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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ola!How are you? I am Iptisha, not a writer but try to pen down my thoughts whenever I find time! Although this One shot has nothing to do with the show, it is written to introspect ourselves and the country in which we reside or belong.

Let's see if a small piece of work can make a difference...read review and discuss.

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**!Salvation!**



As I look up in the lead sky of this misty world, I breathe frigid

As my shadow is separated from my living corpse, my Breathflows erratic

I feel my skin being peeled, on broken dreams does my world survive

I have only you to rely on, please don't turn away from me

Shower your grace on me, awaken mercy and goodness
Burning loneliness and Angry shadows have engulfed me
The wind has lost its way the atmosphere has lost its aura, and here is my soul, dead and doomed
The sunshine shows no hope as fear is all I find, a fear which can't be described

Time is stangant, life is purposeless

As desolate moments hope for you, my wounded heart thirst for you
As my erratic heartbeat searches for you , I find you nowhere
Emotionless eyes ask each other for solace , empty hands lay motionless
Peace screams in agony and pain, Rivers of blood plead with you
Every trace of you is being wiped out

With frozen poise I still search for you

As I know you are there to protect me from the malevolence and mallice.

You were the one whom they trusted, You were the one whom they loved. They had so much faith, so much hope so much belief for You,but all fell apart. Like mended glass does that phase linger in the history of the Country India.

With Blood, With Tears, With Agony, With Fears, did they Live, did they Die. What was the Sin of those innumerable innocent hearts? What did they pay for?

Terror refuted to leave them, so did their anguish. You were the only one they could look forward to but you didn't help them either. They say God is supreme, but if you were supreme then why did they have to suffer the brutality? It was you who was supposed to rescue them, You were their ultimate family. This is Your world, they were Your children. There lay a difference though, some were not humans, and others were not destructors.

Twenty six Eleven, the peace breaker in history, remembering which the Nations mourn and Hearts twinge.The death call for countless innocents and the atrocious invaders.

They died a thousand deaths, hijacked in those rooms, their tears melted no hearts. Blood dripped as bullets pierced in their tender skin. Fire burnt them alive. Still they had hope in their hearts. A hope to live, a hope to see their family one last time, a hope to say a last good bye to their loved ones. Their hope lingered in their souls even when they had left the world. Brave hearts they were to still have hope and faith in you. Their families lost hope in you but regained with time. Still you did nothing as the terror continues... The victims as they were tagged as died the last final death when they were bombarded and shot. But did situations become any better after such a tearjerker incident? The Terror-Saga continues...

What changed? The crime rates rose, rational thinking diminished and the capital city became the hub of crimes. Saying that the base shifted would not be appropriate but definitely has the branches extended. What remains the same? The love and faith their family and the rest of the country has on you. Even when they still bewail and grieve at the pain, the terror, they have hopes to live in peace and solace someday.

You are our Hope, you are our Sunshine.Only you alone can we depend on, rely on. You are our one and only succor.

There is no one of ours In this world of yours, we have no one to call ours. We have no shoulder to cry on, no one to wipe our tears off. We cannot behold this sight of wreckage and destruction. Here no one regards the other as family. No one is altruistic, no one is faithful. Laid to waste are the destitute of society, mourning in pain,in misery and remorse.

With tears in her eyes a mother carries the debris of her own blood, cries at her misfortune. She no more knows the purpose of living, as the society has brutually eradicated her soul her love. Amidst the smoke of gunfire lay innumerable people in blood and without flesh. How to put all the devastation to end? You enlighten us as we know no way out of the ever lasting desolation. We are innocent. For what are being punished?

Hatred welling over in the hearts of everyone is slaughtering us all alive. We are being butchered alive, yet no one stops being vicious. Its you and only you who can teach the invaders to love again as we want this world filled with thorns to once again become a beautifully adorned eden.


They have a hope which shall never die, they are strong enough to believe you. You, the cosmic energy, the eternal vigor, the perpetual synergy. They named you God and pray selflessly with a candle in hand as its flame is what enlightens their journey of life...


We wish for peace in life; we ask for fidelity in love.
May you not delay in changing our situation, God!
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Always

Iptisha

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A/N:

A tribute to the innocent lives lost in the tragic attack.

A tribute to the who laid down their lives to save the innocent civilians.


26/11----Mumbai Terror Attack! A blotted day in history! May all attain solace!

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This was written long ago for no ONE forum but everyone! So I thought to post it here as everyone is too sensible, watching an even Uh-may-zing show!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You know whenever I read something on nation pride or patriotic themes in general, I feel my eyes water up!
I don't why? But yeah! Now don't roll your eyes, I maybe despise certain things, but in humanity I can relate myself to this OS!

Also I don't know but this song comes in to my mind,

"Aye Mere Watan Ke Logon
Zaraa Aankh Mein Bhar Lo Paani
Jo Shahid Hue Hain Unki
Zaraa Yaad Karo Qurbaani"

One of the few Lata Mangeshkar songs I can actually listen to!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gujjupari

You know whenever I read something on nation pride or patriotic themes in general, I feel my eyes water up!

I don't why? But yeah! Now don't roll your eyes, I maybe despise certain things, but in humanity I can relate myself to this OS!

Also I don't know but this song comes in to my mind,

"Aye Mere Watan Ke Logon
Zaraa Aankh Mein Bhar Lo Paani
Jo Shahid Hue Hain Unki
Zaraa Yaad Karo Qurbaani"

One of the few Lata Mangeshkar songs I can actually listen to!



I love Ek Tu hi Bharosa as well! Both are actually heart touching! xD
You read it again? nahi na?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: BeyondWords



I love Ek Tu hi Bharosa as well! Both are actually heart touching! xD

You read it again? nahi na?


I haven't heard that one before :"(

Yeah I had to read it again!! It just sends shivers down my spine :")
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gujjupari


I haven't heard that one before :"(

Yeah I had to read it again!! It just sends shivers down my spine :")



It is nice...I sang it in the choir group before high school! xD
I just read it once, before posting in order to proof read! My dad calls this shallow! x/
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohkk that's the day when I wished I was some army officer to kill all the terrorist. I loathe them the most. This one was really great... I feel bad now also. This is one of the topic if I am asked to write essays then I wud Neva stop, venting out frustrations.
Iptisha, well written... I love your writings so much and here u are saying u were just try writing something. Please someone go and tell this girl that she writes awesome 😳
I became so patriotic most of the time...
And I hated the govt when they were feeding Kasab for years without killing him.. :\
Keep writing!
Love
-Sush
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gujjupari


I haven't heard that one before :"(

Yeah I had to read it again!! It just sends shivers down my spine :")


I have heard both the songs, and sang so many times in choir xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushie166


I have heard both the songs, and sang so many times in choir xD



Have you sung Aye mere watan? In high scale? :O
Oh mayn! Such an amazing singer you must be! I can't imagine to sing it at Lata ji's scale!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushie166

Ohkk that's the day when I wished I was some army officer to kill all the terrorist. I loathe them the most. This one was really great... I feel bad now also. This is one of the topic if I am asked to write essays then I wud Neva stop, venting out frustrations.

Iptisha, well written... I love your writings so much and here u are saying u were just try writing something. Please someone go and tell this girl that she writes awesome 😳
I became so patriotic most of the time...
And I hated the govt when they were feeding Kasab for years without killing him.. :\
Keep writing!
Love
-Sush



Are you becoming an army officer? :O
Write on it then! XD
AHhah! I liteally just try to write, their are so many great writer out there in every forum.
Well About Kasab, we cannot blame the Govt. and this I am saying for the first time for any criminal. That's because they hoped he would reveal the loops someday!They thought maybe he would give hints about his group but sigh! Although I truly believe they should have not hanged him but tortured to death, by passing current through his body, making him bleed and whatever other means but literally made him bleed tons! Same should be done with the rapists of the society and other criminals who commit equivalent crimes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: BeyondWords



Have you sung Aye mere watan? In high scale? :O
Oh mayn! Such an amazing singer you must be! I can't imagine to sing it at Lata ji's scale!



Array u r getting it wrong, I sang dat bt in choir...
imma very bad singer yet they used to include me in the grp, m more interested in dancing xD

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