my random thoughts.. ff pg .16. 21-1-2012 - Page 3

Lovely update superb I m speechless so romantic Haye Kya likha h awesum continue soon

Originally posted by: sammy_108

oooh ram as santa🤣 can't stop imagining and then mistletoe 😳☺️ thnx for the update

Originally posted by: Siacutie

Lovely update superb I m speechless so romantic Haye Kya likha h awesum continue soon

Hey its very good...superbly written...continue soon

awesome update dear...

Update 5

Priya wakes up in the morning and find herself cuddling in the arms of ram .. she flenches out of bed thinking ram may feel bad if he see's her like that.. soon goes to wash room and come out in a beautiful dress…. She sat in front of dressing table combing her hair looks at ram… remembering his change in behaviour… kissing her ,,,hugging her under the mistle toe… cuddling ram. She finds herself comfortable in rams arm .. she blushing hardly says herself '"mrs priya ram kapoor seems like ur liking ur husband." Ram wakes up seeing priya in front of him.. thinks hay hay subh subh biwi ki paayri chehare ko dekha hai wo bhi has raha hai.. … .. gets down the bed wishing her GOOD MORNING PRIYA… priya gets to her senses return wishes him AAP UT GAYI !!! GOOD MORNG MR. KAPOOR.. mein fresh ho kar atahu when ram is about to leave there is a knock on their door ram opens the door and find neha and vikram… ram invites them inside … priya is infront of dressing table wiping her sindoor which is on her nose… neha see's it…. Vikram says to ram that their flight is in the evening so their going to the beach today along with kids and gave him two packets . which have cloths for both of them insist them to wear .. because all the kids wants to enjoy in typical beach party … .. ram takes the packets and says yes..

While going neha point s towards ram s shirt …. And say to vik .. lagtha hai humme galath time pe entry kia.. isiliye fatty itna stressd hai.. and nuggs vik.. priya joins them she observe both of them smiling and checks ram ..and found sindoor mark on his white kurtha.. lowers her eyes in extreme shyness.. both vik neha leaves the room saying sorry .. confused ram sees priya who is blushing..

R: hello madam tumme kya hogaye .. aur ye donno pagal hogaye kya .. kya bolraha hai.. …priya trys ti say but she cant meet rams eyes points her finger toward the mark… ram sees the mark and them priya … he is even embaressed and remembers that they were cuddling in the bed the previous night.. says mein change karthe hu..handing over her packet to her…… …… ram seeing the dress in the packet shocked and decided not to where there .. when he comes out finds priya also did not wear.. then ram say's that if kids insist they can change in the beach resort .. both take their packets along with them and move…

Fantastic ,superb update continue soon long part it was short update

Update 6

Both ram and priya reach the beach.. it was the party there… as they both reached there every thing was there in Hawaiian style.. all dressed up in bright coloured shirts ,dresses…. All the kids came near ram and priya running..

Kids: kya hai yeah aunty aap ko drees code nahi patha hai….. iss party ka dree code alag hai .. kya ram uncle humesha suit pehanthe hai .. kitna boring hai tuuu….[priya smiles looking at ram at the word boring]

Neha joins there yeah tum dono ne kya pehan kar aye ho yeah part beach par hai … aap ka mansion mein nahi.. jao jaldi se change karo… humne subha appka kapde diya na… vikram joins and supports neha.. both ram and priya is not willing to wear those funny dress but every one insist so they accepted.. neha pulled priya and vik pulled ram ..

P: yeah dress mein nahi pehan saktha I mean mr. kapoor kya sochega … plz neha mein aise tik hu.. janedigiye na….

Neha : faty kya kahega… kuch nahi kehega .. agar fatty tume iss dress mein dekhega na flat hojayega … ab kuch bahana nahi chalega.. mein bhi pehana hai … .. arey itna acha dress hai ..pati ki samne pehannekha dar kya hai…

Priyas dress looks like http://chicbuying.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/871677019_large.jpg

Priya wears the dress and leaves her hai… her bony sholders and back is exposed and the dress just crosses her knee length… she wears chappals and comes out ..was very uneasy…..

Ram: plz vik mein nahi pehan saktha… priya kya sochega yar.. plz yar janedo mujhe…

Vik : mein kuch nahi jantha .. sunatha na baccho ne kya kaha .. tum boring ho .. ussi bath pe priya haasii.. pehano ram thoda alahg hoga.. hamesha tera business man ki image se bahar avo ..

As there I no way and ram changes to hawwaiian blue shirt and shorts… which looks http://www.batiksarong.com/batik-pantaloon-beachwear/hawaiian-shirt-4b.jpg

Both come out where kids are there… ram stood still open mouth seing priya.. priya looks staring at ram completely different… vik interrupts ram abet era hi biwi hai .. shut ur mouth… both moved toward each other.. embaressed to look at each other..

Ram sent a message to priya.. : tum bahut beautiful ho iss dress mein .. bahut ache lag rahi ho….. be normal mein hi hu na . tumara pati ….

PRiya reads the message and smiles feels a bit relaxed and sends .. thanku.. ur looking cool .. suit mein bahut boring lagthe hai.. u look good in this costume… and hansome too

After a while all enjoy the party both are fine in each others presence… vik finds that ram started liking priya… call ram side and tell him to express his feelings to her………… ram was scared but vikram says ki priya was not hurt wen u kiss her right it self says priya is loving u… so don't worry go ahead tel ur feelings to priya.. vik also offers he will leave the place with kid .. and their flight is in the night and spend some time with her.. ram says ok….

Ram calls priya for a walk …… both of them starts.. walking on beach… mean while vik neha leaves………. Along with kids ……..

Both ram n priya walked silently on beach for a while … and ram initiated clearing his throat..

R: priya… [ priya turned towards him responding "ji '' ] tum tik ho na..?? I mean ur comfortable right!!!!!!!!!! After alittle pause with me??

P: priya got what he is trying to tell.. she lowers her gaze …. Says haan …. Mein tik hu…. shyly say aap hain….. meri saaath….steeling a glance at the corner of her eyes.. bites her lower lip..

R: lagtha hai inka mood kafi achahai… mein kuch kahu… [priya noded her head] tum… ur looking very beautiful today…. With much difficulty he said the word s**y … looks away from priya he was not sure how she ill react….

P: she was shocked at his words… blushing an akwardky say thanku…. Them ram slowly looks her blushing..thinks aaj lagtha hai sab kuch tere favour mein hai.. he hold her hand point to a place where they can sit..

R: hum yaha betehai.. kya hai na ki mein patle hojaunga aur dur walk kiya tho… faint bhi hosaktha hai….

P : priya laughs loud at his words… baas ab aap maan gaye.. aap mote hai.. laughing loud lossening her hold on her… [ram getting angry.. steps forward towards priya while priya is moving away from him teasingly laughing..]

R: meine kab kaha .. mein mota hu .. bas itna kahaki.. [priya wont stop laughing.. laughs still loud.. priya runs away from ram ram runs to hold her... ram got priyas hand n was about to pull her towards him her lleg got tugged in the sand with a small rock and fell on the sand..along with ram on her… she felt the heavy ram on her but did cried .."Ouch" it was like mourning….she liked her proximityto him.. he hold her both hands and pined her ….moving close to her face.. so as she feels her breath on her face…warmth breath made her feel romatic for his proximity…

R: mujhe mote khan tum … moved still more closer to her…. Removed the hair from her face which disturbs his view.. as her dark hair was removed. He could see her dark eyes which has feeling of longingness for him.. mesmerised with her beauty he then looks at her trembling soft rosy lips… without his notice he moved closer to her lips want to savour her lips…. He felt the sweet smell of her gloss made his desire from years arouse.. as he gently touched her lips priya felt the warmth touch of his lips. Pushed him away.. as it is a open place..

P: yeha… open place .. mein!!!! Aap aise… lowers her gaze .. as if she did something she dosent want to do but was forced to do…..

R: haan yeha.. !! sry .. pata nahi mujhe kya hogayi .. tumme aise dekh kar.. in lower voice behak gaya… assoon he says this words priya looks to his eyes share an eye lock .. as she is extreme embaressment she cant look long to his eyes… soon ram.realises the awakwardness she wipes off the sand from her back and shoulders, from her hair… ram looks her bare shoulders which has tiny straps tied on them… .. he raises his hands to wipe sand ….priya feels his touch on her shoulder.. she closes her eyes as it felt awesome .. ram is done.. thinking.. itna beautiful biwi milgaye aur tum …ram agebadnemein kya problem hai tere… itna S*** biwi milgaye tho koi aise karthe hai kya.. par abhi isssi waqth priya kya sochthe hoga na….

R: pyaas lagraha hai mein kuch lata hu…. and moves away from the place….

Priya still feels his touch on her lips.. she felt like heaven in touch for sec… kya hoga jab ram mujhe passionately kis ki… while walking ram also felt like sec of touch is so electrifying….. and reach a cocnut vendor far on the beach.. he saw few couples taking one coconut with two straws… he thought of doing same with priya… he came near priya and handed her the coconut and settle down close to her. She views two straws and looks questioningly towards ram ..

R: shyingly .. wo waha sab aise … tho mein ne bhi yek mein two… the priya smiles seeing ram face like tomato… he is too cute her heart says to kiss his cheeks but controlled…..

P: hiding her emotions in a smile… she ans koi baath nahi .. turns a straw towards ram … Aap !!!! aap bhi … listening this ram with much exitment take the straw. Both have the coconut water looking to each others eyes so close… to eachother lost in each others thoughts…………….

P: interrupting their silence … hogaye… nahi I mean u thirsty… and looks longing to him … he find the realy meaning in her words

R: yek .. hogye.. aur yek baaki hai.. pata nahi kab hoga…priya lowers her gaze… blushing she know he was menctioning his desire for her as thirsty … hogabhi nahi… suddenly looks at ram shocked. ..jii wobhi puri hoga ..in a wishper ram listen to it and ask her what??? Priya replys .. kuch nahi.. hum chale dher hogaye na humme flight pakadnahai.. aur kapde bhi badalna hai na…

Hats off to you!!! Very well written

Wowww fab update beautifully written continue soon