New ff on raya updated on 16th jan pg 30...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: fan_forever
hey Congratulations Dear for engagement...

and nice update dear...

but pls after such wait one long post was expected...

anyways... loved it...

thanxxx dear..

sry for so much delay,but will try to update regularly...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: haribol79
lovely.. thanks and congrats on the new beginning in u r life... best wishes...

Haribol

thanksss a lot dear...

will continue asap...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Anamika163
eee... congrats Shubhi🤗 areh yaar party toh banta hain😆
gr8 update... keep writing n all the best for ur new life

thankss dear...

nd ya party toh banti h btao kab chahiye...😆

will update asap...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: vss08
awesome update do continue soon

Swetha

thankss dear...

will continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: viny_queen
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thanksss dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: fan-of-phulwa
so awesome, cann't express it in word, so lovely, keep updating.

thankss dear...

will continue soon...

sry for the delay...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

so sorry guys,i know i m updating after ages,but was not able to update due to some personal issues...

hope you all can understand...

so now without any other delay here is the next update...

AFTER THE PARTY...

In raya room...

priya:ram

ram busy with his lapi:hmmm...

priya:thank you ram,thanks a lot for being in my life and make it complete,and giving me all these happiness,thankss a lot ram...

ram:hey,my princess,kya hua..

priya with teary eyes:kuch nhi bas man hua aj apko sab cheeze ke liye thanks kahu..

ram coming closer to her and putting his hands on her cheeks:tumhe kab se zarurat padi mujhse thanks bolne ki aur priya sach kahu,i m very lucky to have you in my life..and now being naughty said,ha agar thanks bolna hai toh aur bhi tarike hai thanks bolne ke liye..

priya understanding his intentions:ap bhi na nautanki hai,do do bacho ke baap ban ne wale hai,par khud ka bachpana nhi gya abhi tak...

ram:toh kya hua,main toh hamesha aisa hi rahunga and kisses her forehead...

priya:ab so jaiye,subha jaldi uthna...

both switch off the lights and went to sleep in each other arms with the sweet dreams of their upcoming life which is full of happiness...

but destiny has some other plans for them...

2 years later...

to be continued..

i know it;s too short but will update tonight or tommorow morning...

hope you all like it..

once again srry for the delay... and this short update is to tell you all that i m back with a bang...😆(vry filmy line na...😆)