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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhh lovely update!
sorry for the late reply hun, dint get the time to read it, ws sooooo busy since the past few daysss...sowiiee again
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Posted: 14 years ago

10th part

Shravan was working hard at his office when rahul came over

Rahul: hi shravan

Shravan: tu aa gaya maine socha aaj bhi nahi aayegha , yeh le completed projects aur han yeh client ka phone aaya tha tujhe bulaya tha milne ko

Rahul: chala jaunga yar chala jaunga , aur bata kya chal raha hai

Shravan: Rahul yar der mat kar jitni jaldi client ko satisfy karenghe utna jaldi hamara naam badhega aur hume aur kaam milega which means more money

Rahul: talking of money mere ko company account se thode paise chaiye

God:golmal hai bhai sab gol mal hai

Shravan: paise kyun, abhi toh tune liye the pichle hafte

Rahul: bas jarurat hai abhi thode din baad dal dunga

God: golmaal hai bhai sab gol maal hia

Shravan was not happy but didn't say so : ok take it

At 5 Shravan got up , Rahul had come back after meeting the client

Rahul: kahan ja raha hai tujhse yeh client delivery discuss karni hai

Shravan: abhi bas thodi der mein aata hun jaruri kaam hai

Rahul:aisa kya kaam hai jo ki tu office hours mein ja raha hai

Shravan : bas hai main chalta hun 6 baje tak laut aanga pakka

Rahul sees him going

Shravan is outside the gates of doon school at exactly 5:30

Sanchi came and without a word sat behind him

Shravan: chalen!!!!!!!

Sanchi: han kyun

Shravan:lecture nahi dogi koi mujhe

Sanchi: koi fayda hoga ?

Shravan: starts laughing aur hamari ladhai jo subah shuru hui thi ?

Sanchi: toh khatam kar do

Shravan: accha chalte hain aaj mujhe office mein kaam hai

He took her home and then said bye.

He came back to office rahul was waiting

Rahul: kaam ho gaya janab ka ,

Shravan : han

Shravan was engrossed in his work when he again glanced outside and saw sanchi giving water to her plants and as usual she was speaking he said aloud jarur phir se mujhe aur bhagwan ko gali de rahi hogi

Rahul:kaun

Shravan: koi nahi bas aise hi apne se baat kar raha tha

Shravan thinking : hey bhagwan is ladki ke sath rehte rehte shyad mere ko bhi log pagal samajne lageenge

God: oh no , nothing like that will happen just that you'll go mad in love with this girl

At night

Sanchi was thinking about shravan

Kaisa ajeeb ladka hai pehle meri insult karta hai phir ab meri itni madad kar raha hai , aur us din mandir mein pata nahi kya hoga tha mujhe, main baar baar use mudh ke kyun dekh rahi thi

Kyun hum log itni baar takraye ek dusre se

Khair jo bhi ho kal bhar uske sath jaunghi uske baad use mana kar dunghi , ab toh pair ki chot thik bhi ho jayeghi ohir use milna nahi padhega , hmm kal use acche se thankyou karke chalta karunghi

Bahut ho gaya

God:yeh kaise ho sakta hai who toh tumhari zindagi mein aaya hi hai rehne ke liye aise kaise use chalta karoghi , main karne nahi dunga , tum kab se itni bewakoof hogai main tumko rajkumar who bhi bike wala de raha hun aur tum use bhaga rahi ho, kya ho gaya hai aaj ki generation ko, mujhe hi itni taraqqi nahi karne deni chaiye thi insane ko………….par jaise mere hi ek mahan vansh ne kaha hai ab pachtaye kya hohat hai jab chidiya chug gayi khet

Ab dekhna padhega ki aage in dono ke liye kya kya karna padhta hai , off yeh love story toh meri neend haram kar degi

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Posted: 14 years ago

11th part

NEXT MORNING

Shravan was at Sanchi 's doorstep

Shravan: aapka personal rickshaw driver hazir hai

Sanchi: dekhi mujhe aapse baat karni hai , mera pair ab thik ho gaya hai kal se aap mat aayegha thik hai

Shravan: sach mein thik hogaya ?

Sanchi: han

Shravan : jara chalke dikhaiye

Sanchi: yeh lo

As she starts walking she walks a few steps and then suddenly

Sanchi: kya matlab hai

Shravan was laughing at her

Shravan : ha nab mujhe proof mil gaya

Sanchi: kya proof mil gaya

Shravan:yahi ki ladkiyan pagal hoti hain

Sanchi: plz dekhiye

Shravan: accha abhi jo aapne kiya who kyat ha

Sanchi: who main who main

Shravan : accha chodiye chaliye aaj main aapko chod aata hun aur le bhi aunga kal se pakka as per our deal no more chera dikhana aapko

He leaves her at the school and comes back laughing at how Sanchi has started showing him that she could walk

At the office

Rahul: kahan gaye the?

Shravan: tum itni subah?

Rahul: aa gaya bas , kal raat disco gaya tha tum bhi chalna

Shravan: yar tujhe pata hai main disco nahi jaata

Rahul: tune life ki sahi masti dekhi hi nahi hai.main nahi janta agle hafte mere b'day pe tujhe aana hi hoga wahan drink mat karna , par aa jana

Shravan: thik hai thik hai lekin no drinks plz

Rahul: ek baar try karke toh dekh

Shravan: tu na!!!!!!!

Chal kaam karte hain

At 5 shravan again got up , I have some work I'll join you at 6

Rahul: tu ja kahan raha hai ?koi ladki ka chakkar hai kya ….

Shravan blushed

Shravan: arre nahi yar bas kisi ki madad kar raha hun

Rahul: kiski , itna mysterious kyun hai ?

Shravan : main chalta hun

Rahul: kuch toh baat hai main pata karke rahunga

Shravan reached and saw Sanchi waiting for him

Shravan : jyada der wait karna padha ?

Sanchi: nahi, par main aapko thanks kehna chahati hun meri madad karne ke liye.

Shravan: that's ok

Sanchi: kya main aapke liye kuch kar sakti hun in return mujhe

Shravan : ehsaan lena pasand nahi , han mujhe maloom hai , but no need , it ok that you have forgiven me

Sanchi: hmm

He left Sanchi at her home and then said, ok as per our deal, we'll not see each other anymore.

AU REVOIR

Sanchi felt something undescribable when she saw Shravan leaving, his back turned . she stood their for a moment seeing him go……….( u can imagine kabhi alvida na kehna playing in the background)

She turned and started moving towards her door

Shravan turned and stopped to watch her go away from him and then he turned again …

Sanchi turned to se him reaching the door of his office

Then suddenly miracle happened they both turned at the same moment

Shravan at his office 's door Sanchi at her gate .

They both looked at each other ……….

God looked at them both staring at each other, winds which were blowing very slowly suddenly picked up .

Shravan started moving towards Sanchi and so was Sanchi moving, they almost reached each other when Rahul came and shouted

Rahul: Shravan Shravan

The spell was again broken

God: why the hell do we have villains in love stories….God also shook his head

Shravan again turned back , a shiver going down his spine, why was he going back, what made him return to Sanchi, why did he feel even now that he wished to go back and hug Sanchi and never let her go………..ugh what am I thinking this is ridiculous , I don't wish to hug Sanchi

He was scared because he didn't understand such feelings but as he went inside the gate he turned and saw that Sanchi who had reached her home was also staring at him.

They both caught each others eye and then they both turned trying to remove the moment between them from their minds

Sanchi: yeh main kya kar rahi thi, kyun main khichi chali gayi Shravan ke paas, kyun hum dono aise mile

Hey bhagwan yeh kya ho raha hai…..

Ab nahi milunghi use kabhi, khud bhi pagal hai mujhe bhi pagal kar dega

God:milna toh hoga , nahi toh kahani kaise aage badhegi

At shravan's office

Rahul: kaun thi who,

Shravan : kaun?

Rahul: jiske liye tu road cross kar raha tha

Shravan : koi nahi

Rahul: wahi ladki toh nahi jo hamare cars ke niche aati rahi hai

Usne tujhe fasa liya na ………..woh ladki

Shravan: USKA NAAM SANCHI HAI(He spoke this a little loudly hence capital letters)

Aur jaisa tu soch raha hai waisa kuch nahi hai

Rahul: toh kaisa hai? Tu kyun ja raha tha uske paas

Tu aaj kal usi ko milne jata hai na office chod ke?

Shravan: who isliye kyunki usko Teri car se chot lagi thi , main uski madad kar raha tha ab nahi milungha use

Rahul: skeptical, dekhte hain,

In his mind- Shravan jaiswal ek ladki ko apni bike pe baithya , hmm milna padhega iss ladki se, waise bhi badi khubsurat hai(leering) Shravan tum hi mujhe isse milwaoghe

God: gayi bhains pani mein offfffff

That night

Dadi: Shravan mujhe tujhse ek kaam hai karega

Shravan: kya dadi bataiye main jarur karunga

Dadi: woh ladki thin a woh jo us din hume mandir mein mili , kya naam tha uska

Shravan enthusiastically- SANCHI

Dadi : looking at him closely , han wahi Sanchi , tujhe bada naam yaad hai uska , han uska no. chaiye mujhe

Shravan: no. kyun chaiye

Dadi: mujhe thoda kaam hai use

Shravan: kya kaam hai

Dadi: tu mera interview le raha hai? Ja nahi batati , seedhe seedhe no. dede mujhe

Shravan: dadi mere paas no. nahi hai uska

Dadi: man hi man hey bhagwan abhi tak uska no. nahi lia iss gadhe ne

Shravan: nahi hai kya karun ab

Dadi: uska ghar tere office ke paas hai na , use keh dena kal ki mujhe ek din milne aa jaye , Sunday sahi rahega .

Shravan:dadi main kyun , kya na

Dadi: abhi tumne kaha tha ki meri amdad karoghe

Shravan : man hi man khush hote hue…….accha thik hai bol dunga, aap keh rahe ho isliye warna

Dadi: jeete raho beta jeete raho……..han beta tere mann mein bhi khushi ke laddu fut rahe honghe

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved your update dear and also thanks for the pm. update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx for d pm ! luved d update!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sweet update! Can't wait for your next part soo... Plz continue soon!! Thanks for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome parts !
Love them !
Great part !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
Uve made my weekend. I was so happy to read 2 updates. Anki yaar, u d best. I love dadi, shes giving shravan a reason to see sachi. I know i say this often but i love God.
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Posted: 14 years ago
great parts
thanks for the pms
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Anku Dear...Its a Awesome update Dear....

Taken Long time to update but great Update ....Really u have given me Gift With This ...

Thanx for the Update...and PM

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