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Shravan: the brat, a fun loving guy, always positive in life , a tad irresponsible but still a loveable person who couldn't hurt a fly

He was the 2nd son of a big business man pratap jaiswal in mussurie. He had a cool loving family

A great grand mother , understanding parents and a loving brother and bhabhi. He never felt the need of anyone else in his life

He was 24 years of age and he thought he knew everything but just one thing eluded him ,true love

But as shravan he was not bothered , pyar bewakoofon ke liye hai

His grandmother used to say to him always : beta har kisi ke liye ek special insaan hota hai jiske aane se zindagi bahut khubsurat ho jati hai ,kyunki jab who special insaan zindagi mein aata hai toh hum poore ho jate hain

Aur us special insaan se hume bhagwan milata hai

Shravan never used to pay attention to these words of his dadi , they were just dreams , he believed that love is stupidity, its all filmy, no bells will ring, why should god choose the best person for me i can do it myself

Sanchi- dreamy girl, she believed utterly in true love , romance was what was shown in dilwale dulhania le jayenghe, she believed one day a handsome prince will come and take her away on his horse

Sanchi had been dealt with bad cards all her life

She had no parents , never knew who were they had been brought up in a shabby orphanage in mussurie

But being a willful girl she won scholarships and did her studies on her own and now recently joined a school as a teacher

Now she was just waiting for Mr. RIGHT to rock her world

And the most important element in the story

God: well we all know about HIM, he is everywhere , but he took special interest in Sanchi's life because he knew he had never been fair to this lovely girl…

And he also knew that the special person , the man sanchi was waiting for, the family she was waiting for is sharavan

So this story is how he made sanchi and shravan fall in love with one another forever

He will be narrating how and why he is doing this and will be commenting on everything

First meeting

Sanchi was walking in a great hurry on the road ,she was late on her first day to school

Sanchi thinking :" hey bhagwan mujhe aaj ke din hi late hona tha , pehli job aur usi din late , off jaldi jaldi chalun warna mera band bajega aaj, principal sir kya sochenge, main aajtak jab tak padhti thi tab toh late nahi hui lekin job lagte hi late ( oh god late on the first day of my job , I have to walk first or what will principal sir think ….i have never been late when I studied in this school but I will be late when I join as teacher )

God: beta maine tumko aaj late hi isliye kiya tha taki tum apne honewale pati ki ek jhalak dekh lo , iab time aa gaya hai ki tumhari saari wishes poori hon ….(I made you late because I want you to meet your love your future husband , it time now that all your wishes get fuldilled)

As sanchi was hurrying along the road a car came at high speeds towards her and before she could react it was upon her but braked just in time

A guy got out advanced and asked

Guy: dekh ke nahi chal sakti kya ,dekha nahi itni badi gaadi aa rahi thi accident ho jata toh(can't you see, such a big car was coming your way what if an accident had happened)

Sanchi: tum log samajte kya ho apne aap ko ek horn nahi maar sakte the meri aakhen ka piche hain main aage dekh ke chalti hun samjhe (what do you think of yourself, can't you use the horn , I have eyes only in front of my face not behind)

They were at the point of arguing when another person climbed out of the car he was shravan

Shravan: madam we are sorry , lekin aapko bhi bich sadak pe nahi chalna chaiye tha ,plz aage se dhyan rakheagah, chal yaar rahul, hume der ho rahi hai, while he was leaving( madam we are sorry but you shouldn't be walking in the middle of the road plz take care in future)

shravan explained to rahul

Shravan to rahul: yaar aise raah chalte logon se nahi ladhte hain, bekar mein din aur dimag kharab hota hai ,( friend you shouldn't waste time talking to such people you'll only get pissed off and whole day will go waste)

Sanchi heard this and felt very angry but decided that she was already late

Sanchi in her thoughts- " yeh bade baap ki bigadi hui aulaad kisi ko kuch samajte hi nahi hain , koi nahi agli baar milega toh dekh lunghi samajta kya hai apne aap ko(what does he think of himself , the rich brat, nest time I'll meet him , I'll show him how dare he)

God—dear child your wish will be fulfilled very soon don't worry

Shravan also sat in the car with his friend and left

Sanchi also made her way

While God looked on smiling…

And then God waved his hand ….

Shravan looked at the rear view mirror and saw Sanchi leaving and in the same moment Sanchi also turned…

They both were looking at each other and both didn't know why

Shravan thinking to himself - abhi bhi yeh ladki bich raaste pe hi chal rahi hai kya hoga iska (this girl is still walking right in the middle of the road , don't know what will happen to her in future)

Sanchi was thinking abhi bhi yeh ladka gaadi itni tez chala raha hai , aaj toh kisi na kisi ka accident karva ke hi rahega (this boy is again driving very fast , today an accident will happen by his hands )

They left …….

And then God appeared

My dear children this is the first of many meetings you'll have till you become one in your souls and then maybe at that time you'll know the purpose of meeting at cross roads

This day will be etched in your minds forever as this is a beginning of a new life for both of you

Second part

Shravan bounded into the Jaiswal mansion, he was very happy.

DAD dad kahan ho aap ? mom dadi bhabhi , where is everybody

Pratap Jaiswal comes out and smiles as he sees his son Shravan Jaiswal the apple of his eye

Madura also comes out of the kitchen with Nidhi while Dadi who was in her room also came out

Shravan at once got hold of Dadi and started making her dance , singing "tune mujhe pehchana nahi jaana main koi anjaana nahi" everyone started laughing and then bhabhi came and tapped Shravan's shoulder

Sharavn kya hua bahut khush hai tu aaj (whats up Shravan you are very happy)

Shravan started dancing with Nidhi , bhabhi aap nahi janti , aaj sab kuch accha aapka yeh devar ab apni hi company jald hi kholne wala hai , my all problems were solved(sister in law I am very happy today is a good day, I have succeeded in launching my own company)

Hearing this Pratap felt sad , he always wanted Shravan to join family business but Shravan had never shown any interest in it. And ultimately Pratap had let go of his dream

Pratap composed himself and asked beta jara khul ke bata (plz tell it all)

Shravan: dad maine aur Rahul ne hamari nayi company jo ki software develop kareghi use incorporate kar diya hai(I and my friend Rahul have incorporated our new company which is into software development)

Ab hum kal se kaam shuru kar denghe(we'll start working tomorrow)

Suddenly Dadi came from behind and stuffed Shravan's mouth with a sweet , she said

Mujhe toh pata hi tha aaj kuch accha hone wala hai aaj subah se hi mann me mere laddu fut rahe the toh maine mangwa liye le kha ( I don't know why but I felt that today is good day so I had brought sweets for everyone)

A servant distributed rest of the sweets

GOD looked on , and then smiled at dadi, she was to be one of the tools who will bring Shravan and Sanchi together. She was a enlighted soul , a person who had believed in only being truthful and good and she was going to bring two souls made for each other together.

Shravan : par aaj ek baat buri hote hote bach gayi, ek bewakoof ladki Rahul ki car ke niche aate aate reh gayi (there was only one blemish on the day , a foolish girl nearly caused an accident with the car)

Bich raste mein aise chal rahi thi ki jaise road usi ki hai and then he shrugged….(she was walking on the road like she owned it)

Dadi : beta use chot toh nahi aayi aur maine kitni baar kaha hai ki Rahul ke sath mat jaya kar who bahut tej gaadi chalata hai tu apni gaad kyun nahi le leta .(son , I hope she was not hurt, why do you travel by rahul's car take your car instead)

Pratap: han beta itni gaadi khadi hain compound mein koi bhi le jaya kar mujhe tumhara dost Rahul pasand nahi hai (yes son there are many cars in the compound take anyone of them I don't like Rahul)

Shravan: papa Rahul mera sabse accha dost hai aur jahan tak car ka sawaal hai main apni hi kamayi se kharidungha (dad Rahul is my best friend and I'll now only travel by the car which I'll buy with my own money)

And then he looks at Dadi and smiles- nahi Dadi use kuch nahi hua lekin…….(nothing happened to her grandmother but..)

Dadi: lekin……kya (what)

Shravan who was just reliving the meeting and how he saw Sanchi walk away from him in the rear view mirror of the car turned and again smiled at Dadi and said

Woh pagal thi Dadi phir wapas road ke bichl mein hi chalne lagi (despite my warning she was again walking right in the middle of the road)

Ab main jake fresh hota hun aur kal ki tyari karta hun ( I'll just go and freshen up and prepare for tomorrow)

Saying this he left for his room

Everyone left for the work they were doing only Dadi was left in the drawing room

She was thinking

Shravan kyun achanak se kho gaya ,usne yeh nahi socha ki shyad us ladki se milne ke baad hi uska din accha hua hai……..kya pata who kaun thi (what was shravan thinking ,it can also be so that because he met this girl his day was made. I wonder who she is.)

He was in so much tension this morning and now suddenly he has been successful.

Shravan 's room

Shravan while changing clothes – why the heck did I tell my family about that girl now they are all worried and pointing fingers at Rahul , although I agree yes he drives fast but it was not all our fault she was also walking right in the middle of the road, off God why am I thinking about her at all

God whispered in his ears- because that girl is made for you she is here to fill that empty place in your heart which you yourself fail to recognize

Shravan suddenly felt a warm feeling in his heart ,as if something had changed suddenly.

A strange feeling befell him he suddenly thought everything is going to change

He shrugged this feeling off, he was a practical person not given to fancies so he just went on doing his regular work , getting everything ready for the first day of his own company

God smiled at him again – Son from now on whatever, whenever you come across your soul mate your day will be as good as this , because you destinies are interlinked and she has come into your life to fulfill you

Mean while what was happening with Sanchi

She was not late to her first day at job something, she had forgotten that on Saturdays the school started a little late she made it on time and whats more was so happlity welcomed by all students and all other members of the faculty

By the time she came home she was feeling very happy

Father D Souza had wished her good luck and blessed her , at the end of her day as she was just leaving the school , he approached her and asked her about her first day at school

Father: So , how did you find your first day at school

Sanchi: Father , you know I didn't think that I'll be able to relate to students or be able to win their trust or do anything at all , but in every class I went everyone welcomed me and I was actually able to teach them connect with the children , I didn't trust myself at all and was so unsure of myself and…

Father: always believe in yourself my child , trust your instincts, someone upstairs is looking out for you , always remember that. Saying this he smiled his enigmatic smile and left

Sanchi remembered all this while walking home.

I never thought I could do this but today I feel I can do anything just anything, jab subah subah us ladke se ladhai hui thi toh laga tha ki saara din ab bekar jayegha lekin kaise na apne aap saara din itna accha ho gaya( in the morning when I had that fight with that boy, I thought that my whole day will go waste but suddenly everything righted itself and it turns out to be one of the best days of my life )

NIGHT Time

Shravan : kal subah subah mandir , dadi ke hath se hi inauguration karvaunga apni company ka aur phir kaam shuru ….hmmmm kal ka din bas meri zindagi ki nayi shuruat hai (first thing in the morning I'll go to temple, tomorrow I'll have my first day of my company and dadi will inaugurate it, tomorrow it will be a new day in my new life)

God: yes child it will be a new beginning in more than one ways,,,,,,,now dream about the future love because very soon all that will matter is her

Sanchi thinking : kal subah subah mandir jaunghi , bhagwan ko Prasad chadhane meri naukri lag gayi , aaj se meri zindagi ki nayi shuruat hui hai ( I'll go to the temple tomorrow to thank God from today onward my new life has started)

God: Yes child your new life has started today as you met your love today for the first time now dream on about your future

Second Meeting

Next morning

Shravan : dad mom hurry up dadi kahan hain ? mandir jaana hai…off chalo jaldi

They reached the temple and saw huge crowds

Shravan: aaj koi tyohar hai kya itni bhid kyun hai (why is it so crowded ,is today any festival?)

Dadi: bhagwan ke ghar roz hi tyohar hota hai beta cha lab chalen (in house of God there is always a festival now lets go)

The whole family climbed the stairs and then proceeded towards the main temple when suddenly

Shravan who was walking very fast and looking backwards also to make his family match his strides collided with a person

Person with who he had collided had fallen down and so had her Prasad 's thali

Sharavan looked down and realized it was a girl , his whole family had also stopped looking at the scene

Shravan : I am so sorry aapko chot toh nahi lagi

That girl looked up and he was jolted because that was the girl from yesterday

Sanchi: oh toh aap hain (oh its you?)

Sharavan : tum …….. tum yahan bhi? (you are even here)

Main toh khamkha hi sorry bol raha tha tumhari hi galti hogi (I said a worthless sorry you don't deserve it , this collision is your fault only)

Sanchi: accha tum piche dekh ke chal rahe the toh meri galti , tej chal rahe the meri galti !!!!!!!!(you were walking looking backwards , walking so fast and it was my fault?)

Shravan : han tumhari galti hai tum dekh ke nahi chal sakti thi kya?(yes its your fault why couldn't you look where were you going)

Pratap: SHRAVAN !!

Pratap comes forward and say to Sanchi :"Beta I am sorry who hume dekh ke chal raha tha islye tumse bhid gaya

Sanchi: uncle aap kyun maafi mang rahe hain koi baat nahi

Shravan : papa aap bhi na

Shravan hurried forward and completed his worship and walked out towards the temple's porch

There he saw Sanchi still doing her parikrama

He watched her she smiled at every person who came in front of her .

Then he himself remembered that he had to do parikrama

He started walking around the temple but in opposite direction.

Soon Sanchi and he came in face to face and due to so many people milling around them they were hurled close together and try as they may they couldn't move

God chortled at the sight

Sharavan tried to move and could , even Sanchi tried but couldn't . they were in a crowd of people and then suddenly frustrated Shravan turned and tried to walk the opposite way and at the same moment Sanchi also but again they were drawn back .

A naughty boy was laughing at them , he had tied Sanchi's dupatta with Shravan 's jacket.

But even before they could react the whole crowd of Jogi baba's came and jostled them , this way both of them were thrown together and because Sanchi's hand had a prasad's thali while Shravan's hand had mobile they were not even able to make their way out, they were being forced to do parikrama together tied up and in between the crowd .(I hope u all can understand what I am trying to picturise)

Jogi BabaS did full 7 parikrama around the temple and so did Sanchi and Shravan with them tied together, God's bells rang with each parikrama completed .drums were beating .

Shravan's family came out after completing their worship and saw the whole scene. They didn't whether to laugh or help them as it was comic , both Sanchi and Shravan were ready to kill each other but were helpless .

Suddenly the parikrama completed and almost by magic the whole crowd pulled out , Sanchi who had been pushed so much that she was almost leaning on Shravan lost her balance and fell only at the last second Shravan held her by waist and saved her.

Third part

Recap- as we have seen that Sanchi Shravan have been made to do seven parikramas around the temple and when the crowd dispersed Sanchi misbalanced and fell and Shravan in order to save her held her by her waist

This act brought them close together and suddenly bells and drums of temple started again .

This was their first eyelock. They were looking into each others eyes ……….

Shravan was holding her still by her waist and then suddenly as all the bells and the drums that had started beating ,they all stopped

This brought Sanchi to her senses and she disentangled herself from Shravan.

This action also brought Shravan to his senses and he also started to pull out of the moment.They untied the knot and then moved towards opposite directions without a word.

Shravan looked back at the receding figure of Sanchi , as he turned back Sanchi turned back and looked over her shoulder towards the back of Shravan walking towards his family.

The bells had started toiling again and the drums were beating again.

They both turned several times only missing each other glances by seconds

So they both were unaware of each other glances but one person Dadi had seen all this and being a person who had a foresight realized that God was pointing to her something.

This was no coincidence. She had seen both of them throwing glances at each other , had felt God's presence around her , saw them doing parikrama together.

Shravan came upto her Dadi!!!!! Chalo na der ho rahi hai aapko hi inauguration karna hai (Dadi lets go you only have to do the inauguration)

Dadi looked into the eyes of her favourite grandchild , his demeanor suggested that he had forgotten the incident which happened just moments ago but his eyes were telling a different story.They had a shadow of something behind the veil of ordinary.

She smiled at him and said lets go.

He walked leading her, and Dadi and thought to herself , beta abhi tu mujhse bhi chupa jayegha ki tujhe achnak kya hua lekin apne aap se toh nahi chupa payegha …….( son, you can hide your feeings from em and but you can't hide it from youself)

Dadi: Sab bhagwan ki iccha hai…(its all God's wish)

They all trouped towards the car.

Sanchi was terrified , what had happened to her for those few moments ,she hurried down stairs , running away from the place of the incident , she started wearing slippers really d=fast but in her haste broke the sandal clasp.she anyways wore them and started limping in search of an auto.

Dadi who came downstairs just then saw her predicament and called her

Dadi : Suno Suno (listen please)

Sanchi turned and saw an old lady coming towards her.

Shravan meanwhile turned and saw that his Dadi was talking to that girl.

He hurried towards them

Dadi: Beta kya hua tum langda rahi ho?(child why are you limping)

Sanchi : kuch nahi aunty who na meri sandal ka clasp tut gaya hai isliey…(oh nothing aunty just that my sandal clasp has broken)

SHRAVAN REACHED THEM

Shravan: chalo dadi(lets go Dadi)

DADI didn't pay attention to him

Dadi: beti kahan rehti ho tum (where do you live child)

Sanchi : ji ji woh mall road ke pass nirmala devi orphanage ke thodi dur pe jo apartments hain wahin(apartments near nirmala devi orphanage at the mall road)

Dadi : arre wah hum bhi wahin ja rahe hain hain chalo mera pota tumko chod dega(how nice we too are going there only , my grandson will take you there)

Shravan was shocked dadi main main

Dadi turned towards Shravan ,kyun puttar tera naya office wahin hai na ab jake keh Nidhi se ki woh Pratap ke sath uski car mein aaye aur hum is ko lekar ghar pahunchayenghe ( Shravan your office is nearby that place only na , ask nidhi to go in pratap's car , we'll take this girl to her home)

Shravan : JI dadi (yes )

In the car

Shravan driving the car and thinking: Dadi bhi Na! He then looked at rear view mirror and saw Sanchi and made faces at her and at that very moment Sanchi was also looking at the mirror and saw and in return made a disgusting face too.

Dadi who was watching this laughed and God who was also there sitting beside Shravan laughed too.

Dadi: Tumhara naam kya hai beti….(whats your name child)

Sanchi : Sanchi

Dadi : Sanchi , bada pyara naam hai, poora naam ? kahan ki ho papa mummy kahan hain kya karti ho sab abato (what a nice name whats your full name ?what do you do , where is your mom and dad)

Sanchi: ji mere papa mummy nahi hain main yahin nirmala devi orphanage mein pali bhadi hun , padhai mein thodi acchi thi toh scholarships ke sath padh lia aur ab yahin Doon school mein English teacher hun( I am an orphas never saw my mom and dad I was brought up in nirmala devi prphange , I am now teaching english in Doon's school)

She said this all in a matter of fact voice without a trace of self pity ,this impressed Shravan who was watching her in the mirror

Dadi took Sanchi's hand and squeezed it : tum bahut bahadur ho beti , accha suno yeh jo mera pota hai na Shravan woh aaj apni company ka inauguration kar raha hai , wahan chalo tumhare ghar se jyada dur nahi hai .( you are very brave my child , my grandson is opening his first company and today is its inauguration you'll have to attend it)

Shravan again made a face and thought : ab dadi ko ise bulane ki kya jarurat thi, and he made a face which was again noticeable by Sanchi in the back seat

Sanchi : dadi who toh family function hai main kaise aa sakti hun?

Dadi: Shravan !!!!!

Sharavan: dekhiye Sanchi meri dadi ka kehna koi nahi taalta aap bhi nahi , aapko aana hoga , main function khatam hote hi aapko ghar chod dunga aapke ( listen Sanchi , nobody says no to my Dadi you'll have to come)

Sanchi was a little disturbed as she didn't want to spend any more time with Shravan than he wanted with her but she could not say no

mean while god is very happy he pats dadi's head

good child how you understand me so well,how can shravan start a new life and not have his future life partner with him at this auspicious occasion , i'll award you one brownie point for today's good work you have done otherwise i would have had to do some magic or create another situation to have sanchi at the inaugration.

5th part

At the inauguration

Not many people were gathered , just few family members , bank people and some other invitees. Shravan looked around for Rahul but Rahul couldn't be seen the mahurat time was getting over

Shravan was approached by Dadi, Shravan start karo sab puch rahe hain (start the function, everyone is waiting)

Shravan: Dadi Woh Rahul nahi aaya hai uske bina kaise (rahul is not here without him how can we )

Dadi : toh use phone karo beta(call him up)

Shravan : HELLO Rahul kahan hai yaar tu , sab intezaar kar rahe hain yahan inauguration pe (rahul where are you everyone is waiting)

Rahul : hain 10 baj gaye kya yaar main abhi jaga bhi nahi thik se , tum log shuru kar do programme main aat a hun saying this he cut the phone(oh no its 10, I am sorry I just woke up you all continue, I'll try to reach as fast as I can)

Shravan looked at his phone angrily and then shut his phone too, Yeh ladka bhi na , aise kaise company chalegi (how will this boy be productive to the company)

He turned and again almost bumped into Sanchi , tum mera picha nahi chod sakti kya jahan jata hun wahan tumse takra jata hun(why do you keep following me, wherever I go I collide with you)

Sanchi : hello kabhi khud dekh ke nahi chalte hain aap aur hamesha dosh mujhe dete hain(you never look where you are going and then blame me)

Shravan : dekho mujhe na tumse behas karne ka koi irada nahi hai , tum yaha aayi hi kyun ho main tumko jaanta bhi nahi aur phir bhi (I don't want to fight you, why did yu come here, I don't even know you)

Maan na maan main tera mehmaan

god: i have called her here and here she'll stay till your inauguration happens so shutup

as if on God's order Dadi appeared and heard every word Shravan said to Sanchi and then twisted his ears

Dadi dadi kya kar rahi ho?(dadi what are you doing)

Dadi : mehmann ke sath aise baat karte hain , agar yeh ladki yahan se gayi toh main bhi chali jaungi toh soch lo!(you talk to guests like this, if this girl goes I'll go to so choose)

Shravan to Sanchi who was trying hard not to smile: Iam sorry , you are very cordially invited to the anaugration of my company

Shravan looking at Dadi : Ab thik hai ab chalen , chalo kaat do ribbon(now lets have the inauguration)

THEY reached the entrance and then dadi lighted the lamp and everyone clapped , Shravan looked around for the scirrors to cut the ribbon when he suddenly remembered that Rahul had taken that responsibility, he went wild

Shravan thinking: ab kya hoga what will people think I'll have to arrange something fast he started looking here and there when suddenly someone pinched him

Shravan : ouch and turned it was Sanchi she was holding a small set of scirrors towards him.

Shravan looked at her she again offered it, he took it and then suddenly smiled his thanks

HE gave this to dadi and she completed the inauguration procedure

Then Shravan gave everyone a tour of his office

Dadi : ab main chalun beta thakan ho rahi hai (I'll leave as I am feeling tired)

Shravan : han Dadi aap log chaliye main yahan sab kaam khatam karke aaungha( yes I'll follow as soon as I finish the work)

Dadi : Beta dhyan se Sanchi ko ghar chod aana (remember to leave Sanchi home)

Shravan : han Dadi chod aaungha(I'll do that)

SAYING THIS DADI LEFT

ONE BY ONE ALL GUESTS LEFT WISHING SHRAVAN LUCK .

HE HEAVED A SIGN OF RELIEF AND THEN HE NOTICED SANCHI LOOKING ALL LOST STANDING BY HERSELF IN THE CORNER

Sharvan : Sanchi , yeh lo tumhari scissors and thanks a lot warna shyad aaj mere company ka inauguration ribbon kaat ke nahi phad ke hota saying this he gave a small smile(thanks for your scirrors or else my inauguration would have been ruined)

Sanchi: its all right uh huh aapki dadi gayi kya?(its all right where is your grandmother?)

Shravan : Han who gayi lekin mujhe strict instructions hain ki main aapko ghar chod dun(she has left but said that I was to leave you home)

Sanchi : uski koi jarurat nahi woh udhar jo aap makan dekh rahe hain na , main wahin rehti hun rent pe (no need I live very near by look)

Saying this she pointed to a small house just opposite his plot

Shravan : hmmm ok,, aap Dadi ko kyun khoj rahi thi, koi kaam tha( u had some work with my grandmother)

Sanchi : who main unko thanks kehna chahati thi bas isliye agar who nahi hoti toh mujeh mandir se yahan tak aane mein bahut pareshani hoti ( I just wanted to thank her for helping me out at the temple today or else it would have been very difficult for me)

HEARING THIS SHRAVAN SMILED AND SAID

Sharvan: lekin car to maine chalayi na pahunchya toh main aapko yahan aap mujhe bhi thanks kar skti ho( you can thank me too, as I drove the car and brought you here)

And then seeing her startled face he laughed

Ok ok main aapki baat Dadi tak convey kardungha(I'll convey the message to my grandmother)

Sanchi looked scandalized and then shrugged her thanks and left.

Shravan stood looking at her

As she was crossing the road a car in fast speed came cruising down the road and almost knocked into her , knocking Sanchi down ,the car braked in front of her.Shravan hurried to her worried if she is hurt

Rahul got out of the car and reached her first, and picked her up roughly

He started shouting at her: jab road cross nahi karna aata toh koshish bhi mat kiya karo meri car ko kuch ho jata toh (if you don't know how to cross a road then don't cross, what if something happened to my car)

Then he recognized her as the same girl from yesterday, " ohh toh aap hain , kya aapne meri gaadi ke niche aake mujhe phasane ka irada hai , target hun kya , he was still holding her roughly by the hand(oh its you, you are targeting me,if you have accident with my car you can earn lots of money that's your plan)

Sanchi was very angry as well she had hurt herself, she tried to take her arm away but was not successful

Shravan reached them and he tried to intervene

Rahul: Shravan dekho vahi ladki, in logon ko mai acchi tarah jaanta hun amir ladkon ki gaadi ke niche apna chota sa accident karvate hain aur phir unse bahut saare paise lootte hain .at this he just roughly pushed her (see it's the same girl as day before yesterday, she must belong to a gang where they get themselves hurt by the car and then take lot of money as compensation)

Sharavan : Nahi Rahul tum galat samaj rahe ho , aise koi baat nahi(rahul you are mistaken its noit like that)

Sanchi was painfully getting up from the ground. Shravan moved forward to help when Rahul held him back, abe kya kar raha hai……tujhe phasa legi , chal chal tu mere sath(what are you doing lets go)

Saying this Rahul manhandled Shravan and took him back to their office

Shravan kept trying to look back and saw Sanchi limping towards her house

Sanchi was feeling like crying, what all was said to her, she was termed as gold digger.and that Shravan , he didn't even clarify

Well why do I expect him too ? after all he was very rude yesterday and even today its only because of his Dadi he is being nice. How come such a brat has such nice family

God is so unfair sometimes. Giving everything to a person who doesn't deserve and nothing to a person who deserves huh

God : I am so sorry child I owe you a lot of happiness for all you have suffered , but you are my responsibility and now your happiness is my mission.

I have been unfair I agree but soon your life will be filled with all sorts of happiness and colours you so deserve

6th PART

THAT NIGHT

Shravan was troubled

He had not at all liked the way Rahul had treated Sanchi and he himself had done next to nothing to help her

She was humiliated in front of him and that also for no cause as well as had gotten hurt and then also because Rahul was driving at full speed

But he hadn't said a word against Rahul, he had let himself be led away while the poor girl was hurt by the car as well as the words

He couldn't sleep, all his night he kept getting vision of Sanchi getting up painfully from the ground

He could also imagine tears in her eyes

Fitfull sleep and then he woke up at 2 in the night, he had dreamed again of Sanchi and todays happening and the last being that he was holding Sanchi by her waist in the temple as it happened in the temple

Shravan: oh God yeh kya tha mujhe ab us ladki ke sapne bhi aane lage, kya hua hamare bich aaj, do din mein itni baar main use mil chukka hun, aakhir mujhe kya ho gaya hai main baar uske bare mein kyun soch raha hun (why am I dreaming of this girl, what happened between us at the temple , in two days I have met her so many times , why am I thinking so much about her)

Shyad isliye kyunki mujhe pata hai ki aaj uske sath jo hua galat hua aur maine uske bare mein kuch nahi kiya (maybe because I know whatever happened today shouldn't have happened )

Use chot lag gayi hogi aur main bas dekhta reh gaya(she got hurt and I couldn't even help her)

Thinking like this he went to the kitchen to get water

As he was taking water out of the fridge he heard his Dadi's room door being opened, he went and checked to see his Dadi standing there ,

Shravan : Dadi kya hua aap itni raat kyun jag gaye?(grandmother why are you awake so late at night)

Dadi : tum bhi toh jag rahe ho beta , maine toh ek sapna dekha aur phir usi ko dekh ke uth gayi( you are also awake why? I just saw a dream that's why I woke up)

Shravan: daravana tha kya?(was it a night mare)

Dadi : nahi beta , accha sapna tha , puchega nahi kya tha?(no it was a very good dream , ask me what was it about)

Shravan : bataoghi khud hi mujhe , main janta hun, chaliye baithye aur bataiye (whether I'll ask or not you'll tell me right,lets sit and talk)

Dadi: maine dekha ki teri shadi ho rahi hai , bade dhoom dham se, bahut khush hai tu, (I saw that you were getting married )

Shravan: bas bas dadi aage mat kaho , main aur shadi , mujhe nahi karni shadi vadi, main nahi bandhna chahata sari umar ke liye kisi ke sath, accha hai aap is sapne ko bhul jao(enough grandmom you know I don't want to get married , it won't happen , you better forget this dream)

Dadi: toh kya tu kabhi shadi nahi karega? Sar umar akela rahega? Tujhe nahi lagta teri zindagi khali khali hai ki tujhe bhi koi chaiye tere har khushi aur dukh baatne ke liye( you won't ever marry , don't you tink your life is a little empty , everyone needs a special person to share their happiness and sorrows)

Shravan smiling: aap ho na meri Dadi(you are there for me )

Dadi: chal hat !!!!!!!! accha yeh bata tu kyun itni der raat jaga hai , tujhe kya hua……..maine apni baat toh bata di ab tu bata( go away, ok now tell me whats keeping you awake so late at night)

Shravan who was smiling suddenly stopped smiling and then said: Dadi mujhse ek galti ho gayi jisse kisi ko chot pahunchi hai( I made a grave mistake grandmother)

Dadi: kya kiya tune ? kisko chot pahunchayi, kya hua khul ke bata(what did you do, whom did you hurt)

Shravan then told her everything

Dadi: yeh tune bahut bura kiya beta , us phool se bacchi ko itna keh gaya Rahul aur tu chup raha , aur use chot lagi hogi ,tune uski bilkul bhi madad nahi ki, mujhe tujhse yeh aasha nahi thi….aisa kaise hone diya tumne Shravan( that very bad Shravan ,I did not expect this from you)

Shravan: dadi pata nahi kyun aaj main chup reh gaya aur ab mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai Sanchi ke bare mein soch soch ke main kaise use sorry bolun Dadi , aur kya karun main?(I don't know why I did that , how should I say sorry to her)

Dadi: tumne galti ki hai tumhi sudharoghe , khud socho. Ab main chali sone tub hi ja aur soch( you should repent your own mistakes)

Shravan also started leaving the room when suddenly

Dadi: SHRAVAN

Shravan: han dadi (yes)

Dadi : tum mujhse poochoghe nahi ki maine kiske sath tumhari shadi hote dekhi(she was smiling in a very mysterious way)(won't you ask about the girl you were getting married to)

Shravan: accha aapne ladki ka bhi chera dekha , par mujhe koi interest nahi sapna tha Dadi bhul jao use( so you saw the girl's face in your dream too, no I don't want to know)

As he turned his heart went Dhak Dhak

Shravan: KAUN THI WHO DADI?(who was she dadi)

Dadi: she turned and said- tum khud jaan jaoghe beta mujhe toh ishara mil gaya hai , tumhe bhi mil jayegha(you'll know yourself soon child)

Shravan : Dadi Dadi

Off yeh ab kuch nahi batayenghi, jaane kise dekh lia hai, kaun hai who, aur isse pehle toh Dadi ko meri shadi ke sapne nahi aaye , phir achanak se kyun

God: that's because my dumbo child your grandmother has realized before you who is your soulmate so she knows and I don't know how much effort I'll have to put up to make you two realize that for youself.hmm this story is going to take a mighty long time to come to track lets see Mr Shravan how you say sorry to Sanchi , it all depends upon that.

7thth part

Shravan woke up with a jump , he had been dreaming about a girl whom he was pursuing and had woken up just when that girl had been about to turn to show her face.

Drat Dadi , unki kal raat ki baton ne mere dimag mein yeh sab nonsense bhar diya warna Shravan jaiswal kisi ladki piche bhage aisa din kabhi nahi ayegha

God: woh din aa gaya hai beta aaj hi ka din hai , jab tum bhagoge ek ladke ke piche he he he (today is the day when you'llrun after a girl)

Shravan: waise main itni jaldi kyun uth gaya , han yaad aaya(why did I wake up so early, oh yes I remember)

He dressed fast and then reached the breakfast table , took his bike keys from the side board and started leaving hurriedly

Nidhi: Shravan kahan ja rahe ho itni subah aur bike kyun car leke jao, itni subha tumhara office nahi khulta hai mujhe pata hai , nashta kar lo (Shravan why are you leaving so early, your office doesn't start so early and why taking bike , take the car, have breakfast)

Shravan : Bhabhi kaam hai important ,ek galti sudharni hai , aaj jaldi jaana hai car leke nahi jaungha bye (very important work plz, I won't take the car)

Saying this he waved and left

Pratap who was coming downstairs heard all this and shook his head , he asked his daughter in law

Pratap: beta yeh ladka kabhi bhi meri di hui cheez kyun nahi leta hai ? bike issne apne paise bacha ke kharidi ab use hi use karta hai nahi toh us ladke Rahul ki car mein ghumta hai, itni car hain hamare pass lekin nahi yeh nahi chalega except jab hum log sath mein nikalte hain (why doesn't this guyever take my help, even bike he brought with his own money)

Nidhi: woh apne aap ko aapke saamne prove karna chahata hai papa (he wants to prove himself)

Pratap: iski kya jarurat hai beta mian kya nahi janta ki kitna kabil hai mera beta ( he doesn't need to do that I know the stuff he is made of)

Accha chodo yeh batao itni subah subha kahan Gaye hain sahabjade(where did he go so early in the morning)

Nidhi: keh raha tha ki galti sudharni hai (he said something about undoing a mistake)

Pata nahi kya ho gaya hai ladke ko( this boy…….!!!!!!)

Shravan was racing his bike , he had to reach before she left home

Yes he reached Sanchi 's home and parked his bike and sat waiting for her a liitle away from the gate of her house

He saw Sanchi coming out of her door , she was limping badly, an old man was following her and he kept saying

Kaka: beta aaj chutti le lo, kitni jayda chot lagi hai halka fever bhi hai, chutti le lo (take a you are holiday dear child , you are badly hurt as well as having fever)

Sanchi: nahi kaka aaj mera dusra hi din hai job ka main aise kaise chutti le sakti hun aap fikra na karo main chali jaunghi (I can't take holiday this is only the second day of my work)

Kaka: beta accha mujhe rickshaw hi le aane do tum use chali jao( I'll call a rickshaw )

Sanchi: kaka main kar lunghi rickshaw , yahan kahan milega , aap bekar pareshan mat ho main dekh lunghi (don't worry I'll manage)

Shravan started his bike and reached Sanchi ,: main aapko chod dun school tak (can I drop you)

Sanchi looked at him in disgust and said: tum yahan , kyun kal ki insult kafi nahi thi kya , yahan kyun aaye ho (why are you here, yesterday's insult was more than enough)

Shravan : dekho Sanchi I am very sorry kal job hi hua , mujhe Rahul ko tumse who sab kehne se rokna chaiye tha par main kuch nahi kar paya I am sorry ( I am sorry, I shouldn't have let rahul speak to you like that)

Sanchi: mr. Shravan aap bhi kam nahi hain shyad aap hi ne parson Rahul se kaha tha ki chote logon se baat nahi karni chaiye, time waste hota hai. Dekhiye plz yahan se chale jaiye

Shravan: I am sorry plz dekho tumhe chot lagi hai main tumko tumhare school tak chod aata hun, plz mujhe maaf kar do

Sanchi: ji nahi mujhe aap ki koi madad nahi chaiye , agar main aapke bike pe baithi toh log kahenghe ki maine aapko phasa lia hai , no thanks plz let me go

Saying this Sanchi started limping forward.

Shravan was frustrated , he could only look and see that she was in bad pain , each step was like and exam to her. He looked at kaka who had been listening to their conversation .

Kaka smiled

Beta main is ladki ko bachpan se janta hun bahut ziddi hai agar ek baar soch leti hai toh badalti nahi apna dimag , koi isse jyada ziddi hoga wahi uska dimag abdal sakt hai

Shravan felt kaka was like challenging him,he looked over at sanhci who was limping ahead and with each step looked as if she would fall down

Shrava n locked his bike and ran behind her

God: dekha bachu kaha tha na ki ladki ke piche bhagega , lo ab bhag aur pakkad le use.

Sanchi was having great trouble walking her leg was paining immensely and with each step the pain was increasing , but the rickshaw stand was a little more futher , she limped on but didn't see the stone which was lying there, she tripped on it and nearly fell when strong arms caught her

Shravan : maine aapko girne se dusri baar bachaya hai , and he smiled

Sanchi: who was in his arms suddenly blushed and then came to her senses

She disentangled herself why was I blushing, she tried to stand up straight when again she put pressure on her hurt leg and that made her fall right again into Shravan's arm who welcomed her again with a smile.

This time he wouldn't let her go

Sanchi: yeh kya kar rahe ho tum , mujhe chodo

Shravan: nahi chodungha jab tak tum mujhe kal ke liye maaf nahi kar deti saying this he held her more tightly

Sanchi tried to struggle, but Shravan didn't let go of her,

Shravan: Sanchi ji jaldi sochiye sab hume dekh rahe hain

Sanchi saw everyone giggling at them both

Sanchi: mujhe chod dijiye plz

Shravan: chod dunga main wahi toh keh raha hun , school tak chod dunga apni bike pe ek baar mujhe maaf kar dijiye

Sanchi: accha thik hai kiya ab mujhe chod dijiye

Shravan let her stand up straight , but didn't let go of her waist and started helping her towards his bike

Sanchi was too mortified to speak

He led her to the bike started it and then signed her to sit at the back

She sat at the back and then put her hand on his shoulder, Shravan turned and smiled at kaka and then started his bike

Shravan stopped the bike at the school gate and Sanchi got off, she was in dilemma at one time she wanted to shout and be angry at him for the scene on the road and on the other hand she felt she had to thank him for the ride as she knew she couldn't get a rickshaw near her house

She stood there unable to decide when Shravan spoke up:thanks mat kahiye , shyam mein keh dijiyega jab main aapko lene aaungha ghar chodne ke liye, aapka school 5 baje band hota hai na aap mujhe yahin milna 5:30 baje , bye see you tata

Saying this he left Sanchi had not come to her senses and then suddenly got what he was saying she started shouting

Sanchi: nahi plz shyam ko mat aana , nahi ………off kya ladka hai kabhi insult karta hai kabhi,madad karta hai. Bhagwan bachaye aise insaan se mujhe

God:nahi beta main isse tujhe nahi bacha sakta ….

Shravan had stopped a little ahead and saw Sanchi till she had safely limped inside the school gate

He smiled at himself and then sped off to his office

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Posted: 14 years ago
Excellent writing. Keep up the exciting story.
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9th part

Evening

Shravan duly reached the school gates at 5:30 but didn't see Sanchi, he was waiting for her getting worried that she might have left when he saw her coming and he could see her limping slowly towards the gate . pain was etched out in her face , but she was smiling, she was surrounded by kids and they were all yapping around her , teacher ji yeh, mam who and so on

Shravan inspite of himself smiled

She came to the gate and then kissed every child goodbye, then she saw Shravan .she grimanced and started walking in opposite direction

Shravan sped upto her, arre aap mujhe thankyou nahi bolenghi kya?(won't you thank me)

Sanchi: dekhiye plz aap chale jaiye, main koi misunderstanding nahi chahti, aapki dadi ne meri kal bahut madad ki aur aaj subah aapne main yeh ehsaan kaise utharunghi mujhe nahi maloom par mujhe kisi ka ehsaan lena accha nahi lagta, aap chale jaiye main manage kar lunghi plz ( I don't want any misunderstanding and nobody should start blaming me that I have trapped you, I can manage fine by myself)

Shravan: dekhiye main bas apni kal ki galti ke liye sharminda hun aur aapko chot lagi hai isliye aapki madad karna chahata hun, mera aisa waisa koi irada nahi hai, aur jahan tak ehsaan ki baat hai aap mujh par bahut bada ehsaan karenghi agar mere sath wapas chalkar aap yeh jata den ki aapne mujhe maaf kar diya hai, jahan tak meri dadi ka sawaal hai who aapko bahut pasand karti hain .( I feel sorry for what happened yesterday, I'll feel happy if you will forgive me)

Sanchi : agar main aaj aapke sath chali toh aap phir mujhe pareshan nahi karenghe na?(if you help me now, you'll not trouble me further)

Shravan: maine toh kabhi aapko pareshan nahi kiya , lekin han ab aapse takra kar aapko dosh nahi dunga saying this he smiled ( I have never troubled you earlier , but if by chance we collide again I'll not blame you)

Sanchi also smiled and Shravan was struck by how beautiful she looked while smiling.

Sanchi: chaliye (ok lets go)

Shravan had not gotten out of the spell of Sanchi's smile

He somehow led her to the bike and started the bike in a daze .

Only when they reached her home could he behave a little normal,

Sanchi: thanks a lot,

Shravan: huh uh han sure

Sanchi turned but was pulled back , she looked back and saw her dupatta had been ensnared by the bike,Shravan saw that and started to help out she again walked forward and was again held back and this time her dupatta was caught in his watch

And he was looking at it like he had seen a ghost

She crept forward and started to remove the dupatta and then so did Shravan and their hands touched

A electric shock went through both their backs and both were startled they looked at each other eyes and remained as they were for very long, holding each others hand .

A passing car honked and broke the magic spell which had been cast on them

Sanchi took hold of dupatta and said: thanks and then limped back

Shravan was left staring at her

He somehow made his way back to his office and sat down at his desk

His reverie was broken by a call

Shravan:Hello

Rahul: sorry yar aaj bhi nahi aa paya main kya karun kaam tha ( iam sorry I couldn't come to the office)

Shravan felt anger shooting up

Shravan: Rahul yar company aise nahi chaleghi, mujhe software development aata hai par marketing toh tumhe hi karni hai aur clients ko bhi tumhi jante ho , main nahi, plz ab regularly aana shuru …

Rahul: bas Shravan dekho tum mere boss nahi ho samjhe main jab chaunga tab aaunga tum mat bhulna ki yeh company mere paise se khuli hai agar maine paise nahi dale hote toh tum apne dream ko goodbye keh dete

Shravan : Rahul main toh bas yeh kehna chahta tha ki ab company ko successful karna hai hume

Rahul: thik hai main kal aungha office

Shravan kept the phone down, he wished that he didn't have to depend upon Rahul for the work, but he didn't want to take money from dad, mujhe toh who hamesha hi mujhe Saurabh bhaiya se kam samajte hain lekin main bhi dikha dena chahata hun ki main bhi kar sakta hun

Thinking these thoughts he leaned back on the chair and glanced out of the window, he could see sanchi's home from this window , he could see her also.

She was standing on the porch giving water to the plants and by the looks of it she was either singing or talking to herself, but from this far too Shravan could make out that she was smiling.

She is a very sweet girl………….what am I thinking she is not a sweet girl she is just any other regular girl

Off yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe

Khair ab toh picha chut gaya who bhi mujhse nahi milna chahati aur aaj maine use school drop kar diya meri zimmedari poori bas

Hey bhagwan bas ab phir kahin na takrayen hum log

God: how can this be possible ,you have to meet her again and again till you become each other's for ever.

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i will keep saying it again and again... I love the GOD angle in ur FF. 👏it was amazing! thanks and keep it up :)
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Originally posted by: jahnvi.angel10

i will keep saying it again and again... I love the GOD angle in ur FF. 👏it was amazing! thanks and keep it up :)



I agree.
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Posted: 14 years ago
love it...wonderful job atikna 👏

eagerly waiting for next one!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Excellent !! you are really a good writer ! keep it up
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