FF:Dosti, aur phir Pyaar! LAST PART pg 32! - Page 22

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Posted: 16 years ago
*** IMPORTANT***

i just got some sad kinda news. so im really depressed right now.... so i probably wont update for another couple of days......
and i might end this FF.cuz Ive got no story in mind right now, so i will do like 1 or 2 more updates and finish it............Ill just stick to one ff...(HUM TUM) for now, because school is getting rly hard for me now, cuz im in high honors, and im learning high school stuff in 7th grd, so im genna be really busy. so for now ill give you guys 2 more updates, and end it. and update the other ff maybe once or twice a week depeding on my school wrk, and my mood............ im sorry guys....
😭 but studies, for me, come first, even if they're a pain in the neck.😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aww! That's fine Esha!!
Yup School always comes first! Just be calm and if you need help with work just PM me 😊 Im in the 9th Grade 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
aww, I wish you all the best!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
thx payal. and thx adveture_gurl for undestanding. ill update as soon as i can. probably the week after cuz im done with al my tests and stuff on friday.so il se what i can do........

thxxxxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
thx everyone for understanding. another update will come possibly today.depending on my mood...which isnt rly gud right now... but ill try to update today............
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Posted: 16 years ago
its okay..and by the way just becuase i wasnt commenting doesnt mean i wasnt reading...im just really busy these days with like school and then friends and stuff...so soory i havent been commenting...i really like this FF..continue soon hun=)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Okay I know Its been a looooooooooong time sice I updated, but I was sick, and plus I was pressured with school projects/hw/tests'etc''''..
Recap:
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Shubh grabs aastha's hand( u know that sneaky kinda flirty technique)
Shubh: now that's more like ti.... shubh luks at astha and winks.........
AasthaL whispers) chdo, haath chodo, plz......
Aastha tried to relese her hand.........
Shubh: agar nahi kiya toh.....
Aastha tries some more........
Aastha: shubh plz chodo naa......... mujhe jaane do....
Shubh lets go, and whispers.....
' ye haath meine chodo ke liye nahi, lekin puri zindagi yehi thamni ke liye rakha hai'
(Well I guess that's how shubh's line from the kitchen episode went???)
Aastha luked down, blushing like crazy...............again.......................
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Okay so the engagement happens.. nothing really specific'''' the ring exchange'talking'' im not rly gonna go into depth with the engagement''
HALDI / MEHNDHI:
(its at Shubh's house)
Everyone is dancing '''..
Aastha si getting mehndi' and the haldi rasam done'
Divz comes and sits by aastha''''
' hmm'. Dark'.. mera JIJU toh aapse bohut pyaar karthe hain'..'
Aastha blushes''.and luks upto shubh, who is sitting on the other side getting his haldi and all the rasmas done'..
Apparentley, he heard the whole conversation, and winked at Aastha'''.
(btw, all the guest appearances, that ive mentioned besides SRK(sorry Shreya Di) are here.. plus some others)
Dancing:
Deepa, and Divya, plus some other charcters like Mahi, Prachi, NUpur....more... Starts singing''
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai
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Then shubh and aastha sings''..
Ye Kudiyaan Nashe Di Pudiyaan Ye Munde Gali De Gunde Ye Kudiyaan Nashe Di Pudiyaan Ye Munde Gali De Gunde Nashe Di Pudiyaan Gali De Gunde O Mehndi Laga Rakhna Doli Saja Ke Rakhna Mehndi Laga Rakhna Doli Saja Ke Rakhna Lene Tujhe O Gori Aayenge Tere Sajna Mehndi Laga Rakhna Doli Saja Ke Rakhna O Sahra Sajake Rakhna Chehra Chhupake Rakhna Sahra Sajake Rakhna Chehra Chhupake Rakhna Ye Dil Ki Baat Apne Dil Mein Dabake Rakhna Sahra Sajake Rakhna Chehra Chhupake Rakhna Mehndi Laga Rakhna Doli Saja Ke Rakhna
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Mahi Ve (KHNH)
Maahi Ve Maahi Ve That' s The Way Maahi Ve
Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke
Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke
Tere Pairo Payal Chance Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba
Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba
Amrut Ghole Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

That' s The Way Maahi Ve
O Tere Aankhen Kali Kali
Tera Gora Gora Mukhdha Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Rangat Jaise Sona
Tu Chaand Ka Tukda Hai Re Maahi Ve
Tere Gaal Gulabi Rabba Rabba
Chal Sharabi Rabba Rabba
Dil Ki Kharabi Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

and some other songs
Its was getting late.. and aastha wanted to go to sleep. And shubh went to , while everyone else fixede the place'''.
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WEDDING!!!!!! SHAADI TIME!!
Everyone is making the place luk rly pretty.. with flowers, and lights'etc''..
Its 1pm.. and aastha is still slepping, and so is shubh''''
Deepa: Aastha bhabhi is still sleeping, shes usually the one who alwaasy wakes up early'''.(taking to divz)
Divz: I have no idea, shubh jiju toh normal hain' always sleeps in' but aastha?
Back in Aastha's room:
Aastha turns around in her bed''. And wakes up , shocked''''.
' today is the 23'''March''.. its my wedding.. and its'.oh my god' 1pm'..oh god''''..'
Aastha freshens up really fast. Goes downstairs and sees deepa and divz talikig about how none of them woke up''.
Aastha: Good Mrning''
Divz: lo' aaygayi humari maharani'itne late kyun?
Deepa: suhaag raat hai na aaj''.
Aastha : teri to' ur lucky ur my 'nanad''''''..
Everyone started laughing''''''''
Evening:
Aastha si in her room'''getting dressed''
She is wearing a:
http://www.radhikawholesale.com/pcat-gifs/products-small/rdy941.jpg
http://www.nvsglobalexports.com/full-images/682920.jpg
Deepa and Divya are helping her wear the jewelry'and the make up'etc
Back downstairs'Shubh is sitting at the mandap''.
Panditiji: Dulhaan kahan hai'
Shubh was looking at the stairs, waitng for his 'dulhaan' to come down''
Deepa: dulhaan yahan hai'..
Aastha comes and sits next to shubh at the mandap
They exchange there' garlands', do the Saat Phere, and then shubh puts the mangulsutra on Aastha, and the 'sindoor' on aastha's forehead''.
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Shubh is walking up to his room with swayam, and amra'tesing him''.
Shubh opens the doors' and Deepa, and Divya ask for money
BOTH: give it''
Shubh: here'happy''.
BOTH: hundred se nahi chaalega''.
Shubh: teekh hai'.
Suhaag Raat''.
(most of the Suhaag raat is written by Kmishra'. I feel a bit weird/akward writing all these mushy, lovey stuff' so'. Kmishra helped me'all the credit for the Suhaag raat goes to her'not me''.. so plz give credit to Kmishra as well)
Shubh is pushed into the room. He smiles and looks around, as he closes and locks the door behind him. The room is wonderfully decorated. The sweet fragrance of flowers roams throughout the room. The room is dimmed with candles everywhere. Shubh finally spots the bed. He smiles. There is Aastha, in a beautiful red lengha with her ghoongat gently covering her face. All that is visible are her luscious lips. She is sitting in the center of the bed with her knees against her chest. She feels Shubh coming closer. Her heart rate increases. Shubh sits on the bed, facing her, with a huge grin formed on his face. He takes a deep breath as he slowly lifts her ghoongat up. He lets go of the ghoongat, allowing it to fall behind her. Her eyes are closed and her face is pointed downward. Shubh bites his lip seeing her shyness. He lifts her face up by her chin. Aastha gradually opens her eyes to see Shubh staring at her. He's admiring her flawless features. Aastha blushes. Shubh finally looks into her eyes.
Shubh- You look gorgeous.
Aastha quickly lowered her gaze, still blushing.
Shubh- I can't believe it. Finally, you're mine. My beautiful, irresistible, mesmerizing wife. I don't know what I'd do without you. I feel like the luckiest man in the world to have such a lovely wife. I can't even describe how perfect you are. I love so much.
She looked up and flashed a gentle smile. Tears welled up in her eyes as she was touched by his words.
Aastha- I love you, too. I'm the lucky one. Sometimes I wonder, am I even worth your love?
Shubh- Of course, you are. And don't you ever think that again. No matter what, I'll always be happy to have such a great wife like you.
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

and some other songs
Its was getting late.. and aastha wanted to go to sleep. And shubh went to , while everyone else fixede the place'''.

-------------
WEDDING!!!!!! SHAADI TIME!!
Everyone is making the place luk rly pretty.. with flowers, and lights'etc''..
Its 1pm.. and aastha is still slepping, and so is shubh''''
Deepa: Aastha bhabhi is still sleeping, shes usually the one who alwaasy wakes up early'''.(taking to divz)
Divz: I have no idea, shubh jiju toh normal hain' always sleeps in' but aastha?
Back in Aastha's room:
Aastha turns around in her bed''. And wakes up , shocked''''.
' today is the 23'''March''.. its my wedding.. and its'.oh my god' 1pm'..oh god''''..'
Aastha freshens up really fast. Goes downstairs and sees deepa and divz talikig about how none of them woke up''.
Aastha: Good Mrning''
Divz: lo' aaygayi humari maharani'itne late kyun?
Deepa: suhaag raat hai na aaj''.
Aastha : teri to' ur lucky ur my 'nanad''''''..
Everyone started laughing''''''''
Evening:
Aastha si in her room'''getting dressed''
She is wearing a:
http://www.radhikawholesale.com/pcat-gifs/products-small/rdy941.jpg
http://www.nvsglobalexports.com/full-images/682920.jpg
Deepa and Divya are helping her wear the jewelry'and the make up'etc
Back downstairs'Shubh is sitting at the mandap''.
Panditiji: Dulhaan kahan hai'
Shubh was looking at the stairs, waitng for his 'dulhaan' to come down''
Deepa: dulhaan yahan hai'..
Aastha comes and sits next to shubh at the mandap
They exchange there' garlands', do the Saat Phere, and then shubh puts the mangulsutra on Aastha, and the 'sindoor' on aastha's forehead''.
--------------
Shubh is walking up to his room with swayam, and amra'tesing him''.
Shubh opens the doors' and Deepa, and Divya ask for money
BOTH: give it''
Shubh: here'happy''.
BOTH: hundred se nahi chaalega''.
Shubh: teekh hai'.
Suhaag Raat''.
(most of the Suhaag raat is written by Kmishra'. I feel a bit weird/akward writing all these mushy, lovey stuff' so'. Kmishra helped me'all the credit for the Suhaag raat goes to her'not me''.. so plz give credit to Kmishra as well)
Shubh is pushed into the room. He smiles and looks around, as he closes and locks the door behind him. The room is wonderfully decorated. The sweet fragrance of flowers roams throughout the room. The room is dimmed with candles everywhere. Shubh finally spots the bed. He smiles. There is Aastha, in a beautiful red lengha with her ghoongat gently covering her face. All that is visible are her luscious lips. She is sitting in the center of the bed with her knees against her chest. She feels Shubh coming closer. Her heart rate increases. Shubh sits on the bed, facing her, with a huge grin formed on his face. He takes a deep breath as he slowly lifts her ghoongat up. He lets go of the ghoongat, allowing it to fall behind her. Her eyes are closed and her face is pointed downward. Shubh bites his lip seeing her shyness. He lifts her face up by her chin. Aastha gradually opens her eyes to see Shubh staring at her. He's admiring her flawless features. Aastha blushes. Shubh finally looks into her eyes.
Shubh- You look gorgeous.
Aastha quickly lowered her gaze, still blushing.
Shubh- I can't believe it. Finally, you're mine. My beautiful, irresistible, mesmerizing wife. I don't know what I'd do without you. I feel like the luckiest man in the world to have such a lovely wife. I can't even describe how perfect you are. I love so much.
She looked up and flashed a gentle smile. Tears welled up in her eyes as she was touched by his words.
Aastha- I love you, too. I'm the lucky one. Sometimes I wonder, am I even worth your love?
Shubh- Of course, you are. And don't you ever think that again. No matter what, I'll always be happy to have such a great wife like you.
Those words pulled Aastha towards Shubh. She just fell into his arms, hugging him tight. Her face dug into his chest. Shubh softly stroked her hair. After a few minutes of that passionate hug, Shubh pulled Aastha away. He smiled and wiped her tears off her face. She was looking down as he started to remove her jewelry. First, he took off her tikka (worn on the forehead). Next, he took off her earrings along with her nose ring. Finally, he took off her necklace. She closed her eyes, feeling chills, as his warm fingers brushed against her neck. He placed them on one side of the bed. He looked back at her, once again, mesmerized by her beauty. Aastha was stilling looking down, with her eyes closed. She awaited his next move. Shubh leaned in, placing a kiss on her cheek. His lips then moved to her neck. He started to kiss her neck all over. Aastha just tilted her head, inhaling deeply, as Shubh's lips went to her shoulder. Aastha shrugged. It was indescribable how she felt. She felt on top of the world, as Shubh placed many kisses on her shoulders. Aastha had this small, cute smile on her face that she didn't even notice was there. Shubh stopped kissing her and looked up. He grinned and looked at her lips. It seemed as if her luscious, red lips were calling out to him. Shubh placed a hand on Aastha's waist and another on her shoulder, as he slowly leaned in. Aastha felt Shubh's lips approaching her. Finally, their lips touched and Aastha felt like she couldn't breathe. She was overjoyed and yet so shy. Shubh started to kiss her deeply. Aastha dug her hand into his hair, scrunching it. Shubh's hand that was on her shoulder found it's way to her blouse's strings. He started to pull the string, loosening her blouse, as he laid her down. Shubh and Aastha were now passionately kissing. The scene fades'


hoope u guys liked it. and thx so much kalee!!😳

Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW! AWESOME UPDATE MAN!!
LOVED IT!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
YAY!!!!!! They''re married
really nice scene between them in their suhaag raat
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update...and thanks for giving me credit hun...glad ppl liked it
CONTINUE SOON=)

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