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Posted: 14 years ago
Great great!! It's actually amazing watching shravan gradually falling for sanchi (which u know he is).
Amazing!!
Just a little suggestion if u don't mind, it would be nice if u put uf a recap of what happened in the last part...it will keep us on the track and help us pick up the following part in much better way:)[/B][B]
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Posted: 14 years ago

recap- shravan feeling guilty about sanchi, dadi getting dreams that sanchi and shravan got married

7th part

Shravan woke up with a jump , he had been dreaming about a girl whom he was pursuing and had woken up just when that girl had been about to turn to show her face.

Drat Dadi , unki kal raat ki baton ne mere dimag mein yeh sab nonsense bhar diya warna Shravan jaiswal kisi ladki piche bhage aisa din kabhi nahi ayegha

God: woh din aa gaya hai beta aaj hi ka din hai , jab tum bhagoge ek ladke ke piche he he he😉😆😃😛 (today is the day when you'llrun after a girl)

Shravan: waise main itni jaldi kyun uth gaya , han yaad aaya(why did I wake up so early, oh yes I remember)

He dressed fast and then reached the breakfast table , took his bike keys from the side board and started leaving hurriedly

Nidhi: Shravan kahan ja rahe ho itni subah aur bike kyun car leke jao, itni subha tumhara office nahi khulta hai mujhe pata hai , nashta kar lo (Shravan why are you leaving so early, your office doesn't start so early and why taking bike , take the car, have breakfast)

Shravan : Bhabhi kaam hai important ,ek galti sudharni hai , aaj jaldi jaana hai car leke nahi jaungha bye (very important work plz, I won't take the car)

Saying this he waved and left

Pratap who was coming downstairs heard all this and shook his head , he asked his daughter in law

Pratap: beta yeh ladka kabhi bhi meri di hui cheez kyun nahi leta hai ? bike issne apne paise bacha ke kharidi ab use hi use karta hai nahi toh us ladke Rahul ki car mein ghumta hai, itni car hain hamare pass lekin nahi yeh nahi chalega except jab hum log sath mein nikalte hain (why doesn't this guyever take my help, even bike he brought with his own money)

Nidhi: woh apne aap ko aapke saamne prove karna chahata hai papa (he wants to prove himself)

Pratap: iski kya jarurat hai beta mian kya nahi janta ki kitna kabil hai mera beta ( he doesn't need to do that I know the stuff he is made of)

Accha chodo yeh batao itni subah subha kahan Gaye hain sahabjade(where did he go so early in the morning)

Nidhi: keh raha tha ki galti sudharni hai (he said something about undoing a mistake)

Pata nahi kya ho gaya hai ladke ko( this boy…….!!!!!!)

Shravan was racing his bike , he had to reach before she left home

Yes he reached Sanchi 's home and parked his bike and sat waiting for her a liitle away from the gate of her house

He saw Sanchi coming out of her door , she was limping badly, an old man was following her and he kept saying

Kaka: beta aaj chutti le lo, kitni jayda chot lagi hai halka fever bhi hai, chutti le lo (take a you are holiday dear child , you are badly hurt as well as having fever)

Sanchi: nahi kaka aaj mera dusra hi din hai job ka main aise kaise chutti le sakti hun aap fikra na karo main chali jaunghi (I can't take holiday this is only the second day of my work)

Kaka: beta accha mujhe rickshaw hi le aane do tum use chali jao( I'll call a rickshaw )

Sanchi: kaka main kar lunghi rickshaw , yahan kahan milega , aap bekar pareshan mat ho main dekh lunghi (don't worry I'll manage)

Shravan started his bike and reached Sanchi ,: main aapko chod dun school tak (can I drop you)

Sanchi looked at him in disgust and said: tum yahan , kyun kal ki insult kafi nahi thi kya , yahan kyun aaye ho (why are you here, yesterday's insult was more than enough)

Shravan : dekho Sanchi I am very sorry kal job hi hua , mujhe Rahul ko tumse who sab kehne se rokna chaiye tha par main kuch nahi kar paya I am sorry ( I am sorry, I shouldn't have let rahul speak to you like that)

Sanchi: mr. Shravan aap bhi kam nahi hain shyad aap hi ne parson Rahul se kaha tha ki chote logon se baat nahi karni chaiye, time waste hota hai. Dekhiye plz yahan se chale jaiye

Shravan: I am sorry plz dekho tumhe chot lagi hai main tumko tumhare school tak chod aata hun, plz mujhe maaf kar do

Sanchi: ji nahi mujhe aap ki koi madad nahi chaiye , agar main aapke bike pe baithi toh log kahenghe ki maine aapko phasa lia hai , no thanks plz let me go

Saying this Sanchi started limping forward.

Shravan was frustrated , he could only look and see that she was in bad pain , each step was like and exam to her. He looked at kaka who had been listening to their conversation .

Kaka smiled

Beta main is ladki ko bachpan se janta hun bahut ziddi hai agar ek baar soch leti hai toh badalti nahi apna dimag , koi isse jyada ziddi hoga wahi uska dimag abdal sakt hai

Shravan felt kaka was like challenging him,he looked over at sanhci who was limping ahead and with each step looked as if she would fall down

Shrava n locked his bike and ran behind her

God: dekha bachu kaha tha na ki ladki ke piche bhagega , lo ab bhag aur pakkad le use. 😉😆😃😛😉😆

Sanchi was having great trouble walking her leg was paining immensely and with each step the pain was increasing , but the rickshaw stand was a little more futher , she limped on but didn't see the stone which was lying there, she tripped on it and nearly fell when strong arms caught her

Shravan : maine aapko girne se dusri baar bachaya hai , and he smiled

Sanchi: who was in his arms suddenly blushed and then came to her senses

She disentangled herself and was blushing, she tried to stand up straight when again she put pressure on her hurt leg and that made her fall right again into Shravan's arm who welcomed her again with a smile.

This time he wouldn't let her go😉😆👏

Sanchi: yeh kya kar rahe ho tum , mujhe chodo(leave me)

Shravan: nahi chodungha jab tak tum mujhe kal ke liye maaf nahi kar deti saying this he held her more tightly👍🏼 (i'll not till you say that you've forgiven me)

Sanchi tried to struggle, but Shravan didn't let go of her,

Shravan: Sanchi ji jaldi sochiye sab hume dekh rahe hain😆😆😆😆(everyone is watching us)

Sanchi saw everyone giggling at them both 😆

Sanchi: mujhe chod dijiye plz

Shravan: chod dunga main wahi toh keh raha hun , school tak chod dunga apni bike pe ek baar mujhe maaf kar dijiye (i'll leave certainly i'll drop you till school and then leave)


Sanchi: accha thik hai kiya ab mujhe chod dijiye (ok then as you wish)

Shravan let her stand up straight , but didn't let go of her waist and started helping her towards his bike

Sanchi was too mortified to speak

He led her to the bike started it and then signed her to sit at the back

She sat at the back and then put her hand on his shoulder, Shravan turned and smiled at kaka and then started his bike

Shravan stopped the bike at the school gate and Sanchi got off, she was in dilemma at one time she wanted to shout and be angry at him for the scene on the road and on the other hand she felt she had to thank him for the ride as she knew she couldn't get a rickshaw near her house

She stood there unable to decide when Shravan spoke up:thanks mat kahiye , shyam mein keh dijiyega jab main aapko lene aaungha ghar chodne ke liye, aapka school 5 baje band hota hai na aap mujhe yahin milna 5:30 baje , bye see you tata (don't say thanks, say it altogether after i have dropped you home tonight after school, your school gets over at 5 right see you then)

Saying this he left Sanchi had not come to her senses and then suddenly got what he was saying she started shouting

Sanchi: nahi plz shyam ko mat aana , nahi ………off kya ladka hai kabhi insult karta hai kabhi,madad karta hai. Bhagwan bachaye aise insaan se mujhe (no plz don't come , what a boy oh god save me )

God:nahi beta main isse tujhe nahi bacha sakta ….😆😉😆😉😛

Shravan had stopped a little ahead and saw Sanchi till she had safely limped inside the school gate

He smiled at himself and then sped off to his office

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow see i was soooo anxious for d next part . read it bfore i got d pm . awesome update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanx 4 pm. Ha ha both of them r so stubborn. Love it. Gr8 update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update keep it up! very cute update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ankita......very very cute....this Shravan is also very nice....though very mature n responsible he has a good sense of humour. Really love the way u narrate the story.....that hug was so cute....even a light mischief on the part of Shravan.....n Sanchi stubborn yet she likes it.....very nicely conveyed by u...thanx for the PM..eagerly waiting for ur next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
i love shravan and saachi of this fanfic, ankita....esp shravan...he looks like the perfect guy every girl dreams of....loving the way this story is turning out...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
very soon im going to run out of words in my dictionary to praise you! you've created such realistic characters! all i can say is 'kudos to your thought process'😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Soooooo sweettttt!!
Loveee the part.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
Luv the update thanx for the pm luv how the story is gowin plz carri on👍🏼

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