SS:Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna.. Chk pg.34 vry imp note.

Hey guys... Aftr the out burst of ram on priya i dnt wnt u back and all, i couldnt stop myself frm imagining the further story.. And finaly written a story.. Am a really bd writer .. Bt am a big fan of fan fics. I dnt knw if i shd continue or nt.. Phir bhi, i am giving a try..



Index
part 1 - pg 1
part 2 - pg 1,2
part 3 - pg 3
part 4 - pg 3,5
part 5 - pg 7,8
part 6 - pg 10
part 7 - pg 12
part 8 - pg 13
part 9 - pg 15
part 10- pg 16
part 11 - pg 18
part 12- pg 20
part 13 - pg 22
part 14 - pg 24
part 15 - pg 26
part 16 - pg 29

Pls do cmt shd i cntinue r not .

Nice post sister...try to write a little more so that all of us can get an idea of what are you are coming to write...well attempted...keep it up

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak

Nice post sister...try to write a little more so that all of us can get an idea of what are you are coming to write...well attempted...keep it up

i cnt wrt bcs am on my mobile. Am sry .. I'l try my bst to wrt more nxt tym..

wow looking nice story ,,, plz plz plz continue,,
this is my first rply,,, mene abhi tk kisi ko rply nhi kiya hai,, pr plz ko req karti hu plz continue ur ss,,, 😊

The secnd prt is ready.. Its l'l bit longer so am posting it in 2 or 3 parts.

Part 2

Priya crying al along the way.. She was recollectng the wrds said by ram.. She ws thnking hw her life has changed.. Suddenly her phn ring.. Startled priya cms out of her thoughts.. Seeing the name in the phn, she was crying more.. It was neha.. Her bst frnd.. She wantd to hug her and cry.. Bt thougt that its smthng btwn ram and her, she cntrls her tears and picks up the cal..

Priya : h..h..helo..
Neha : hai priya. Kaisi he tu?
Priya : <aftr a pause> teek hoon. Tu bata kaise yaad kiya?
N : kal tu free he?
P : Haan.. Hoon.. Kyu kya hua?
N : nai kuch nai.. Kal hum mil sakte hein?
P : haan.. Kyu nahi..
N : perfct.. Tho kal mere ghar aa jana..
P : doesnt hears ths.. Thnks of the incidnt hapnd in the day.. Trying to stop her tears frm flowing..

Neha notices ths..
N : kya hua priya.. Sab teek hai na?

P : haan..haan baba sab teek he.. Tu kuch keh rahi thi na?

Part 2 contd,

Neha notices ths..
N : kya hua priya.. Sab teek hai na?

P : haan..haan baba sab teek he.. Tu kuch keh rahi thi na?

N : yahi ki tum kal rat ko mere ghar dinner ke liye aaogi. Teek he?

P : haan teek he tho kal milthe he bye.. Gd nt

she reaches km and heads strght twrds her room.. She doesnt eat anythng..

In the office,
ram is talking to acp to find choti asap.. Niharika entrs..
R : kya hua ma , aap is samay yahan pe? Sab teek he na?

N : haan ram, bat hi kuch aisi he ki me apne aapko rok hi nahi paayi.. Mujhe nuts ke kidnaping ke baare me kuch pata chala he.

R : kya choti ke bare me?

N : ha mein ne uske baare me pata karne ke liye ek pvt. Detective ko appoint kiya tha.. Usne mujhe bataya ki nuts ke kidnaping me priya bhi karthik ke saath mili hui he..

Ram ws dumbstrk by ths.. He cd nvr thnk of priya doing such thngs..

Cntinuation wil b postd 2mrw