She waited. And waited.

Priya opened her eyes to find him grinning with a mischievious glint in his eyes.

LOL Punya, what a tease!! leave it to you to write this part ROFL. HUGS BABE! Nano-mm? Take a ruler and measure that hahahaha... ROFL GIRL NANO-MM IS LIKE NON-EXISTENT in the real world! That's a bit TOO CLOSE! hahaha. (Sorry im thinking like a science student hahahaha)

You did a fine job of writing the build-up to their night together lol.. your details are too good man! You have done MORE than justice to the scene!

I honestly have no words Punya! Seriously! You are just the best writer here cuz you write it so real!

Eagerly waiting for the next part!

LOVE YOU BABE!

🤗

👏👏👏

Edited by azk92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Freinds!

Thank you all for reading and commenting on the update. feels so good to see all the appreciation! 😃

Kaparikh1 - Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

Nany - Hey Nany. Thanks for reading!

Tasshuu - Glad. 😃 Thanks!

jineejiggs - Hey, sorry, don't know your name. But, that's such a sweet comment. feels so good. 😳 I was listening to Wo shaam on a loop and thought the lyrics match the scenario. I juz love that song! Glad you liked it.

asheema - hey! Thanks so much Asheema! Will update soon 😊

Kishore - hey Bro! I hope they DO! I wanna watch this scene unfold on screen with RK-ST, soon. Thanks for such a lovely comment!

Sonakshi - hey! Thank you so much. Glad you liked it! 😊

pasumarthisa - Hi Santhi. Yes, we introduced ourselves through PMs. 😉 I really wish the same. I so so so badly wanna watch it on screen. Thanks for such a lovely comment. Means so much! 😃

Neel - Hey! Thanks so much Neel. Glad you enjoyed it.

Fiza - Thanks Fiza. Keep reading. 😊

Eram - Hey eram! First of all, kaan pakad ke apologies for keep you waiting for so long. Was travelling whole last week. Sorry! And I am glad that you enjoyed the update! Thanks for the lovely Gifs! 😃

Priya - Hey Priya! That's such a LOVELY comment. Thanks a ton! 😃

Sia - Hi! Thank you for reading. Glad you liked it! 😊

Veena - I knew you would love it. "Wo shaam..." sach mein is so romantic. perfect for their situation, hai na?

Guys, thank you all for reading and commenting! Love each and every comment.

Keep reading! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
read last two parts in one go... love it totally... 👏



seems lyk u r going to update next part... bring it on... thanks & sorry for late comment... !!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: azk92

PARTNER!


I LOVE YOU!

Love ya too Partner! 🤗

And sorry for being so AWOL from commenting on your amazing FF! Trust me girl i read every update but just cannot find the words to leave a comment! But this one was too good yaar!

Arey I know baba! I understand. Point is you read and enjoy. Bas. 😊 (Now that we have got THAT clear, WHEN are you updating man? It's been AGES! 😡)

You are such a fab writer! Everything you write is so real! I loved the awkwardness between them after being apart for so long! Im sure they would be in this situation at some point and I leave it to YOU to pen it down so well!!

Hahahaha.. Thanks so much! Really, to tell you the truth, I don't have to try hard and focus on keeping it real... all thanks to RK and ST. It comes naturally. LOL!

And how I wish we get to see that on the show. Will give anything to see RK-ST enacting this onscreen... but. Sigh! It'll happen in agla janam, maybe..

She opened her eyes to find herself looking straight into his deep brown eyes. Ram had shifted his position and was almost on top of her. She felt the wait agonising. He looked into her eyes, seeking permission.

'Uff! Ye Ram bhi na' Always a gentleman!'

She glared at him. He frowned in confusion. She lifted her right hand from his chest and brought it to the back of his head. She clutched his hair lightly and brought his face closer to hers.

Ram's frown instantly turned into a smile as he came further down. Priya closed her eyes, anticipating the feel of his lips on hers.

On the other hand, Ram was clearly enjoying her eagerness. He thought of having some fun. His lips were nano-mm apart from hers. He lightly brushed them against her lips and pulled back a little. Her lips puckered tightly in anticipation. She waited. And waited.

Priya opened her eyes to find him grinning with a mischievious glint in his eyes.

LOL Punya, what a tease!! leave it to you to write this part ROFL. HUGS BABE! Nano-mm? Take a ruler and measure that hahahaha... ROFL GIRL NANO-MM IS LIKE NON-EXISTENT in the real world! That's a bit TOO CLOSE! hahaha. (Sorry im thinking like a science student hahahaha)

Oh come on! I couldn't find any other term to describe the agonising proxomity. Nano is the lowest unit. innit? Well, I HATE science and the ignorance shows. LOL 😉

You did a fine job of writing the build-up to their night together lol.. your details are too good man! You have done MORE than justice to the scene!

Hahahha.. coming that from the Queen of Mush, I am humbled. LMAO! 😃

I honestly have no words Punya! Seriously! You are just the best writer here cuz you write it so real!

*Blush Blush Blush* (Not the haddi way!) LOL. Thanks a ton girl! 😃

Eagerly waiting for the next part!

Oh come on, juz update your FF jaldi. PLS! 😡

LOVE YOU BABE!

🤗

Love ya too Ambs! 🤗

👏👏👏


☺️ Thanks!

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was damn cute...
just so loved their hesitancy to proceed...
contiue soon...missed your updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
Punya - Take A Bow Girl ! You scored again.

Absolutely brilliant in describing the hesitance between Ram and Priya. Ram Teasing Priya... was just so cute.
(don't listen to Ambs on nano-mm distance 😆😆😆)
Loved it how Priya seals the deal before Ram makes his move.. HA HA..

Adhoori saans thi, dhadkan adhoori thi, adhoore hum

Magar ab chaand poora hai falak par

Aur ab poore hain hum

Beautiful use of these words in your FF girl.

BTW: you can outsource the rest of the scene to Amby in Canada. She seems to have mastered the romantic scenes.. LOL
Edited by IndYa4u - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey punya..

fab update man... loved the way you focused on them alone.. they needed it to totally seal their love for each other. Priya has always been more confident has she not?? actually quiet like it that way... our ram is such a golu sometimes..

and you know what.. sometimes things left unsaid carry so much more impact than loud and crass descriptions... and that is perhaps most true of ram and priya's relationship -- both physical and emotional

now waiting for the next one.. hurry up okay
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: IndYa4u

Punya - Take A Bow Girl ! You scored again.

Absolutely brilliant in describing the hesitance between Ram and Priya. Ram Teasing Priya... was just so cute.
(don't listen to Ambs on nano-mm distance 😆😆😆)

Loved it how Priya seals the deal before Ram makes his move.. HA HA..

Adhoori saans thi, dhadkan adhoori thi, adhoore hum

Magar ab chaand poora hai falak par

Aur ab poore hain hum

Beautiful use of these words in your FF girl.

BTW: you can outsource the rest of the scene to Amby in Canada. She seems to have mastered the romantic scenes.. LOL


Cuz thre is no distance in a nano-mm LOL.. 😉

Excuse me?? LOL. I wrote ONE scene and it was the only one i'm ever gonna write 😉 Punya's turn now! 😛😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
personally I love reading this ff update soon...

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