New ff on raya updated on 16th jan pg 30... - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
@m_n_h thanxx dear...
glad u liked it..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 14shubhi

@anamika thanxx dear...

glad you like it...
and will not make the fonts in italic from now on...
thanx..


thnx yaar... eagerly waiting for ur update😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
sry guys...
for making all of you to wait for so long..
was not well and also busy with xams...
so here is the update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
so sry guys for this delay...
was not well these days..
so here is the next update...
ram by closing his eyes:priya maa bane wali hai..
shipra:kya..are wah yeh toh bhahut khabar hai..apko mubarak ho ram,ap papa banne wale hai...
ram:thanx...par ap sab log aiyega jarur kal..
shipra:ofcourse ram,chalo main rakhti hu sabko khabar deni hai..
ram:thk hai...bye..
ram disconnnects the phone,turns and see priya standing in front of him..
ram:keh dia tumhari maa se ab toh khush...
priya:ha,khush...
In the evening...
Ram was doing last minute preprations in the hall...just then priya comes and tap him on his shoulder...
ram turns and say:priya,tum tum niche kya kar rhi ho...doctor ne tumhe rest karne ke liye kaha hai na aur tum aise ghum phir rhi ho..hold her hand and take her to the room...
priya:ram main bore ho rhi thi isliye socha niche aa jau..
ram being naughty:acha toh tum bore ho rhi thi,mujhe laga ki tumhe meri yad aa rhi hogi..tum hamesha mujhse chep jo rehti ho..chodti hi nhi ho mujhe..
priya:hoo,main nhi chodti..ram kyo jhuth bol rhe hain,main nhi chodti ya mujhe ap nhi chodte...
ram:priya,kyo jhuth bo rhi ho...
priya:thik hai phir yhi sahi..ab main apke pas aungi hi nhi..and was going towards the door...
ram runs towards her and hold her hand and says:arre baba,mazak kar rha tha..tumne toh seriously le lia...
priya:kisne kaha apse main serious thi,main apko ab ache se janti hu and starts to laugh...
ram:acha bachu yeh bat hai..tum meri beti ko ane do phir hum dono milke tume tang karenge..
priya:apko kisne kaha ki beti hogi...beta hoga bilkul apke jaise hai but size main nhi hoga..and giggles..
ram:vry funny but mujhe pta hai beti hi hogi ek dum tumhare jaise but gussa tuhare jaisa nhi hoga...
priya:ram,mujhe pta hai ki beta hi hoga...akhir mere andar hai woh mujhe hi pta hoga..
ram:beti hogi..
priya:beta hoga..
ram:main keh rha hu mujhe yakin hai ki beti hogi..
just then priya sits on the bed and start to wincing in pain and telling ram..ram..
ram turns and saw priya sitting on the bed..ram runs towards her and sits beside her holding her hand and says:priya,priya kya hua...
priya just utter ram and become unconsious...
ram was very scared..
he took priya in his arms and runs towards the hall...and shouting rishaubh..rishaubh..
to be continued...
hope you all like that..
and now will update regularly...
Thanxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
me 1st i hope Priya recovers soon... nice update.. waiting for more RaYa updates😍
Edited by Anamika163 - 13 years ago
shaaranya thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
What happened 2 priya?
Plzz update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey shubi where were u?updating after a long time take care of ur health @ continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
so lovely. we arwe enjoing ur update.keep update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Anamika163 thanxx dear..
glad you liked it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ shaaranya its a good news..
thanxx for likimg it..
will update asap..

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