FF: Gori teri aankhein kahein Updt P17 Pg71 on29/9 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nandinimp

Hi Punya,

it is very good man.. these FBs are the only things that are helping us to tide over these very confusing days. the show is stagnating and there seems to be no reprieve from the nonsense that they are showing. your FF is the most welcome in these horrid times. Lovely girl, thank you for brightening my day.


Hey Nandy,

Your comment made MY day! Really, I am tired of wishing for that one ep where we could get a glimpse of old BALH 😔 I know its not happening anytime soon.. so I satisfy myself by penning down my version. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak

Awesome 😃...superbly written 😳...hats off to you 👏👏


Thanks so much Kishore.

Glad you liked it. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ravichitra

Mom-daughter convo was the best part.
Ram-Vikram also had a fall out.
KK and Priya are not together.
Story is ofcourse moving forward dear.
U give us 100updates just with RaYa nok-jhok we will ask for more.


Sachchi? (Priya style) 😳 😆

You think so? Yay!!!! ☺️

Thanks sooo much Chitra. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nancy_NUTS

read both the parts together

superbly penned down Punya Di👏
loving the sweet and cute nok-jhok in FB❤️
and the innocent mum and daughter convo was awesome❤️
Punya Di, just can't wait to read the next part, hum par rehem karke jaldi update kar dena..plzz😳


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Thanks so much Nancy. I also loved the nok-jhonk part the most (with all the humility 😛 😉)

Jo hukum Nancy aakaa.. will try to update soon. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sss283

wow...so chweet...loved ram-priya ka nok-jok...their daughter inherited both their characteristics...lovely...chatterbox nature of priya n actions same as ram...wonderful...do continue soon...


Thank you so much. So glad that you found it entertaining.

Ram and Priya's daughter had to be just like them. The kid in the promo looks so Ram Kapoorish so I thought let some of her traits be like Priya's too. Arey bhai, Kapoor khaandaan ki waaris hai.. koi aisi waisi nahi.. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: salsaly


part 3 , 4 & 5 r awesome... just love ur ff... wen will u myt raya... pls myt them in an interesting way... ok... 😊


continue asap... thanks & sorry 4 late comment... !!



Okay Saly, first things first.

You don't have to be sorry! Just read and enjoy, ok?

And THANK YOU SOOO MUCH for such lovely pics! ❤️

Yes madam, I'll try to write a dhamakedaar meet for Ram-Priya but its too soon for that.. I have figured out some tracks.. so just wait and watch! 😎 And enjoy!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PunyaS


Okay Saly, first things first.

You don't have to be sorry! Just read and enjoy, ok?

And THANK YOU SOOO MUCH for such lovely pics! ❤️

Yes madam, I'll try to write a dhamakedaar meet for Ram-Priya but its too soon for that.. I have figured out some tracks.. so just wait and watch! 😎 And enjoy!!!


welcome & thank u... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Whoaaa where the heck was I when you posted this?!
Probably falling asleep at my computer last night hahaha 😉

LOVE IT GIRL!!
3 parts updated in 1 day!! On a role missy!!
you made my day! love the nok jhoks and I absolutely LOVE the way you have made Rayanshi.. She is sooo cute!!! I can totally picture the girl on TV being like that!!
Loved the collage idea and the jumping between the flashbacks and the emotions and every bit of it!!
You are absolutely amazing girl!!

🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: azk92

Whoaaa where the heck was I when you posted this?!

Probably falling asleep at my computer last night hahaha 😉

LOVE IT GIRL!!
3 parts updated in 1 day!! On a role missy!!
you made my day! love the nok jhoks and I absolutely LOVE the way you have made Rayanshi.. She is sooo cute!!! I can totally picture the girl on TV being like that!!
Loved the collage idea and the jumping between the flashbacks and the emotions and every bit of it!!
You are absolutely amazing girl!!

🤗


Madam, you were probably half dead at your comp by that time! Writing an OS at 3:30 in the morning???!!!! 😲 You are CRAZY!!!

Waise I sent you a PM.. next time will send it with a Buzzer.. LOL!

I too love Rayanshi and want that kid to be like this - cute and kiddish... not some a child with adult dialogues or cliche mature mannerism. That would be aaargh!

Thanks sooo much Ambilicious! 😆

🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW PUNYA Dii...awesome update...hats off 👏 👏 👏

How did i miss this post???I gotta get my eyes checked right now???
so sorry 😭...But i had great fun reading all the 5 parts in one go...

Wonderful...wonderful...wonderful...
You are a great writer i say...Cv's must learn from you some hints...





ROCK ON DII...will be waiting for the next part...

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