FF:Dosti, aur phir Pyaar! LAST PART pg 32!

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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thx so much everyone.... and thx kalee............ill continue soon......

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fijianbabe

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Posted: 16 years ago

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i loved it

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Posted: 16 years ago

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omg....it was awsome ...

u r a genious................

pls forgive me..>!!!!!!!!...........i always come here but why dont khow never read it ...b4...why .why .........why...............why.??????????????

and yesterday i jread the whole ff.....and it was awsome...!!!>i liked it so much tht.....i also desribed it 2 my clg frendz.....thy also said it s awsome................................u just rock!!!.....................................................................👍🏼standing oriation 2 u................

i m speechless and just imagining.........the whole story and i hv roosebems........😳thnx................so much and update soon

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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oh thx. but plz credit Kmishra as well. she helped me... plz............

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mohini_agarwal

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Posted: 16 years ago

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great update! please continue soon and pm me when you do.

thanks,

mona :]

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Posted: 16 years ago

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great update... sowwiii i am late...!!!

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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NOTE:

guys, i knoe.. you want to take off ur shoes, get rocks and start throwing them at me, and chase me around with dandas!
but im reallllllllllllllly sorry! i was really busy t last month, cuase im getting my gradese for the marikng period............ and ill try to give the last part to this FF tomorrow.... and then ill tdefenitley update Hum Tum on tuesday, cuz im come home early... and hopeful;ly we dont have hw!. anyways, im rllly, extremely sorry about not updating!...

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raji

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey i totally understand the whole hw thing can't wait for the update

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Epilogue
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5 years later:

Aryan: meri chocolate do mujhe!!!
Anjali: nahi doonga....
Aryan: mujhe meri choclate do!!1 *cry Papa, dekhiye naa Anjali didi mujhe meri choclate nahi derre
Shubh: anjali, tumhari bhai ko uski choclate dedo.......
Anjali: teekh hai. lo tumhari choclate.... HMPH!

Aastha comes from the kitchen and stands next to shubh, smiling ate thier children.............

Ria: meri barbie doll mujhe wapaas do!
Zaara: nahi....mujhe ye doll chaiye!
Ria: plz Zaara, mujhe meri doll wapas do...plz?

Divya: kya hora hai yaahan? meri do pyaari si betiyaan jhagra kyun kar re hai?
Ria: mamma, dekhiye naa Zaara mujhe meri doll nahi der re hai!
Divya: Zaara, tumhari didi ko uski doll de do.....
Zaara: nahi......
Divya: kyun?
Zaara: mujhe bhi, didi ki taARA ek bohut soondar doll chaiye
Amar: Zaara, ye dekho!
Zaara: BARBIE DOLL! thankyo papa!
the girls run off to play........
Divya and Amar happily, smile at their girls.......

Jay: Mamma!! emri science book kidhar hai?
Deepa: ye lo.... tumhari sceince book.......
Jay: meri math book.....
Mahen: yaahan hai!
Jay: thankyou maama, thankyou papa! aab mein jaa re hoon.... mujhe aab jakar mother earth ki upar parn ahi! bye!
Deepa and MAhen smile as thier only son goes to read........

aditya: PAPA!!!!
Swayam: ky hua?????
Aditya: aap meri saath cricket khelne aree ho!
Payal: pehely milk pilo, phir cricket khelne jao.....
Aditya: ewww... mamma mujhe milk nahi peena. plz mein jaa re hoon..
aditya runs out the door to play cricket
Swayam and Payal laugh at theri son....

Evening:

Shubh, Aastha, Swayam, Payal Deepa, MAhen, Divya and Amar sit in the living room , as they smile watching their chiuldren play together............. the scene fades......

the end

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ANJALI and Aryan> Shubh and aastha's children
Ria and Zaara > Amar and DIvya's daughter.
Jay> Deepa and MAhen's son
aditya > Swyam and Payal's son

😆^^

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i know i know u guys want to chase me around with dandas, but im sorry for ending this FF, i had no other story for this FF in mind, and i think for now one FF for me is gopod to handle considering school wrok.
SORRY! 😭

Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago