New ff *Kitani mohobbat hai* C ARING gesture..pg 5

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hi shweta so glad that u lyk the first update next part asap hope u keep reading :D

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Shanti

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Very nice ... We want two more parts before the weekend is over !

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: shanti05
Very nice ... We want two more parts before the weekend is over !

ok./...aapka hukm sar aakhon par...😛

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poetic

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey Ashima, waiting for the next part actually. :)

The first part, though short, was a very nice read.

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Anamika

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Posted: 14 years ago

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ahem ahem!!☺️ next plz☺️😍

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: poetic
Hey Ashima, waiting for the next part actually. :)

The first part, though short, was a very nice read.

Yaa i know it was short but glad u liked it...next one updating now hope u like...😳

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Ashima

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Originally posted by: Anamika163
ahem ahem!!☺️ next plz☺️😍

😆Oh nahiin how cute comment...Next part asap...hope u like...😛

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Ashima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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😳The light goes off ...ram and priya turn to look at each other...stunned and irritated ram was more than sure that even fate didnt want this alliance to happen!...he cribs --pata tha!..PEHLE se pata tha ki yahan aana hii nahin chahiye tha!...

MEANWHILE PRIYA had her worst fear to deal with!...she was a claustrophobic since childhood and now as she found herself stuck in that lift...she felt that the thing was closing down on her!...SCARED SHE holds onto ram's coat and taken aback ram glances over his shoulder to find priya holding upto him!...the song plays in the background as ram stares in belwiderment at priya wondering what the matter was..😛😉

~KUCH KHAAS HAI...KUCH PAAS HAI..KUCH AJNABEE EHSAS HAI..KUCH DOORIYAN..NAZDIKIYAM...kuch hans padii tanhaiyan..kya yeh khumar hai..kya aetbar hai..shayad yeh pyar hai..pyar hai shayad...~...😛

RAM Looks at priya worriedly and asks-kya hua...aap..aap theek toh hain?...PRIYA WAS beggining to panic as she says--mujhe..mujhe yahan se bahar nikalna hai...RAM TRIES to joke--theek hai...i got u..mujhe kaunsa yahin zindagi bitaani hai?...HE GRINS...but as he finds priya sweating and gasping for breath by then the smile vanishes and he says-hey...r u ok?...just relax...u wil be fine...😍

Priya was finding it hard to explain and she mumbles to tell him that she had fear of closed spaces...ram feels bad about his joke and then he finds priya leaning against the chamber wall...eyes closed and slowly moving down but just as she is about to sit down...😕

ram catches hold of her by shoulders and makes her stand up...he could feel her tremble and as he pins her against the wall...lest she might fall down...he says sternly trying to not let her loose consciousness-hey...aakhein kholo..dekho meri taraf...😳😊

Priya's head was spinning and her body felt weak as she thought that she would die in that closed chamber...she hears ram almost scream--open your eyes damn it...dekho meri taraf...SLOWLY PRIYA opens her eyes and finds ram with a burning lighter in one of his hands held between them... 😳She looks at him and for the first time since the two had met she notices how innocent his eyes were...ram too realises how beautiful the doe eyed woman was and as the two gaze at each other the lines play in background--

~KEHNA HII KYA MERA DAKHAL NA KOI..DIL KO DIKHA...dil ki shakal ka koi ...dil se thi meri...ik shart xeh aisi...lagi jeet si mujhko yeh haar hai kaisi...kya yeh khumar hai..kya aetbar hai..shayad yeh pyar hai pyar hai shayad..~⭐️

The song ends and tears stream down priya's face as she sobs-main...woh...woh main...RAM LOOKS into her eyes and says embracing her face with his free hand-KUCH NAHIN HOGA...main hoon na?!..i wont let anything to happen to you...trust me!...☺️

PRIYA NODS her head trying not to think that she was stuck in an elevator...instead she tried to imagine that she was walking along the beach with the open sky over her head!...

THERE ram wishes that the lift starts working as he wondered how long he would be able to distract her and he didnt want anything to happen to her at all while he just stood there helpless...all of a sudden ram was more than glad that he had come there as he shuddered at the thought of what might have happened to her if she war all alone in that lift!...

Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 14 years ago