FF: Gori teri aankhein kahein Updt P17 Pg71 on29/9 - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
pls jaldi update karo ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
would be waiting for next... update this weekend 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
we miss u and the regular updates 😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!! Amazing update! 👏
It was super-sweet and romantic! 😍
Loved the way Ram teased Priya! 😉 Fabulous writing!! Plz continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys!

I am back with an update.

Was too caught up with work and deadlines. Didn't get time to write. And I really didn't want to rush this next update. Sorry for delay!

But I am glad that I am posting this on RaYa's anniversary! Made perfect sense!

So happy to present the uber-romantic update of their first night together after 5 looong years, in my style! (I am being a bit in-your-face-here... LOL)

I have read many hot updates but mine is completely different take. This is my first attempt at writing intimate, cosy scene. I am not sure how you all will take it.

Hope you all enjoy!

P.S. - Thanks all of you for all the LOVELY comments! They make my day! 🤗 🤗 🤗


Edited by PunyaS - 13 years ago
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Recap - But before he could do anything, he felt her lips crashing down on his. Ah bliss!

All the thoughts left their minds immediately and all they could think about was each other. Ram's hands snaked around her waist, pulling her even closer to deepen the moment. Priya's hands wrapped themselves around his neck to snuggle even closer. The kiss transported both of them to a world of their own.

They both had each other after a very long time.



Gori Teri Aankhein Kahein - Part 16


They both break the kiss.


Priya pulls away a bit, looking deep into Ram's sparkling brown eyes. They reflected his desire for her. Tears brimmed in her eyes instantly. She wants to just lock away this moment where she is so close to her love, cosily engulfed in his arms, breathing his breath. Tears roll down her cheeks, remembering all the pain time and situation had inflicted on both of them.


Seeing her tears, Ram's eyes also moisten up. He wipes away those precious pearl-drops and shakes his head. He then cups her face in both his hand. Priya rests her right hand on his hand.


"Ram, is ek pal ke liye maine bahot lamba intezaar kiya hai. Ab aur intezaar nahi hoga."


He gathers her tightly and gently into his strong embrace. She rests her head on his chest, after placing a soft kiss on his heart. They both stand like this for sometime. Priya senses something.


"Ram, kuchh kahenge nahi?" She says without lifting her head.

"Unnh hmm'"

"Main janti hoon aapko kuchh kehna hai."


A smile spreads across Ram's face. How can she be so damn right everytime? How can she read his mind, everytime?


"Priya, tum jaanti ho mujhe feelings express karna nahi aata. Par aaj kahe bina nahi raha jata. Jaanti ho'?"


He makes her look at himself.


"' Jab tum nahi thi mere paas, toh tumhein yaad kar ke lamhein guzaarta tha. Bahot akela tha. Par tab do cheezon ne mera bahot saath diya. Pehli, tumhaari yaadein aur doosra'."


He takes out his phone from his pocket. "' Ye."

"Phone?"


Ram shakes his head in a No. "Main jo hamesha tumse kehna chaahta tha, hoon, aur hamesha kehna chaahoonga, wo ye hai'"

He twiddles with his phone and keeps it on the nearby window sill. A soft melody infuses into the atmosphere.

Tum hi tum ho nigaah mein

Tum hi dil ki sadaa mein

Tumse keh bhi na paayein

Zindagi meri tumhi tum'

Priya looks at the phone and then back at him. A teary smile flashes on her face.

She bites her lower lip to stem her tear flow and hits lightly on his chest. Ram again gathers her in his embrace and places a soft kiss on her head. Priya wraps her arms around him and holds him tightly. She concentrates on the lyrics.

Tumhare kadmon ki chaap se

Zameen ke seene dhadak rahe

Ghanere baadal ke kaafile

Hain anmane se, kate kate

Gulshan mein shabnam, bahaar, gul

Sab tumko sochkar hain gumsum

Tum hi tum ho nigaah mein'

Ram scoops her in his arms and takes her to the bed. The lyrics were making her blush profusely. She felt on top of the world, to get so much unconditional love from the man she loved with all her heart. He looks at her flushed face and his desire overwhelmed him. He puts her down on the bed and leans on her.


Priya's arms still linger around his neck. Lyrics hitting his ears, Ram remembers how sad his days were, how lonely his nights were without Priya. How difficult those days were. But now, he had her back where she belonged to; in his arms, close to his heart.

Ye meri bekhudi, fariyaad kar rahi

Armaan simat gaye, bas tum pe aa ke hi

He holds her by her waist and bends on her. He starts by softly pressing his lips on her forehead. Priya shuts her eyes in anticipation.


Karwat badal rahi, ulfat meri abhi

Sapne chubhne lage, hai dil mein dard bhi


Unexpected tears start running down her closed eye-lids. He kisses them away gently. He leaves a trail of kisses, starting from her jawline, moving towards the right side of her neck. She turns away her face in opposite direction to give him better access.

Duaayein ik tumko maangti, khayaal tumko pukaarte

Hamari baahon ke daayare, tumhaari baahein talaashte

He moves from one side to another, in the process, brushing his lips past hers. His one hand moves from her waist to her arm. His hand grazes upwards towards her right shoulder and slides behind her head. He lifts her head slightly and bends down himself, pressing his lips softly on hers, which gradually part and he explores and savours the sweetness which was his Priya.


Khaamosh meri iltejaa toh sun, aise na sangdil raho

Tum hi tum ho nigaah mein...


His hand pulls away the knot of her night robe. She rests her hand on his, clutching it slightly. Their eyes meet and she lets go of his hand. In one swift motion, he pulls away the robe.


Tum hi tum ho nigaah mein

Tum hi dil ki sadaa mein

Tumse keh bhi na paayein

Zindagi meri tumhi tum'

She then tugs at his t-shirt, asking him to remove it. They roll over, with Priya leaning on top of him. She runs her hand through his hair, clutching tightly at tufts, kissing him feverishly all over his face. She kisses his ear lobes and bites them lightly. She then nuzzles down his column of throat, all the way to his bare chest. His hands move over her bare back, leaving her in little goosebumps. He felt them and his desire overwhelms him. They both fumble with each others clothes, trying to pull them away.


The barrier of clothes discarded, they both snuggle cosily between the sheets, to unite and become one in their love and their passion.


Tum hi tum ho nigaah mein

Tum hi dil ki sadaa mein

Tumse keh bhi na paayein

Zindagi meri tumhi tum'

They made love against his expression of love and longing, playing in the background, throughout the night.



P.S. - Here is the link to this beautiful song by Hariharan, set to music by Dr. Bhupen Hazarika. I am crazily in love with this song!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=msvNVwHjnJ8

I have changed some words here to suit our RaYa. I have changed Karvat badal rahi, ulfat nayi nayi to Karwat badal rahi, ulfat meri abhi.



Happy Anniversary to our favourite couple- Ram & Priya


~ * ~ * ~ * ~* ~ * ~RaYa~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~



LOVE you BOTH to the CORE!



Edited by PunyaS - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oooh wow...Update after a long time, but it was awesome yaar... Loved the lyrics and the song tooo...Plzz update soon...Thanks for the PM...😊

And yess Love Ram and Priya a Lottt...❤️
Happy Anniversary to both of them...❤️
Edited by kaparikh1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OYE PUNYA, OYE OYE... superb anniversary gift yaar!! you brought all my smiles back in the 10 minutes that I took to read this update.. just ram and priya.. kitne din ho gaye... you my dear girl deserve a huge gift for this... I OWE YOU ONE!!!
Sometimes I wonder why i get so upset about the show.. your update tells me why ... the love that these two characters share is not only special it s perhaps the most real in the sense that it could really happen in our lives.. there is an aura of belief around them that makes me think that that kind of love is possible..

Thanks baby, really thanks for this.. i know that there is not going to be any reference to their anniversary in the real show so this is very needed for me!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏👏👏 Superbly written Punya...thanks for the PM...😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww!!! Awesome update! 😃
Soo beautifully written.. ❤️ Loved it! The lyrics were soo good!!
Amazing writing! Thank you so much for the lovely part..
Love RaYa!!! Happy anniversary RaYa! <3

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