RaYa SS- Tu Hi Mera Last Part Pg 23 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sss283

hi my name is subhashini...you can call me subu if you like...or any other name as well...no problm...love your works tooo much...os is okay...but do write often pls😛


Subu will be fine for our further conversations! I will write more often!😳

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: salsaly

u can call me saly... btw mein aapse chota hoon... hehe... so i'll call u di... is it ok... 🤗


Saly! So you are a Guy😲I thought you were a Gal😆So yeah you can call me Di:)

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Mayu
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mayu-


Saly! So you are a Guy😲I thought you were a Gal😆So yeah you can call me Di:)

Love,
Mayu


sorry di... my writing mistake... mein aapse choti hun... i'm a girl... 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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WAITING WAITING WAITING
WAITING WAITING WAITING.
...pretty desperate...wanna read more...update karo na pls !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sss283

WAITING WAITING WAITING

WAITING WAITING WAITING.
...pretty desperate...wanna read more...update karo na pls !!!


Subu I will update very soon! Promise!And thanks for reminding me! I tend to forget that I have to update! So thanks🤗

By this Thursday or so!😃

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Mayu
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Hey guys! It's me, Mayuuu, Back with an Update very soon!

First of all, I thank you all for liking and appreciating my work so much. Thanks a lot. It couldn't have been possible without your support guys!!!

Thank you for so patiently waiting for the update :)

Love You All❤️

Love

Mayuuu

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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

🤗Hello All🤗

This is my first RaYa OS and my first ever post in the forum!😳

Hope You All Enjoy The OS And Leave Your Wonderful Replies!😃

😳Dedicated To All My RaYa Fans!😳

RaYa OS- Tu Hi Mera!

Part 2

Priya separated from him and looked at him. She gave him a tight slap. He looked bewildered but before he could speak anything she held his collar tightly and questioned him,

Priya: "Kyun Mr. Kapoor? Kyun? Kyun ek baar bhi nahi aapne mujhe kuch bataya? Kyun nahi kuch kaha? Kyun nahi bataya ki aapko ghar se nikala hai? Kyun?"

Ram: "Main tumhe kaise batata ki mere saath kya hua hai? Pehle hi maine tumhara aur tumahre parivaar waalon ka dil dukhaya hai. Aur upar se main tumse madad maangta. Nahi Priya. Main tumse aur takleef nahi de sakta tha."

Priya: "Par ek baar bhi aap haq se nahi keh sakte the ki ruk jaao Priya. Bas ek baar Ram! Ek baar!" tears clouding her eyes!

Ram: "Keh sakta tha. Lekin main hi nahi jaanta ki mere saath kya honewaala hai? Wapas chali jaao Priya. Ab mere paas kuch nahi hai. Main tumhari zimmedaari nahi utha sakta. Jab main dobara kuch banoonga to main tumhe wapas laaoonga. Jaao Priya!"

Priya: "To maine bilkul sahi kaha tha. Aap mujhe samajh hi nahi paaye. Main aapse pyaar karti hoon aapke paison se nahi."

Ram: "Main jaanta hoon Priya. Lekin tum mujhe samajho na."

Priya: "Aapko samjhne ke liye hi Neha ke ghar aayi hoon. Kyunki main jaanti thi ki agar aap ghar se nikal gaye hai to Vikram ke ghar hi aayenge. " she said placing her palm on his cheek.

Ram: "Nahi Priya aisi baat nahi hai. Main to bas tumhe takleef main nahi dekh sakta. Isliye. Aur kuch nahi. Ab jab tum mera saath ho to mujhe bilkul dar nahi hai. Bilkul nahi."

She went next to him and held his hand firmly in hers and squeezed it.

Priya: "To chaliye. Main aapko kahi le jaana chahti hoon."

Ram: "Par kaha?"

Priya: "Aapko mujhpe bharosa hai na?"

Ram: "Khud se jyaada. Par hum jaa kaha rahe hai..."

Priya: "Aap ko vishwaas hai na to phjr chaliye."

Ram nodded and both said a bye to Vikram and Neha and left walking towards a temple. Ram was shocked to see himself standing in front of a temple.

Ram: "Priya hum yahan mandir main?"

Priya: "Haan. Wo hum in kuch dinon main bahut door gaye the ek doosre se. To maine socha ki jab hum donon hamari zindagi ek nayee shuruat karnewaale hai to hum dobara phere lenge. Main dobara shaadi ke saat vachan nibhana chahti hoon. Kya aap mera saath denge?"

Teras brimming in his eyes, he hugged her tightly as to not let her go and replied,

Ram: "Haan Priya. Pichle kuch dinon main jo kuch hua kya tum use bhool nahi sakti?"

Priya: "Bhool sakti hoon Ram. Aur main bhoolna bhi chahti hoon. Bas aapka saath chahiye.'

Ram: "Mera saath to hamesha se hai. Hume koi nahi juda kar sakta."

He clasped her hand and led her inside the temple. And with that the two were remarried. They took their 7 pheres again, Ram reapplied the sindoor for Priya, and the two prayed to God that this time, they would stay together forever, not drift apart, and that their love remain intact.


They prayed and promised to each other that they will never drift away!

With that both left the temple and came back to a house which looked in no condition to live but with Priya besides him he made hi mind and walked in the house to see someone waiting for both of them!


So guys do you want me to pen down an Epilogue for this? Do leave your precious comments! They really mean a lot to me!

So guys how were it? I hope I have lived up to the standards of all the RaYa fans!

Positive criticism is always welcome!😃

Please press the like button!😳

Love And Luck Always!

Mayuuu

Edited by -Mayu- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
👏👏👏
kya baat hai Mayu! Definitely lived up to expectations! I can totally picture this one happening!
Absolutely loved it!!

EPILOGUE? YESSS!! lol stop asking us, just post 😆😛

Great job! 🤗


Edited by azk92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Mayu dii love u
fantastic post just love it.
And don't ask question for posting.
Just do it.
I will wait for next part.
Edited by SWEETETIKA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Awesome post...very realistic too...keep it up...hope it happens in the serial too...😳

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