New ff *Kitani mohobbat hai* C ARING gesture..pg 5

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Ashima

@Ashima_Mishal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Glad u lykd it shamma lol yeh dil maange more lol next part kal ya monday pukka! Hope u keep reading dear :)

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Shamma Vanat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Yeh dil hamesha more hi mangte hai! lol away tomorrow so if you update tomorrow won't read it till monday 😊

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maris

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Ashima wonderful updates. Read them both in one go. So will it be like this on Monday? Hopefully the CVs take a cue from you.

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Ashima

@Ashima_Mishal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Oh i c shamma in that case i wil update on monday :D

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

No maris it wont be lyk that tb article said ram wil have to climb stairs and he wil have breathing problem priya wil take him home and when ram's driver wil come she wil recognise him lol glad u lyk it next part asap hope u enjoy :D

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Anamika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

SCARED SHE holds onto ram's coat and taken aback ram glances over his shoulder to find priya holding upto him!

RAM Looks at priya worriedly and asks-kya hua...aap..aap theek toh hain?...PRIYA WAS beggining to panic as she says--mujhe..mujhe yahan se bahar nikalna hai...RAM TRIES to joke--theek hai...i got u..mujhe kaunsa yahin zindagi bitaani hai?...HE GRINS...but as he finds priya sweating and gasping for breath by then the smile vanishes and he says-hey...r u ok?...just relax...u wil be fine...😍

Priya was finding it hard to explain and she mumbles to tell him that she had fear of closed spaces...ram feels bad about his joke and then he finds priya leaning against the chamber wall...eyes closed and slowly moving down but just as she is about to sit down...😕

ram catches hold of her by shoulders and makes her stand up...he could feel her tremble and as he pins her against the wall...lest she might fall down...he says sternly trying to not let her loose consciousness-hey...aakhein kholo..dekho meri taraf...😳😊

Priya's head was spinning and her body felt weak as she thought that she would die in that closed chamber...she hears ram almost scream--open your eyes damn it...dekho meri taraf...SLOWLY PRIYA opens her eyes and finds ram with a burning lighter in one of his hands held between them... 😳She looks at him and for the first time since the two had met she notices how innocent his eyes were...ram too realises how beautiful the doe eyed woman was and as the two gaze at each

loved every bit of it Ashima👏 specially dat parts above😍 magical😍... da song is perfect w8ing 4 da next