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Posted: 13 years ago
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Start from raya's passinate kiss they kiss eachother and things onther way their is knock on the door but ram is no mood to leave priya and starting to kiss priya but priya stop him and go to near door and without opening door says whos there dadi=priya puttar what are you doing in room come fast all guest are arrived . Priya.=yes dadi and go to change after sometime ram came in changing room and he smile because he saw her angel strugling with her hook with wet hair and he rembember last night incident while he opening her hook. He goes to her and priya feel his gaze on her she move and with this ram also moves towards her till she hit in the wall there is no space to move ram nuzzel her so she closes her eyes .ram see this and naughty smile spread on his face . Ram close her hook and wispered in her ears =sweatheart open your eyes and priya open her eyes and stare at him lovingly ram give peck on cheeks and kiss on her forehead and leaves for bath and priya smile at herself and comb her hair and tie her hair in pony and she is shock to see...note =in next part nevi tease raya and sorry if you dont like it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its good dear Nany. U could write it in separate lines and u can use a different font to make it more clear to read. Hope u dont mind me telling u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ravichitra

Its good dear Nany. U could write it in separate lines and u can use a different font to make it more clear to read. Hope u dont mind me telling u

@ravichitra
You have a point in saying it didi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice yaar...
but u could follow what chitra di has told about formatting...so that it would be easy and great to read...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ravichitra

<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Its good dear Nany. U could write it in separate lines and u can use a different font to make it more clear to read. Hope u dont mind me telling u</font></font>

sorry friends i write my os through my mobile so its to difficult for me and you have any solution please tell me i am happy when you people enjoy my os so please help me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi dear nice os update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its tooo good...continue pls...asap !!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...could u write a lengthier one pls...its awesome to read so ...don't feel like stopping at all...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sss283

<font color="#009933" size="3" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">its tooo good...continue pls...asap !!!!!👏...could u write a lengthier one pls...its awesome to read so ...don't feel like stopping at all...⭐️</font>

thank you

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