New ff on raya updated on 16th jan pg 30... - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika163

hai hai... twins... awww... sho shweet!!

thanxx dear...
glad u liked it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: haribol79

Haayeee... Twins... EK CHOTA GOLLU AND EK CHOTTI SI GUDIYA... one of each...:)

thanxx dear...
glad u liked it...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anizor

very nice part. thanks

thanxx dear..
glad u liked it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dayabhi

ohhh TWINS is sooo cute...

I'm also a twin so I can imagine how excited RAYA will be to have a twin..
continue sooon..

thanxx dear..
glad u liked it...
will continue asap...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: laduprav

supab, awesome , wish this happen in balh. keep updating soon.

thanxx dear...
nd hope this happens in balh too...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vss08

awesome update continue soon





Swetha

thanxx dear...
will continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
will update asap..
sry for making u wait...
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Posted: 13 years ago
sry guys for making all you wait...
here is the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
sry guys was little busy these days due to my engagement...
but now for sure back on track...
so here is the update...
In the party...
everyone has started to arrive at the party and ram was at the main gate welcoming all the guests...
vikram came their and said to him:tu pagal hai kya ram...
ram:are kya hogaya???
vikram:upar bhabhi akeli hai aur woh tera wait kar rhi hogi,ja upar main dekhta hu yaha pe...
ram:are srry yrr,bilkul bhul hi gya tha guests ke chakkar mein...
In the raya room...
priya was sitting angrily on the bed and ram enters...
ram watches her and said to himself:tu toh gya ram,aj tujhe priya nhi chodegi..aj yeh sarfiri tujhe bhi sarfira bna degi...and gather all the courage and said:p..priya...
priya:kaun hai???
ram:are meri awaz bhul gyi main,ram...
priya:main kisi ram ko nhi janti...kaun hai yeh ram...
ram:arey sorry baba,woh niche guests ke chakkar mein main bhul hi gya tha...
priya stands up and said:ha ap bhul hi gye the ki apki ek biwi hai jo apka intazar kar rhi hai...
ram comes close bends down and touches her tummy feeling the warmth of his babies and said bacho,mumy ko bolo na papa ko maf karne ke liye...papa ke dimag se hi nikal gya tha ki mummy papa ka wait kar rhi hai,apki bat toh mumy man jaegi mummy ko bolo na...
this brings smile on priya's face...
ram sees her and touches his ears and said through his eyes i m sorry...
priya ceases ram cheeks and make him stand and said with tear eyes: its okay..and hugs him...
ram breaks the hug and wipes out her tears and said:main inhe apni jaan ki ankhon mein nhi dekh sakta...
priya smiles and said chaliye ab sare niche intazar kar rhe honge...
ram:are hai,dekho tumhare samne ate hi main sab bhul jata hu and winks at her...
priya:phir nautanki chalu...ab chaliye...
both come down holding each other hands...everyone was happy except those three cleptos...
they both take blessing from everyone and then sharma family arrives...
priya was very happy after seeing them and she was just going to run when ram stops him and said :madam woh yhi aenge,apko bhag ke jane ki koi zarurt nhi hai,ap ab akeli nhi hai mere do anmol ratan bhi apke sath hai...
priya:apko kaise pta ki main bhagne wali thi...
ram:main apni jangli bili ko bhahut ache se janta hu and kisses on her nose...
priya:ram,sabke samne kuch toh sharam kijiye aur main jangli billi nhi hu...
when shipra family comes to both of them...
shipra:are ram beta,party mein toh thoda sabr karo,priya tumhare sath hi hai...
ram little bit embarrased touches her feet...
priya hugs her and said maa kaisi ho...
shipra:main toh bilkul thik hu,tu kaisi hai...
priya:kaisi lag rhi hu..ek dum badiya...
shipra:aur mera natti kaisa hai...
ram interepts and said maa natti kaisa hai nhi puchiye mere nati aur nattin kaise hai...
shipra:matlab,main samjhi nhi???
ram:maa matlab priya apko ek tofa nhi do do tohfe degi..she will deliver twins...
shipra hugs her again and says:arey wah,yeh toh kitni achi news hai...
priya hugs her father with teary eyes and said kaise ho papa...
sudhir by wiping her tears said:main bilkul thik hu aur aj ke din yeh mote mote ansu nikalne ki koi zarurt nhi hai...
priya by nodding her head...
sudhir:beta main tere liye bhahut khush hu,meri beti woh sab kuch mil rha hai jiski woh haqdar thi..
priya by seeing towards ram and said:ha papa aur yeh sab sirf aur sirf ram ki wajah se hai...
sudhir:chal ab chale dadi se milna hai abhi...
to be continued..
hope you all like it..
Thanxxx...
Edited by 14shubhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congratulations on getting engaged..😉

Nice update, thank you!!

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