MEANT TO BE..26th part updated page 49 - Page 16

Created

Last reply

Replies

342

Views

30.1k

Users

60

Likes

556

Frequent Posters

294531 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
woww. awseme writting loved the 8th part..
SejN thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 14 years ago
nice part plz wrtie more soon :D
atikna thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

9th part

Next morning

Sanchi woke up she had to go to school but her wound had not healed it was still painful

She somehow got ready and made her way out side

She was as usual talking to God : Hey bhagwan kyun kyun mujhe yeh chot lagi (why did I get hurt)

God: taki tum au Shravan ek dusre ke paas aa pao (its what will bring you and shravan closer)

Sanchi: mujhe aaj school jaldi jaana hai lekin is tarah langadte hue main kaise pahunchgi time pe han?(how will I ever reach school on time)

God: tumhara hero pahunchaega tumko(your hero will take you there)

Lo aa gaya(here he comes)

Shravan had cometo office early and was going out to get some tea when he saw Sanchi limping and that also talking to herself , he smiled to himself and started following her. He walked behind her listening to the imaginary conversation she had with God

Sanchi: aur who ladka who ladka Shravan samajta kya hai apne aapko ,

God:oh no is ladki ka koi muh band karo

Sanchi: mujhe bich raste mein aise pakkad liya , offff itne acche pariwaar wale hain iske aur yeh itna off kya kahun itna arrognant , itne acche gharwalon ko aisa beta kaise mil gaya

Shravan: woh kya hai na main adopted hun isliye mere gun nahi milte hain mere ghar walon se

Sanchi: aap , aap mera picha kar rahe the , aap meri baatein sun rahe the

Sharvan : aap kisi se baat kar rahi thi? Mujhe toh koi nahi dikh raha hai

Sanchi: main kisi se bhi baatein karun aapko kya(what is it to you)

Shravan: nahi mujhe kya log aapko hi pagal samjhenghe(people will think you are mad)

Sanchi: aap mere sath sath kyun chal rahe hain(why are you walking with me)

Shravan: taki aapko log pagal na samjhen(so that people don't consider you as mad)

Sanchi dekhiye mujhe jaane dijiye mujhe jaldi school pahunchna hai(i need to reach school fast)

Shravan : main kahan rok raha hun aapko( i am not stopping you)

Waise agar is tarah chalenghi toh chutti ke time tak pahunch jayenghi school(if you walk at this pace you'll reach school by the end of the day)

Sanchi: making disgusting faces at Shravan , toh kya karun aap ke dost ki car ne hi mujhe takkar mari thi ab rickshaw stand tak toh jaana hi hoga na chalkar mere darwaze tak toh nahi ayegha na(it all your friends fault that i got hurt)

Shravan: ek kaam kyun nahi karti chutti le lijiye jab tak pair thik nahi ho jata(why don't you take a off)

Sanchi: mujhe sirf 3 din hue hain job join karte hue main itni jaldi chutti kaise lun( i can't)

Shravan: toh ek kaam ho sakta hai agar aap chahe toh?(i have a solution if you permit)

Sanchi: kya(what)

Shravan: agar aap aagya den toh jab tak aapka pair thik nahi hota main aapko school tak chod diya karunga aur le bhi aaunga(i can pick and drop you till you are ok)

Sanchi: no thanks , mujhe phir aapke dost sunayenghe ki maine aaoko phas lia

Shravan: dekhiye main uski taraf se mafi mang chuka hun , aur pakka yeh arrangement tab tak jab tak ki aapka pair thik nahi hota uske paad pakka waada main aapko apna chehra nahi dikhaunga

Sanchi: par ap mere liye yeh sab kyun kar rahe hain

Shravan: kyunki kahin na kahin main aapko chot lagne ka zimmedaar manta hun aur dusri baat main bas yeh jatana chahata hun ki main utna bura bhi nahi hun jitna aap samajti hain. Saying this he smiled

And before she could say anything , he said :wait a minute

He ran and brought his bike

As Shravan left Sanchi at the school. Toh chaliye shyam mein milte hain

Sanchi: Shravan ji thanks

Shravan : ohh mere kaan ko toh jannat mil gayi , main thik se suna na , aapne mujhe thanks kaha , Shravan beta tere toh naseeb khul gaye

Sanchi:bas bas aapko kya lagta hain main kabhi thanks nahi kehti

Shravan: mujhe toh nahi kehti ,

Sanchi: abhi toh kaha

Shravan: tabhi toh jannat mil gayi

Sanchi: kya aap sabko aise hi irritate karte hain

Shravan : nahi sabko nahi sirf unko jo jaldi irritate ho jate hain

Sanchi: off main chali aapki baton mein time waste nahi kar sakti

Shravan: arre bhag kyun rahi ho ,mujhe hara nahi paayi

Sanchi stopped and said: hum ladh rahe the ki koi contest chal raha tha

Shravan:han , aur yeh round chalega shyam mein bye main 5:30 pe yahin milunga

Sanchi looking at Shravan going away : kitna ajeeb aadmi hai lekin ,job hi ho meri madad kr raha hai

Itna bura bhi nahi hai

Shravan: kyun main is ladki ki taraf khicha chala jata hun , aakhir kya hai isme, shayad sirf isliye ki main iske liye sorry feel kar raha hun

Saying this he satisfied himself

God: off aur kitne ishare dene padhenghe inhe , maine isqh jaise cheez kyun banai aur banai bhi toh ab is process ke bich kyun padhta hun no wonder mujhe sabke prayers fulfill karne mein itna time lagta hai.kyunki main in pachadon mein padh jata hun

Mamana thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Very interesting. Like the inserts by God! Keep it up Atikna.
-Jahnvi- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
"mera kaan ko jannat mil gayi" 🤣🤣🤣🤣

oh ankita... i am rolling so hard on the floor right now!!!!
kchitra77 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Anku......very nice convo between SS....ur sense of humour is superb.......u have retained Shravan's boyish side though he is a matured n responsible person here....well done
atikna thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kchitra77

Anku......very nice convo between SS....ur sense of humour is superb.......u have retained Shravan's boyish side though he is a matured n responsible person here....well done



thanks a lot chitra
join us in our chat at the other thread
Infofan thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Anku,

Almost missed this, didn't get a PM from you.

Love their nok-jhok. You FF is almost as addictive as watching BHPH.😊
atikna thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Infofan

Hey Anku,

Almost missed this, didn't get a PM from you.

Love their nok-jhok. You FF is almost as addictive as watching BHPH.😊



thanks a lot

i am sorry for not sending pms
was thinking to do it tomorrow morning


sash10 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
omg omg i love ur fanfic seriously love the way its turnin out n i red ur fanfic in one night seriously, it really had my attention 😍

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".