Next Monday RaYa scene-My take..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 Hey guys.. I know you wanted lalita di or sum1 more experienced to write dis.. But lemme giv it a try... Hope you like it 😊
After the vry awkard demand placed by dadi Ram and priya cum up to their room and start thinking seriously abt d 'parpotha demand'... N here d convo starts...
Priya-Ab kya karenge ram ? Dadi ne toh kehediya hai ki unko kisibi keemaat pe parpotha chahiye...
Ram-Priya,main bhi yahi soch raha tha yaar... Ab ye dadi bhi na,kya kya maangti reheti hai...
Priya-Ab unhone maanga hai toh dena padega na 😉(sharmate hue) hum unhe mana kaise kar sakte hai..?
Ram-Tum kya kehena chahti ho ?
Priya-Aap na kuch nahi samajte... Well wo chodiya ab iss muzibat ka kya kare ?!
Ram-Mere paas ek idea hai ?
Priya- aapke paas ? Mujhe toh laga aapke paas sirf motapa hai.. Hehehe (saying so she giggles)
Ram-Very funny priya .. Tumhe mazak sooj raha hai.. Jao me mera idea nahi bataonga...
Priya- Sorry Mr.. I mean Ram ... Plzz bataiye na.. Ab hum kya karenge ?
Ram-Vikram... !!!!
Priya-kya ?!?!
Ram- Arrey yaar me vikram ko phone lagata hun.. Uske dimaag zaroor kuch aayega.. Vaise bhi uske teen teen bachche hai..
Priya-Nahi ram usse bhi kya hoga ?! Wo bhi hume bachche karne ke liye kahege...
Ram-(teasingly)toh bachche karle the na...? Isme kya hai...
Priya-(getting at him) teek hai,Chaliye..
Ram-chaliye ?! Kaha ? Me toh mazak kar raha tha...
Priya-me bhi kaunsi seriously kehe rahi thi...aap bhi na ram..
Ram-Accha ?!
They hav a cute eyelock... N priya quickly snaping out.. Says..
Priya-Ab aap tym paas karna band kijiye aur vikram ko phone kijiye...
Ram-lekin me kahunga kya.. ?!
Priya-[smiling] ki aapko bacche paida karne me vikram ki madat chahiye.. ?! Lol... She trolling..
Ram-Accha bacchu ye baat hai.. Teek hai me usse kahonga ki wo neha se kahe ki priya ko bacche paida karne ka gyaan de..
Priya-Nahi nahi.. Aap aise kuch mat kehene.. Varna wo aap pe hi doudt karengi..
Both enjoying the teasing... Cum back to face reality n ram calls up vik
Ram-hello vikram..
Vik-Haan,Ram bolo kya hua ?
Ram-arrey yaar phir ek prob ho gayi hai...
Vik-Ab kya hua ?kahi priya se phirse toh jagada nahi hua na.. ?!
Ram-Nahi yaar.. Me manta hu ki priya jagadalu hai... Lekin wo baat nahi hai..
Priya on hearing this hits ram gently n says 'me nahi aap jagadalu hai..'
Ram-shh... Toh ab prob ye hai ki dadi jahati hai ki... I mean... Tere teen bachche hai na ?
Vik-ab yaar tum point pe aa... Aur mere teen teen bachche hai... Chahiye toh ek ada le jaa...
Ram-(freaking out) Nahi... Nahi...
Vik-Toh ab bolo bhi...
Ram-wo dadi ne na parpote ki demand ki hai...
Vik-(smiling) kya ?! Wow ram ab isme prob kya hai ?!
Ram-wo bhi prob hai.. Ab me kya karoon..
Vik-ab ye bhi me hi baaton... Dadi ki wish poori kar aur kya..?!
Ram-wo kese ?
Vik-ab bachche kaise karte ye bhi tumhe samjana padega ?!
Ram-Nahi yaar tu bakwaas mat kar... Solution bata... Ek kaam kar abhi tum aur neha ghar pe aajao ... Hum milke baat karenge..
Vik-ram sunna na...
Ram..- nahi bye..
Aage ki story aapke comments ke hisabse likhi jayegi.. So plzz comment...



Plzz check for continuity on dis post... Part 2 here
india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2922960
Edited by Pinky.Raya - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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cute... i can imagine vikram -tongue in cheek - and neha - big eyes brimming with laughter - giving our hero/heroine lessons... monday is a must watch!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NEHA PRIYA priya ko bacche paida karne ka gyaan de..
WITH DETAIL 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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he he.. U wrote exact sequence of the show. Just logged in the forum n found ur post.. Just amazing.. I m still smiling while writing dis comment.. Come soon next time again wid same kind of the cute story..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dont post this kind of post...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww such a cute convo!😆 Thank u pinky🤗
Romance nahi toh chalo atleast cuteness and shyness will be back now...cant wait for monday😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Send it to CT...we will have Monday episode...well written .👏

Kripa
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u write really well !!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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such a cute convo...plse continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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as i was reading ur take, i was laughing like anything and my Mom was like have u gone mad??😆😆

There is very close chance we getting to see this on monday, u wrote it brilliantly..n we have given our comments, so please continue ASAP😃

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