Raya cute moments*A COMEDY OF ERRORS*Pg.45 (01.01) - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice .. Loved teh snippets !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi shamma glad u liked the first part of this moment too! Next part asap hope u keep enjoying it dear!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ashimaaa... cant wait any longer!! pls continue so that we all can get to see how their romance is churned up and lol 😆 it wud be lil diffiult for a Raya hug wit his tummy popping up in between...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi s.alekh glad u liked the update..next part to this moment asap hope u keep enjoying it dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi anamika glad u liked the update..next part to this moment asap hope u keep enjoying it dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its a scene in the mandap..nuts and karthik sit as the priest chants the mantras and everyone stand to witness the wedding of the city's richest man's sister..RAM STOOD WITH PRIYA WATCHING his little sister with mixed emotions overwhelming him..the pandit ji's voice breaks into his thoughts as he hears him say-ladki ka bhai kanyadan ke liye aagey aaye..RAM LOOKS TO HIS left and stares at his brothers sid and rishab as they stood next to niharika..and had come that morning thanks to niharika's ultimatum..and ram knew what was going to happen next and soo throwing just a glance at priya as she looked at him..looking away and taking a step back..ram turns to walk away but he feels someone stop him and finds priya's hand clinging to his arm..and as he stares at her he saw her eyes asking him to wait..they share a gaze for just an instant when niharika speaks up-PANDIT JI nuts ka kanyadan ram aur priya kareinge..wahan kyun khadey ho ram..aao..A SHOCKED RAM STARES AT PRIYA as she smiles and whispers to him-yeh hak aapka hai Mr. Kapoor..chaliye..RAM IS STILL SURPRISED AT THE TURN OF events while vikram who was equally taken aback was elated yet wondering how the Miracle happen..AS PRIYA MADE HER WAY TO THE place where nuts and karthik was she recalls how last night after the sangeet niharika had taken her to show her the jwellery she got for her as a wedding gift and priya had asked her-maa..yeh sab nahin..sirf ek tohfa chahiye mujhe..NIHARIKA WAS TAKEN ABACK as priya had gone on to express her wish-main chahti hoon ki nuts ka kanyadan..Main aur Mr. Kapoor karein..aur..NIHARIKA WAS AMUSED AND RELIEVED as she said-bas itni si baat..theek hai jaisa tum chahti ho waisa hii hoga..*FLASHBACK ENDS* the pandit thrusts nuts hand in ram's as priya kept her hand under ram's and they put it in karthik's hand and niharika whispers to her surprised brother why she said that and says-aap sahi the bhaiya yeh gareeb gaay ek dum bholi hai..itna maamooli sa tohfa maanga toh mainey dey diya..THE CRUEL BRO SIS DUO SHARE a chuckle..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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There ram and priya stand behind the couple while the pandits chanted the mantras..and priya steals a glance to look at ram and finds him smiling..her lips too curl up into a grin as she thinks that now she was even with ram..he made her dad happy by granting him his wish and in turn priya had made possible for ram to fulfill his ultimate wish and within..not knowing why but priya felt satisfied..ram turns to priya and finding her smile to herself he finds it a little odd and wonders what the matter was..not knowing that life had gifted him a selfless lover and a perfect life partner to him!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Ashima
i really like your style and creative sense. but can i mention some facts, i don't know if you want to edit it. kanyadhan is only done by married couple according to the hindhu dharam. i do not know how they were showing in the initial episode where ram's brother was asked to do the kanyadhan but unmarried man cannot perform this right. nor can an unmarried woman and man together. this is only as far as i know. and guys if i am wrong please correct me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!!!...its really a nice update ashima...priya has done something for ram though its first time but she give him another life i must say cause as we know ram wanted it from deep of his heart

you just awesome ...nice and touching part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashima_Mishal

Its a scene in the mandap..nuts and karthik sit as the priest chants the mantras and everyone stand to witness the wedding of the city's richest man's sister..RAM STOOD WITH PRIYA WATCHING his little sister with mixed emotions overwhelming him..the pandit ji's voice breaks into his thoughts as he hears him say-ladki ka bhai kanyadan ke liye aagey aaye..RAM LOOKS TO HIS left and stares at his brothers sid and rishab as they stood next to niharika..and had come that morning thanks to niharika's ultimatum..and ram knew what was going to happen next and soo throwing just a glance at priya as she looked at him..looking away and taking a step back..ram turns to walk away but he feels someone stop him and finds priya's hand clinging to his arm..and as he stares at her he saw her eyes asking him to wait..they share a gaze for just an instant when niharika speaks up-PANDIT JI nuts ka kanyadan ram aur priya kareinge..wahan kyun khadey ho ram..aao..A SHOCKED RAM STARES AT PRIYA as she smiles and whispers to him-yeh hak aapka hai Mr. Kapoor..chaliye..RAM IS STILL SURPRISED AT THE TURN OF events while vikram who was equally taken aback was elated yet wondering how the Miracle happen..AS PRIYA MADE HER WAY TO THE place where nuts and karthik was she recalls how last night after the sangeet niharika had taken her to show her the jwellery she got for her as a wedding gift and priya had asked her-maa..yeh sab nahin..sirf ek tohfa chahiye mujhe..NIHARIKA WAS TAKEN ABACK as priya had gone on to express her wish-main chahti hoon ki nuts ka kanyadan..Main aur Mr. Kapoor karein..aur..NIHARIKA WAS AMUSED AND RELIEVED as she said-bas itni si baat..theek hai jaisa tum chahti ho waisa hii hoga..*FLASHBACK ENDS* the pandit thrusts nuts hand in ram's as priya kept her hand under ram's and they put it in karthik's hand and niharika whispers to her surprised brother why she said that and says-aap sahi the bhaiya yeh gareeb gaay ek dum bholi hai..itna maamooli sa tohfa maanga toh mainey dey diya..THE CRUEL BRO SIS DUO SHARE a chuckle..


Ashima... ur a wonder!!😲😲 i just hv one word... specially 4 da bold red parts... faint faint n faint... "MAAR DAALA" yaara👏😍😍
Edited by Anamika163 - 14 years ago

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