my random thoughts.. ff pg .16. 21-1-2012 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chak

It is truly 1000% good 1 whatever thought pls update so that our FrSaSu will go soon. Nice thoughts will b involved with u if possible...so do update and continue for three more epis ur thoughts ok...😛

thanku

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 it is impeccable u are teriffic!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha445

👏 it is impeccable u are teriffic!


glad u liked it.. thanku so much for ur encouraging comments...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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read both the parts in one go...
both are awesome...
just loved it...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so awesome, lovely,keep updating son.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Update 3

Ram and priya in the car…..

Priya is speechless because of rams actions….. she was thinking yeah kya …… Mr. ram kapoor ko kulfi se problem nahi hai aur wo bhi mera kulfi se !!! she raises eye brows coyly smiles inherself.. Ram is sharing glances at priya , he observes shying priya and found that priya is turning red. Smiles…. Ram initiates the talk..

R: kya hua priya itna chup kyo hai … intentionally ask maine kuch galti kiya hai kya..

P: ji ….. uhhh .. kuch nahi bas aise chup hu mein.. galti ?? apne kaunsa galti ki bare mein baath kar raha hai… j

R:… ab .. wahi .. wo… suddenly priya turns to him , ram could not tell abt it.. she was clear that he is talking abt kulfi sharing and suddenly lowers her eyes .. say nahi …. Tho … aap ko aise laga hai kya….. ram says grinning mujhe acha laga… glancing at priya ……… after a pause he says kulfi… priya raise her head see ram smiling…. Blushing hard…

Soon they reach kapoor mansion… ram and priya walks inn.. and followed by ram…. Dadi watches this… thinks that they both are having trouble in lyf and call on phone…vikram and neha…

DAdi: tum dono na mera golu ka itna acch dosth hai na… uska akhal teek karo na.. mein nahi jaanta undono ki duriya dur honahi hai jaldi…

VIK:: haan dadi ram and priya hm ke baadh bohot upset hai… mein ne ram se pucha par kuch bataya nahi… par dadi kuch na kuch kar deta hai hum…….. humme choddo ab sab kuch tik kardonga .. promise dadi..

IN room raya

As soon as ram enter the room … priya say ram to change and come… mean while she order for supper… after ram changed and come priya gone to change.. …. Ram sat on the sofa quietly thinking of priyas words last night…. Try to analyse priyas words... then priya comes out bansi kaka here is with food.ram ask bansi kaka to leave .. and look at priya to serve..…

P: aise kya dekh rahe hao

R: mujhe maafi mil gaye ya nahi.. samjh me aya … ..kaka ko jane kheliye kaha tak ki ….pause….. biwi serve karega …. Tho

P: smiles… and looks at ram who made a puppy face by then .. serve the food to ram ….both finish their supper… bansi kaka clears all food trolly priya went to close the door..

Ram stands near the window looking to the sky… priya came to ram …

P: aap ko kya ho gaye…. Aise kya dek rahe hai……. Aap ko taro ko dekhna pasandh nahi hai na …kya baath hai phir se sochna suru kar diya..

R: smile… tumme kaise path ki mein kuch soch raha hai….. mein tumari bare mein soch raha hai…

P: arey wha mera pati mere bare mein soch raha hai … mein ne kuch kiya hai kya…

R: haan !!! tumme abhi tak bataya nahi hai …. Priya shocked ….. dnt get panic priya.. kal raath gusse mein mein tumara maan sun liya.. mein ne tumme kaafi hurt kiya na humari shadi samjhotha keha kar… aur kabhi bhi tumare hak ki bare mein socha tak nahi……. Am sorry.. priya. Priya in tears……

R:pata nahi mujhe tumari itna adath ho gaye.. in sare dinno mein tumme takleef dethe aye hoon par mujhe realise nahi hua ki mein apne aap se takleef karthe aye … .. tummene teek kaha jab tum par mera hak hota hai to mujh par bhi tumara hak hota hai … tumme pura hak hai priya mera zindagi ki raaz jan ne ka .. par mera dar yeah ki mein tumme khona nahi chata hu.. mera zindagi mein itna salo ki akhela pan tummari wajhe se dur hogaye .. agar tum jaogi tho mera life ka meaning nahi hoga… pata nahi tum mujhe kab se ache lag ne lagi……..

Priya tears rolled from her eyes.. ram moves towards priya.. and cupped her face I think mein tumare bina adura hu…. ram wipes her tears and hug her. .. priya also hug him in response.. ..agar aisa feel karna paayar hai tho .. ha then I proudly say that I am in love with u priya….

P: aap mera dil ki keha di ram mujhe bhi acha lagtha ki aap mujh pe aapna hak jathate hai.. tumme hasi dekhna chati hu humesha… aap kipaas rehana chati hu.. … aap ki wajha se hi mera zindagi ki kala nazar utar gaye.. mera akhela pan dur hogaye… men kabhi app ko chod ke nahi jaa saktha……………… aap ke sath pur zindagi guzarni hai.. mujhe app apne aap se zayda acha lagtha.. hai…………..

R: keeps his finger on her lips ………… mujhe patha hai ki tum bhi mujhse paayar karti hu … bahut kuch sehana tumm ne.. priya ram breaks his hug extends his hand and ask " zindagi ki yeah safar tum mera saath kar gi" .. priya gives her hand and tightly hug ram and say haan ram aur ap RAM replies .. akhiri saas tak tumme chodunga nahi… they remain hugging for a while and take silence in each other s arms………… ram thinks ab mein aage badh saktha hu priya,

Ram breaks hug .. looks at blushing priya.. hold bye her waist.. mein tumse kuch mangnahai.. kya hai.. woo!!!!!... tum mujhe pasandh karti hai tho yek kiss !! and stops In middle looks at priyas pink lips…. Priya lowers her eyes wen he closes the gap between their lips… wen ram is about to touch priyas trembling lips door knocked ram ge back to senses.. priya even realises she is longing for kiss from her husband.

R: iss waqth kauin hai… mera kaam barbath ho raha hai.. ram reluctantly goes to open the door… found vik neha..

VIK : tummara phne kya hogay….. chalo phata phat tum donno ready hojayeya bhi … RaM " kyu"

Arey tum bhool gaye har saal humara party goa mein dany aur,,, jane ke saath hotha hai na.. danny ne mujhe phone kiya tha hum sab keliye tickets bhi behja……………… jaldi tayyar ho javo……… both got ready and leave to goa……

PRECAP: santa ram aur mistle toe ki funda /……..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome.suab.keep updating soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Update 4

Hello guys merry Christmas…. To u all……… and its Christmas so id love to update ram and sakshi and the chrismas fun and romance…..

Recap

R: iss waqth kauin hai… mera kaam barbath ho raha hai.. ram reluctantly goes to open the door… found vik neha..

VIK : tummara phne kya hogay….. chalo phata phat tum donno ready hojayeya bhi … RaM " kyu"

Arey tum bhool gaye har saal humara party goa mein dany aur,,, jane ke saath hotha hai na.. danny ne mujhe phone kiya tha hum sab keliye tickets bhi behja………………

Update……………………….

R: danny and jane……!!!! Oh .. dany called me??[ And then checks the phone which is in silent mode] haan !!! yar danny ne cal kiya tha aaj kal Christmas hain shayadh isiliye cal kiya hoga… ha mein ne dekha nahi .. [ turn to priya and sheepishly smile ..think madam samne hai tho kya dikhayi dega…]

Vikha identifies and senses eberything is well between ram and priya and want to conform that .. neha ne taunt kar na suru kar dhiya…

Neha : haan tho waise tum dono kar kya rahe ho………….!!! notice priya cheeks red… and go near priya n say ..priya arey tummara gaal lal hogaye dnt tell me iss fatty ne tum par haath utaya… I kill him.. daddi ne khaha ki tum dono ka jagada chal rahe hai.. par aise …..

VIK: ram tumne kya kiya priya bhabi par haath utaya.. acha nahi hai ram..

R: arey plz tum dono ………meine kuch nahi kiya. Mein kyu haath utaunga priya pe…..arey tu kuch bol na priya

P: embaressed so much … me mein ….. kya bholu.. … .. .. ram gives a stern look … nahi innone aisa kuch kiya. Ab humme packing karna hai na.. gao jana hai na ………

All 4 along with kids start to the goa…… ram was upset because the moment is spoiled.. he just want to see hw priya would response him … she is k with him or not… ……. Every one in the car.. ram wished priya to sit beside him so that as the kids are also there he could be very close to priya….. then vikrams daughter came and sit in between ram n priya .. ram gave a stern look at… priya….they reach airport.. neha pulled priya side…

N: I sense every thing is fine between u n ram … plz tum na ram se kuch karwana hai plz priya… tum na ram se ye …hands over a big pack which is really heavy…. Plzzplzz tum ram ko santa banana mera madath kaogi na

P: arey mein kya .. no way .. meri baath kyu manega wo… no …plz neha …

N : mein ne bacho ko promise kiya tha is bar santa ayegi … tum janthe hai mera 3 shaitan hai.. 2 -3 bar vik .. try kiya par flop hogaye… patla santa eh kar mazak udaya .. ab ram hai tho … fit hojayega .. arey yeah mardo na aise manjata hai.. ki hum thoda seduce kare tho…… tum ram ko thoda sa seduce karo aur wo tumari bahomein …I mean tumari bhatho mein athehi maan jatha hai..

Plzz priya..

P : yeah …. Kya mein ram ko.. seduce karna hai .. no way…. Neha speak s arey tum hi kar sakthe hai .. plz bacho ki katir… chal tik hai ill try …par wo nahi…… seducing ram … neha is happy chal tik hai… love u priya ..

In the flight… ram priya sit together ram just try to hol d priyas hand then vik ka youngest son comes there and points toward a seat beside window… he want to sit there .. priya smiles and give him place..ram thinks .. baccha kitna irritating hoga na ab phela iska maa baap ne aura b isne mera time barbad kar raha hai… they sat like kid priya and ram in line… soon they reach the hotel… vikha meet danny and jane greet them . … ram introduces danny and jane to priya

Danny: arey ram am sorry aap ka booking aise hotel mein hu.. ki mujhe time nahi mila man.. sab kuch itna kam time mein karwaya .. I was busy on work till today ..so thoda adjust kar .. ask priya sorry… take the room keys and move.. ram and priya move and vikha talk with receptionist ki abt room of ram … she says she did it as they say……. Ram priya enter the room

R: take out clothes to fresh.. go to bathroom come out and identifies that dressing room is missing.. look at priya say arey yeah kya.. dressing room ab mein kaha change karo…

P: wahi tho aap ki frn ne kaha ki festival hai sabhi hotels book hogaye tho humme muskil se room mila ab adjust karna hai na.. tik hai mein bahar jatha hu … aap change karligiye…

Ram thinks agar yeah bahar jathe tho mera sare dosth mujhe bahut taunt karega…. Say priya to stay in room ,turn to other side and closes her eyes.. it was rams turn now priya went to wash room .. ram mind is cooking up… he thought priya will change in the room and he can see her.. but priya came out dressing herself

Ram shouts yeah kya… tum wash room per change ki… angry ram, … priya says .. hann kya pharak padtha hai waise mein adjust kar sakthe hai…. .. door knock ….. vik ki daughter came and told them to come near the venue by 10……. And pulled priya.. maa ne aap ko kuch yaad karne ko kaha… priya remembers and look at huge pack and at ram… both got ready… priya in a beautiful dress….yellow colour ki… ram gazes at priya..

Priya called ram. And made him sit in the couch and sit in front of him aap mere liye kuch kar saktha hai kya.. plz……. And hold his hand… he felt the touch is electrifying lost his senses . Haan bolo na…. kuch bhi…. Kar saktha hu… then priya hands over the huge cover.. to ram aap aaj thodi dher keliye yeah pehan saktha hai kya… plz……… ram look into the bag and flenches.. no priya mein santa nahi ban sakthi hai.. accha abhi abhi app ne kaha ki mere liye kuch bhi sab jhooth hai na… neha ne tik kaha sare maardh na yek jaisa hotha hai.. tik hai .. she pretends to be angry on ram and says phehan na hai tho mujhe bhula digiye mein aap ka madath karooga aur mujhe accha lagega .. aur baccho ko bhi … phir aap ki marzi .. mein jar aha ho.. ram stops her ab naraz math ho jao .. bas thodi dher kheliye. K..

Ram wears the suit.. only thing left his mustach..,,, beard,, etc.. priya say mein aap ka madath kartha hu and try to fix them on his face.. .. unknowingly .. priya goes very close to his face.. he could smell her gloss. And feel her breath .. ram felt like priya is seducing him … wen priya said haa hogye ,checking it … ram says.. holding his breath and resist her close to him .. tumara aroma.. I mean gloss ka ya phir perfume ka .. bhot acch ahai.. priya flenches back with this words say thanku… and embaressed priya and ram .. moves for the venue….. its danny's farm house.. and beach view..

There ram acted like santa nad cheer the children there greet every one.. neha thanked priya so much.. teased herand asked what did she give to make ram razi for santa… . kitne kisses dhi.. priya shyly says aisa kuch nahi hu . thoda narazi ka natak maan gaye.. .. priya says.. yeah santa ki costum mein accha se fit hogaye.. greeting every one ram came near priya and search for gift in his bag and found nothing .. priya smiles at his actions and look down then ram pecks in her cheeks ….. priya looks up in surprise at ram .. ram hand s her gift to her….. after a whileram wen to chane………………….. all the kids fun time is finished and every one hand fun with santa and tiered kids went to sleep..

Danny announces actual party starts now..christmas party is incompete without wine and mistle toe.. and hands over a bottle of wine to ram who by then reach priya stand beside her… ..u should do it as ur newly wed. so aap ka pati ka madath kijiye.. ram invites priya hold her from back .. both hold the bottle and open it . served it to all.. … music is on and all the couples started dancing……….. ram offered priya his hand… both are dancing

All the friends decided to take return to ram kapoor.. and danny and jane grabs every ones attention.. ram still holding priya.. danny starts to say this is for u to know priya n=bhabhi wat kind of person ram kapoor was ……… priya looks at her hub confused….. ram realises what he did to them on Christmas party.. .. danny ask ram to stand under mistle toe.. but he rejected every one pulled him.. and now bhabhi now its ur turn .. pulled priya too..

All started saying common ram u do it.. biwi bhi hai. Saath mein .. but ram says no.. nahi yar .. nahi hosaktha mein nahi kar saktha..plz leave me. Priya still look confused… neha comes yeah ram na jab hummara nahi shadi hui na jab humme isse mistle toe ki necche kade kar ken a kiss karwaya tha ab yeah saab ki turn hai .. chodunga nahi… tumme ram .. ab yeha kuch censor kanrne kheliye baccha bhi nahi hai.. priya looks at ram .. {yeh insaan aise… oh god sab seriously leliya..] priya calls neha and ask mera kya its so embaressing aap sab ke sam ne mein kaise..??? nahi yar.. plz leave na.. meri kahtir…

Ram turns to priya say .. riya yeah nahi chodne wale.. meine aise tang kiya …. Ussese .. ab karna padthahai.. nervous priya llooks up to him deep in eyes… says sab ke sam ne .. .. n. then jane k then bhabhi ke khatir lites off karunga par ram app ne kis karna hai.. lites were off ram moved close to priyas lips smelling her glosss.. ram cant resist her and places a lite kiss on her cheeks…as he cupped her face it was like he kissed on lips in dark... priya closes her eyes as soon as the lights were on .. . one berry fell on priya.. evry one laugh at ram .. ram was embaressed.. and shyly look around.. vikha says sach shadi tho samjotha manthe hai par sab kuch aisa hotha hai ki dono ka destiny hai.. priya ram looks at each other .. priya ask neha y did every one laugh at them wen berry fall on them .. neha called ram for explanation .. only he can tell u and neha leaves.. ram takes his mobile and open the details of mistle toe at Christmas give to priya .. reading it she is very much embaressed,,,…. { if u want to know go search in google}

Party is over ………. ram sent priya a text meet me under the mistle toe.. he then decorated the hall with candles.. priya came to the mistle toe searched for ram found the decorations so beautiful around her. Candle light complemented her saree colour and in candle light ram delighted to see priya.. .. ram came near … priya is very nervous.. she could not face ram.. took her hands in his say .. im sorry sab ke samne tumme embaress hona pada… it was all my fault.. apologise her. Priya says it k . koi baath nahi… aap kho thanku kehana hai .. santa banana kheliye… both share an eye lock and… ram initiated ..r u sure ur k????? haan par kisliye ..who jo kuch bhi hua na………. smiles shyly…. Ram hugs her.. priya also spreads her arm around him.. both remain hugging each other for a longer time .. both are lost with love for each other .. then they returned to room… both changes .. n ram went to bed and lie downon bed.. noyices the bed is small for both of them n then say to priya .. priya say him dnt worry mr. kapoor ill adjust… n there is no bigger couch in the room.. both slept on the same bed very close to each other ram loved their proximity… in the morning wen priya woke up she found herself in rams arms smiles and leave to wash room……………………………..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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oooh ram as santa🤣 can't stop imagining and then mistletoe 😳☺️ thnx for the update
Edited by sammy_108 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanku i wonder u read my ff

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